Can't wait to see how this turns out!
And she is sooo jealous.
Loving it. Can't wait for an update!Author's Response: aww, thank you so much :)
summers feelings towards everything are explained in the next chapter (if i write it right, that is).
update will be soon,
ellie :) xx Report Review
YES!!! I love it.
Siriusly (see what I did there) if they don't end up together as a real couple, I'll cry.
And Amos can just sit in the sunset and watch.
Update soon, please.
By the way, this is extremely well written and I love it.
Can you tell?Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you love it! :) Report Review
Very interesting! I'm looking forward to hearing more about Molly and Andrew and Connie's relationship because it looks like a good story. Also, I really liked the way you made Connie's feelings about James' new best friend very realistic. I could see her reacting and it was well-written and believable which is the best when it comes to writing relationships. Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review, hopefully their relationship will develop well over the course of the story, Being replaced is painful :) xx Report Review
Wow. That was rough. And by that I mean I literally almost cried in the middle of the crowded library. Bravo. This was exceptionally well written and the emotion was raw and real. Write more! Report Review
Yay! I love this story. Definitely one of the stories that I've been reading and hoping for it to be updated...like, everyday! Loving Seth and Candice...even if they're just friends...and I really want to see Candice and James together, even though I think Ettie is a nice girl and everything. But it's Candice and James, and that's how it should be. :) Anyway, update soon, please!Author's Response:
Hopefully the next update will be soon! :) ahah, they're awesome friends ;) they'll have moments together :) ahah, they are cute together we'll just have to wait and see what happens :P
Thaank you for the review! :) Report Review
I really like the first chapter. Definitely interested in reading more about what happened two years ago and all of the tension between Connie and James. Update soon, pretty please?Author's Response: I'll try, I'm glad you like it :) Report Review
As per usual a great chapter. And I personally like the dialogue between James and Autumn. I also liked that Autumn stood up for herself a little bit. It needed to happen and now that it has, I hope that Dom will begin to realize that Autumn is a good person and shouldn't be treated as an after thought. Anywho, I really enjoyed it and I will wait *patiently* for the next chapter...(:Author's Response: Thank you! Autumn surprised even me by stepping up there, then again... she WAS in a very bad mood. More on that later, I guess... and I think very soon DOm will be acutely aware od everything thats going on :)
-AC Report Review
Loved it! I can't wait to see more between Stella/James...and I also LOVE Cameron. Can we get more of that too? Update soon, please!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :) and glad you like Cameron, he's one of my favourites :) I will update asap!! x Report Review
I love it! This is seriously a fantastic story. I'm very interested in seeing where the Albus/Stella plan is going to go. It's hilarious the way you write Stella as well as all the other characters though I do feel bad for her at times, especially where James is involved. Come on, Potter!! Haha, but seriously, this was fantastic and I can't wait until next chapter!! :)Author's Response: So glad you like it :) and thank you! I'll update as soon as possible! x Report Review
Excellent chapter! I'm really looking forward to reading more about this girl that seems to have James speechless. She's a strong character and I hope she sticks around! Update soon, please. :) Also, I'm glad that you've given James a friend that is a girl and not a 'girlfriend.' It really adds some dynamic to the story and makes James more than just the player that we all know and love. Excellent chapter!Author's Response: Well for a start I'm glad you like Carlotta *giggles* She'll be sticking around, no worries, there's lots more to come from her. I like that you appreciate Brigid, too :) Thank you so so much for your reviews, they make me want to update straight away! :P Chapter five is written and ready to go, I'll probably post it over the weekend, so keep an eye out! Thanks again :) Report Review
I really enjoyed the family interactions in this chapter. Very believable and really funny. Can't wait to read more! And to find out who James' love interest will be!!Author's Response: I'm glad you like how I portray the characters; it's always good to know you're doing a job well :) James's love interest is coming up, never fear! Her first appearance is in chapter 4, which will be up soon. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I really like this and I'm excited to read something from James' point of view. It really gets over looked, the idea that you can write from a boy's point of view, and you do so really well in this story. Excited to read more!Author's Response: It's funny, I seem to write more from a guy's perspective than a girl's, which is odd... Haha. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you like it so far! :) Report Review
I loved this! It added so much more to Grace, but not only just in how I understood her, but to how James understands her as well. Really an enjoyable chapter. And have I mentioned how much I love James/Grace as a pairing! Let's skip ahead to that, k? But seriously, I can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be patient on the pairing. :) Update soon, please!Author's Response: I love James/Grace too! But we'll get there, maybe... possibly... well, one day? Theres a whole lot more of Grace coming your way soon enough.
Next chapter over half written - thanks for reviewing! :D Report Review
I love this! Sirius and Lily certainly are insane and like her last name, I really would like to punt Lucy for making poor Jamesie miserable. Marlene has to be the most sane of everyone though and that's saying something with these loons running around (and I mean that lovingly, of course). Update soon, please! I can't wait to see what happens next and how everything goes. :)
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I really enjoyed this! I'm definitely interested in more of their story and how they started out (James and Amelie, I mean) and where Rachel is fitting into all of this, but I'm glad you gave us some of the break-up in this chapter. Please, update soon!
