wow! you are really brilliant
awesome plot. . .love it!
pls update soon
~apurvaa Report Review
yaay! finally they have made it unhidden!! :)
your New plot is awesome!!! loved it looking forward to more :)
~ApurvaAuthor's Response: YaY I know finally!!! And I'm really happy you like the new plot. I was/am really afraid that everyone who has been reading my story from the very beginning won't like the new changes...of course I didn't have a choice :( but I just don't want to lose any readers and fans of my story because of the changes. So I really happy that you will still be reading it. :) Report Review
u really r bloody brilant!! :)
i literally cried reading abt hermione's story poor girl had to go through so much :'/
that painting she has done is awesome!!!
i did love to beta ur story but i hve never been a beta before
update soon! :)
~apurvaAuthor's Response: you are so nice to me! email me at "jareth sara fae@ yahoo .com" (no spaces) with subject line "HPFF BETA" and we'll talk. plus, i can send you photos of her room - sorta and dresses and anything else you may want to see
can't wait to read more:-)
~apurva Report Review
did hagrid call the DA members??
nice chapter i feel very sorry for hermione :( its not fair to her
hope to see more of draco in next chapter
~ApurvaAuthor's Response: Hello(:
It's a dinner party. but now that you mention it, several of the invites were sent to DA members.
Hermione is dealing with a lot, isn't she?
There will be more Draco for the next several chapters(;
Thanks for the review:D Report Review
Awesome story! :) nice preview too now i can't wait to read the next chapter!! update soon
i think there is gonna be hell a lot of drama at hagrid's place
Poor poor Hermione getting confronted by Ginny
i just hope she doesn't get in trouble with draco
~ApurvaAuthor's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I'm glad you liked the preview, I can't wait for that chapter to get validated! I enjoyed writing it a lot:D 18 is already in the quere(:
There will be drama, I'll already tell you that(;
I know, it's so sad, will she tell or not?
Hope you continue to enjoy it, thanks for the review:D Report Review
Nightmare Revisited! god i think i m still in tht nightmare.
i really hope this dream doesnt come true both her brothers are soo sweet n protective
~ApurvaaAuthor's Response: message me on aim if you have it. esaperanafae
i need you as a beta Report Review
well first off u are a AWESOME writer!! really! i just love ur work
WOW Masquerade ball didnt disappoint me at all it was bloody awesome loved every bit of it
to forget a ball which was to happen tomo well its hermione! she forgets everything wen she is into a book
Tht journal entry was nice!! of course i saw the hint u hve been droping it everynow and then but i liked the way u played it to confuse us yes ur editor is right u r cruel but i know hu she means!!! YAY!! :)
The dance was brillant and the idea to disguise was cool and the use of middle names so noone will recoganise them was superb!!
I think after Hermione turned a Zabini she and drama go hand in hand lol :)
i think her nightmare will return but her knight in shining armour will save her!!
Brandon and Blaise are talking abt what i hve been guessing from the beginning!
I really hope tht the golden trio reunite will they??
i was thinking that u forgot about the Parkinson twins but no! u just had to bing them in full on like tht. they deserved wht they got i hoped they will be expeled :(
Hermione is gonna marry Draco :):)
am i right???
~ApurvaaAuthor's Response: you are so far ahead of everyone my friend! let me know if you want to be a beta, im looking for one Report Review
To fly. well the way u described hermiones feeling and thoughts i felt as if i was the one who was flying n not her it felt soo real!
tht dream was awefull poor girl!
draco is sweet and awesome as ever. can wait to read abt the ball!!Author's Response: i love writing deeper feelings, i think it helps draw readers in, so to hear you say its working makes me feel awesome! Report Review
Nice chap!! :) and u did justice to the girls as well as the chapter title :)
I loved the way draco asked hermione out!!! she doubts whether or not having strong emotions for draco!!! ohhh pls tht girl is head over heeel for him i just think she is hving a hard time just excepting it yet
ginny's dialogue was awesome everyone but u two knew
i loved everyones dress
as for the relationship between the lioness and the dragon its going to turn pretty well!! with the prophecy saying it and all ;)
~ApurvaaAuthor's Response: i love how you dissect my chapters, it really helps and makes me feel awesome. Report Review
Its been really a long time i read ur story m sry for that... i promise to read all the chapters and also review them..