Side note: Do you say Elie, like Ellie, or is it more Eli?Author's Response: You say it like Ellie, although I suppose the proper saying would be more like Eli (if she were in France, I think this is how they would pronounce it.) I'm glad you like it, at this point, I've actually written more flashback scenes than the plot, which I know, is very very bad. They're background story is very important though, it's the foundation for their future ;D Report Review
Uhm, well, I certainly felt delirious while reading that. I wonder what's happening to Bee? Hopefully nothing too terrible. I love how blunt she is. This chapter was perfect. Update soon, please!Author's Response: Haha thanks, and I'll try! I hope the chapter wasn't too confusing... the next one explains what happened but I might need to make it less vague Report Review
So, this is really good. I'm definitely curious to see what the 11th reason she should go with him is (even though, it's James Potter, and who could resist ;)) and you should definitely update soon. I love Rory's personality and her character so please, don't change it. :) 10/10Author's Response: Aww, thank you! This review makes me so very happy. (I know, right? Not even Rory can resist his charms...or can she? Hrrmmm.) I will do my best to update soon, hopefully if I can find the time. And I'm so glad you like her! She may experience some character development and growing pains, but other than that, she'll always be the same fabulous Rory. (: Thank you so much for the fuzzy, heart-warming review! Report Review
Yay! I'm so glad you updated this. It was the perfect going back to school present. Really though, I'm so glad that Lily and Eric are broken up and Lily and Luke can finally start to be together, even if it is secretive right now. So, update soon, please since you left us with a cliffhanger and all. :)
10/10Author's Response: Ahh now that I am back to school I really wish it was still summer, my life has been completely nuts, third year of university is killing me. Hopefully an update will be soon, I really am trying! Thank you so much for the review!
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Okay, I have read this whole story in like four hours and just as I go to press the 'next' button there are no more chapter! I'm so sad! Seriously, though, you have got to write more. This story is generally hilarious and I love reading it. I've literally laughed out loud on more than one occasion. I love Ivy and even though I'm an avid Sirius Black fan, I'm really a fan of Regulus as well. Can't decide who I'm rooting for more. So, please, let's get an update going, mkay? I need to read more. :)
10/10 Report Review
This is seriously good. I'm really liking how Bollie is just kind of like whatever about things that most characters in stories obsess over (clothes, appearance, etc.) and like really has a personality and focusses on the bigger picture. I also like how James is such a sweetie when it comes down to it. Update soon, mkay?Author's Response: I'm glad you like it XD
Its really fun to write a character who's more real, and I'm having a lot of fun developing her personality. Keep reading! Report Review
I loved this! It's so funny and Beatrice is such a good character. I can't wait to see more about her and her interactions with Sirius (who is ridiculously swoon worthy, thank you for that) in the next chapter. Update soon, pretty please!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I already have the next chapter in the cue, but sadly there isn't really any Sirius action... I just need to add more background info and then there will be loads of it. After all, Sirius does love a challenge. Report Review
Yay! I've been waiting for a kiss and that scene was just perfect. So often you read a story where they 'almost' kiss and then something happens and the other person just lets them walk away. But I LOVE the way that you played this scene out. Can't wait for another update! Please do so soon!Author's Response: Thanks! Would YOU let James Potter walk away when he almost kissed you? Ahha, I wouldn't. Thanks again, and hopefully the update will be real soon :) Report Review
Yes! This chapter was amazing. I'm speechless. Best line ever:
"It didnít take long for Violence to take her bloody seat in all of our hearts, her queenly crown made of the thorns that prodded us into action more and more as the seconds trickled by."
Literally loved that! The relationships these characters have, their teamwork and how they're coming together, and the friendship between Sirius and Kylie (as well as their romantic relationship) is so amazingly written. Update soon, please? I'm so excited to find out the rest of the match!
10/10 :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you liked that bit - I almost forgot that I wrote it!
Everyone's relationships are growing more and more as time passes, which is kind of how it happens in real life. Kylie and Sirius will be no exception - they just might have some bumps along the way.
I will try to update soon, but my computer just died, so it might be a while before I manage to post something again. Report Review
I really, really like this. I was looking for something new to read while waiting for my other favorites by you to be updated. Came across this amazing story. Please, update soon. I'm really interested in Autumn and her relationship with Dom as well as the new relationship that she's making with James (even if they have just 'properly' met.Author's Response: Thank you! I really love this story at the moment. I'm just really into it, and I love that feeling. hopefuly it will last!
Next chapter is in the queue now. Yayayay! Report Review
This is going to get so very good in just a matter of moments, isn't it? Not that this isn't amazing already, but I can just see it getting so intense and awesome! Update soon, pretty please?Author's Response: Well, that's my plan! Intense and awesome and brilliant. Thanks for reviewing! :D Report Review
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