U r just brilliant.. just love ur work!!
i like the way u played hermione's reaction on hearing the lose of her foster parents or rather her mom
Tht song was really nice
i love the young Drakey!!! :) he is soo sweet and the portrial of the whole memory was nicely done
i luv how draco comforts hermione and how they display their emotions preety cool
Ginny and Blaise! really?! i like tht pair:)
ha ha book on how to interpret girls ha ha really??
u know it true tht u can say wen someone has a crush on someone else but wen it comes to urself its..well u cant say if the one u like likes u..
Awww it was sweet of draco to say such things to hermione at the last part
looking fwd for more
P.S lovely pics cya in the next chap ;)Author's Response: you are amazing! so dedicated and nice! thanks so much for being a constant name on my review pages Report Review
Nice story i liked it pls update soon Report Review
Ahhh..this is one of my favourite plot hermione not being a Granger but a Zabini :)
Though a short chapter it was to the point a very nicely written!!
i hope u intend to continue the story and get loadds of super cool ideas...:)
i cant wait to read more
pls update soon!!:)
~ApurvaAuthor's Response: Hi.
I dont think i will be updating soon, as i dont have internet right now.
Ive got three chapters ready, so that might be a good enough reason for the people to kill me.
thanks for the review.
Gabula Report Review
Nice chapter!! i like it... and i liked ur brief abt the story
but i think i will hve to wait to see how u unfold it
nice going! :)
~Apurvaa Report Review
I just Got one word WOW!
ur work is awesome...i love the plot and the way u hve explained...but one thing is bothering me draco says after biting hermione tht the rest of the steps she will hve to do willingly but draco has a control over her so can't he just make her do wht he wants her to do???
won't hermione ever hve her own will? n just be controlled by him??
i just cant wait to read more!!! :)
pls update soon
~Apurva Report Review
ur other story hermione and the beast was awesome!
this story is super cool so far
the suprise is Hermione is Pregnant again rite?!
can wait for the next chap
~apurva Report Review
ha ha ha ha i dont seem to stop laughing after reading the last few lines! :):)
A CONTRACEPTIVE CHARMS? gods it was so cruel of u to let the situation hang there n end the chapter! :(
why the hell did he do this dindn't he want a heir. OMG!! now he willl hve to endure the wrath of HERMIONE GRANGER!!
poor guy i dont think he saw this coming his way huh?
now i CAN'T wait to read the next chapter hope its up soon!
u r a brilliant writer n ur plot is bloody awesome!
~Apurva Report Review
sry was not in town so couldn't review it soon!!:( well i don't hve to comment about your way of writing u r so so awesome i hve no words to describe Confrontation?? nice chapter name!
AGAIN! When did he become Draco?!--i like the way u emote Hermione's emotions
"His curious glance turned…hurt, then angry, then a smirk replaced everything. He sauntered over and whispered in my ear.'I know your secret…Hermione.'Then he walked out the door and into the rest of the castle."-- wow nice flow of emotion n expression loved it:) i knew her secret too:) lol.
“Hermione Granger has a crush!” Ginny meant it as a whisper, but it came out a little loud.-- this was the BEST ha ha ha
U know i really thought Ron n Harry will come around n understand hermione but no after all she went through all the suffering and all Ron had to treat her that way she really i mean REALLY didn't deserve the slap guys r so Dum!! poor girl cried so much!!
Draco is so so swt!!! Minerva and Albus!! well Thats nice... i really never thought of them together but its nice:)
I TOLD U I GUESSED FRM THE BEGINNING *grins* that Draco and Hermione are engaged! :)yaayy!!!
The old flashback was also very nice!! I never expected her to curse Harry or Ron But I like it!!well it was Way too Slytherin of her but that cool!!
Well as for Sparkling between The Ferret and the Gryffindor princess Definitely!!!
Parkinson Twins hummm Well its gonna be a hell of a drama rite?
LUV ur WORK!! and ur pics were awesome too:)
~Apurva~Author's Response: Lol, i thought i'd be a good name, since more than once is there the outbreak of a possible fight.
Thanks, I just think "what would i do in that situation if i was Hermione?" and that's what comes out, lol.
I thought that it'd be a good idea to have him show a moment of vulnerablilty, just ot show he is changed.
Lol, thanks, my friends have done it to me before, lol. Seeing as i have a friend EXACTLY liek Ginny, i thought it'd be funny to put in.
Oh i know, but the story isn't over yet.
I love the new Draco
Oh, i have always pictured Minny and Al togetehr, they are just hte perfect pair really.
It doesn't say that in the chapter!! dont get ahead of me! lol, its not fair to everyone else.
I'm glad you liek the flashbacks, i am havign so much fun writing them!
Yea, i kinda thought i went a bit off with that, but it was good to see how real anger can be when she lets herself loose for a second. She is very good at controling her emotions, but i figured by now htestress build up would get to her a bit.
Drama is Pansy's thing, duh! LOL! I cant wait to write those parts!
Thanks, glad you liekd them.
~KittyKiss Report Review
well Another chapter and another review!!!yay!!
Well as i said earlier u were amazing describing the Heads Room library, kitchen study huh??
I loved this line "The only non-perfect thing is the amazing bouncing ferret in the next room over" lol..
I also like the way u hve depicted Ginny's character and the way u are taking on Hermione's charater is really Awesome!!!
they form a truce huh??
Then there is Draco who like muggle MUSIC!!! n many other things but had to act against his likes because of his father poor guy was cursed!! :(
I Hate Astroia!!!
Well Snape is also swt and really cool!! well from wat Ginny has said Ron and Harry they are feeling very bad about leaving Hermione..
DRACO FINALLY FOUND OUT THAT HERMIONE is ZABINI!!! yayeee!
see i hve been guessing rite DRACO is the Dragon in the prophacy n They both r engaged... u r neither denining nor accepeting so i think my guess is right and then Astoria say things like "U don't deserve him" and all
But u just have to keep me curious by not saying it:(
update soon!! :)
P.S. I loved the song!! hey n when u change the view u can just say POV(point of view) of who ever it isAuthor's Response: Oh I know! I could just hear Ginny's voice in my head as she said that! I giggled rather loud and hte person sittign next to me (once again, i was writing it in school) looked over at me and had this look on her face, clearly questioning my sanity.
Yes, sorta. Hermione feels...different about mister ferret upon the news she heard from her brother back in, like, chapter one, abotu how he might have a little crush on her. she wants to figure out if it is true.
Yea, i know, i thought it would make him a bit easier to transfer into Hermione's life on a friend basis, dont ya think?
Oh, who doesn't hate that wanna-be princess brat? Astoria is a bi*** definetly.
Yes, Harry and Ron (sorta) are feeling bad, btu.oh, you'll have to wait and see.
Lol, you're so excited about that! Trust me! so was i! isilent;ly cheered when i wrote that part. Question is, is he goign ot be too angry with her?
lol, i will say nothing, lol
and of course i have to keep u curious, its a writer's jopb to keep their audience wodnering, to keep them hooked on their story.
Next chapter already in validation.
yes, "Face Down" is a favorite of mine, having expirienced similar...situations. I felt it was approriate to Hermione's life. And for the POV changes, I could yes, but I want to make it clear who's view its changing into or out of.
Thanks again for being such a devoted follower!!
~KittyKiss Report Review
As usual it goes without saying U r really awesome!! Long chapters, quick updates and cool plot!! WOW!
At first wen i started reading the chapter i was confused then it was fine.. i i like the way u have fast forwarded the summer and started with the school
I like the way in which u have highlighted Hermione's character..its so awesome the way u describe her nature in each scene
Draco's reaction was different...I really thought that Ron and Harry will understand her but no they reacted the opposite!!
Ginny is soo..sweet
But I'm a little confused Draco's Parents knew that Hermione was Granger before she became Zabini but why didn't they tell Draco??
I liked the Welcome speech and the uncle sev part!!!lol...
The Portrait is cool!!a pic of Draco and Hermione!New Beginnings huh?? i just wonder how u r gonna describe the Heads Dorm!
Well YES Hermione is Definitely a Plotter!!!or rather U!!! I wonder wht the plot is!!! I m getting really Curious!! ;)
U say that we r getting to the good part i hope so too..
really can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
P.S. i hve mailed uAuthor's Response: Thank you so much *blushes and bows* you are really too kind!
Yes, I wanted the summer to be a bit blurry, to sace it out over the chapters so we find out little by littel her inside jokes, the things she learned over the summer, as we see them come out in her personality.
Yea, the reaction from Harry and Ron well...you'll figure out why soon enough. Same for Draco's response. He doesnt understand it yet, he doesnt even realize it for that matter, btu he feels a pull towards this girl.
Mr and Mrs Malfoy didn't know she was a Granger, when hermione is introducin herself, she slips up. She says , "I am Hermione Gran...Zabini." Which alerts Mrs. Malfoy because she hears Draco speak of little else than Ms. Granger durign the past few years. How she is always beating him in tests, how she is an annoyign know-it-all, how pretty she is when she is angry, how it confuses him, the way he feels about her. that kind of stuff. So she automatically thinks "hm, she was going to say somethign starting with G-R-A-N which could mean anything, but it copuld also mean Granger." so Narcissa kinda just guesses. and of course they wouldn't tell Draco, he specifically said he doesnt want to know anythign abotu her till they meet on the train.
lol thanks. I must admitt, i cried a little when i wrote the flash back, it was so sad, but the Uncle Sev thing, well, i was laughing so hard that, frankly? i fell right out of my chair. I was writing it in school and the teacher looked at me like i was crazy, which, i probably am, lol.
Oh, i could totally send you pictures. They wont be good, as I will have to draw them out myself, but i could send you layout designs, i love designing things.
oh, i just love bringing out the Slytherin in me AND Hermione!!
Keep reading! NAd thanks for following my little sotry so avidly.
AKA HermioneJadeZabini Report Review
First off I m sorry for reviewing late! just now read it n here i m reviewing it!! yet another Awesome chapter and a Big one too!! yay..
Tink is Cute!! I luv the way u explain all the details so well..But wow soo many names!! And u remembered everything while writing cool…
The Pool and the Tennis part was really cool!! They played til they both fainted wow a really strong game huh..
The Party sounds So lovely and Hermione’s Dress is also wonderful..I would luv to see a picture of it!
Astoria's attitude towards Hermione is Awful!! How can she say such things to her in her party!! I would have slapped her if I were Hermione but its Hermione we r talking about so she won’t do such things!!!
Ok I seriously think its Draco (Dragon) maybe he is the one who she has stolen from Astoria!
Anywaz u Rock!! :)
P.S. I m gonna read the next chapter now yay!!Author's Response: I am so happy that you are reviewing! And thanks for being one of those people who'll stick with me from the begining! that's so awesome of you
Tink is definetly one of my favorites at the moment! lol and i know, i have always been a detail person. As for the many names, not all of them will come into play, but I wanted Tink to be able to have some other names as fillers for when she told hermione about the Malfoys and the Parkinsons and stuff. Besides, I wanted the party to be really really big.
Yea, i thought it would put in a good show of how deep the rivalry goes, and it also highlights Hermione's determination, strength, and endurance.
If you want the picture, email me at Jarethsarafae @ yahoo. com, I'll send it to you. And yes, writing the party was oen of my favorite parts of the chapter. Especially the part about the fight with Taylor.
Yes, well, I thought the story needed a heavy antagonist to keep the good characters on their feet. Do you think it's working? Lol. I hope it's a good thing that it causes so much attention.
You're awfully smart, maybe it is, maybe it isn't ;)
Thanks so much for reviewing! Next chapter is alreazdy in validation! Hope to hear from you sooon after it goes up :D
AKA HermioneJadeZabini Report Review
U Really ROCk!
The story is really really Awesome! well i found it from the 1st chapter but sry really sry i didn't leave a review!!!
But this chapter is Awesome nice work n plot! Triplets!!n Zabini!
1. Only this time, when I looked in the mirror, I didn't see my messy bush of brown hair, or my honey brown eyes. I screamed.
--Well I would have done worst! Like breaking the mirror wwefff seriously!
2. “Happy seventeenth birthday baby.” Was all she said before turning and walking out.
---She turned n just walked away! I wouldn’t have let her without an answer. Hermione has reacted well!
3. Nutmug?? ---its really a cute name
4. Donney, Bebe, meeny mione huh? ---Really cute nickname
Draco like her cool!! The Prophecy was really Awesome nice wordings! Severus Snape Godfather haha good one!
A girl child born and to a dragon betrothed --- so r they all ready betrothed or yet to be?? I also likedy our description of the room and Manor
So Party huh? So is Hermione going to tell her frds about her family? Does she by chance have a crush on Draco?
And u did not mention Hermione’s New Real Name!
Hope to get all the answer n the next chapter!!
Write More and Soon!! Awaiting ur update
~Apurva~:)Author's Response: omg, this is so sweet! I am so glad you like my story! It makes me feel wodnerful when people liek you tell me they like my story.
When it coems to Hermione's reaction, i kinda figured, that I'd keep some of her personality, or, well, most of it, the same. Hermione, in the books, is really levelheaded, lots of patience gained form hanging with ron and harry all the time. I'm glad you liek the naem Nutmeg, i happen to love the spell of the spice, so i just added it in for my sake, lol. As for the nicknames, well, Mione's i got because in my head (no, i am not crazy, lol), that is what she wants to be called, it's a pretty name. If i were her, i'd want to be called stuff like that. As for the betrothal, that is a good question. I guess i didn't explain it very well. And i never said that Draco and Hermione are the ones the prophecy speaks of. Only Hermioen is sure. Lol, btu if you really want to know, then message me, i'll explain that better. As for the party, I guess you'll have to wait and see :-p. And no, she doesn't have a crush on the ferret face. And yes, i did say her real name. Hermione Jadeline Zabini. And no worries child, the I have already submitted the next chapter. It should be up by the 28th at latest, but at the rate promised, it'll be up by the 25th. I am so glad you like my story! and I hope you like the rest of it. The turth is, I am in the middle of writign chapter 5, so the next chapter will never be far behind, lol.
Enjoy your reading!
~~Kitty Kiss aka HermioneJadeZabini Report Review
FINALLY i read ur chapter n reviewing!!! yayeee!
AWESOME Thinking n' Plot! I not that really didn't see that coming but didn't expect it now..
well the first part-
I liked the way u went abt Ryan n' Rose's conversations!!
Rose trying to explain her luv to her husdand! n' Ryan on the other hand trying to tell his luv for rose n how he wanted to be a part of his daughter's like...
I feel u deserve a pat on the bak for the emotion display n' the kiss (why was i not supprised by it?) :-)
Well there is ntg much to say abt it i guess..
But i shd hve guessed Lily would do something wen u said
"Unless she can do something about it."!!!
I m really supprised that Rose didn't slap him after he Kissed her lol.
And her little confession abt how she wants their relation of the past to be spl was really swt
And then wen Ryan told that he won't interupt in her life i was REALLY SUPPRISED!! well that was an understatement!!
I thought well Ryan issue is over!! but it didn't make any sense!!.. But he really felt very bad n hurt to say that!!!
NOw the Final part-
AHhh now u made it clear..the doubt that Ryan is the real Father! coz in one of ur chapter u hve mentioned that Rose had a one night with a guy wen she went out to a pub with her frds
n now it was none other than Ryan!!
Then Lily had to bring Amelia to meet RYAN! SERIOUSLY why?? But ofcousre u had to do it!!!so u can intrreupt the now peacefull life if Rose n' Scrpouis rite??!!!??
But i luved the way u hve explained abt Ryan's feeling for his daughter thats really luvly n Swt!!!
HE FINALLY MET HIS DAUGHTER!!
Now he was ready to fight!!well i think its going to be a nightmare!! n really more interesting with ur wonderfull writing Skill!!
P.S - I live in Chennai ! n' doing my CA just started so u must be 18?like me!
nywaz Update soon
~Apurva~Author's Response: Hey Apurva,
First and foremost, a heartfelt apology for such a late reply. Have been busy penning the 16th chapter. :)
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments!! I was slightly nervous about it, but thanks a lot for the reassurance.
I have maintained in the beginning that Lily is going to be a huge part of the story. and now she definitely will.
I know I surprised you with Ryan finally ready to back out, but in the end, it didnt turn out the way you thought it would right!!
I know most of the readers would be thirsting for my blood for that, but as for what lays ahead, they will very well kill me.
Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments, support and review!! *hugs*
PS: Yup, even I am eighteen. And CA? Wow!! It's pretty hard to come across someone doing that.
And this is just a favour, could you please try and type complete words/sentences. Sometimes it is hard to decipher the review.
So writing it properly would make it easier for me to reply.
I like ur work..nice going n a good chapter!
but i think there is some thing missing in it
I think u r explaning a bit fast
but i hope the up coming chaps r explained well with details
that will make ur chap big n more attractive i think
the conversation r also a bit plain
otherwise it was good
hope u hve not mistaken me for my suggestion if u dont like it sry iggnore it
~Apurvaa~Author's Response: Sorry for taking a long time to respond, but thanks for the review. This story is actually mostly written already, but thanks for letting me know. It becomes a lot more detailed, I just didn't want to focus on the summer for too long, because the real story starts during the school year. Report Review
Wwell the title really speaks abt the chapter poor Rose is in a rite state to think things properly...
I really feel bad for her specially Scorpius poor guy totally heart broken...
I Rose is not even ready to listen to him!
I hope they don't make any rash decision b'coz of this n i hope rose give him a chance n hear him out after all its not his Fault but i don't blame her for acting like this... :-(
hope everything turns out well
~Apurva~Author's Response: I hoped that people would notice the title. It is there for a reason!
As for Rose and Scorpius, they're both quite conflicted emotionally and that is going to play a huge part in the upcoming chapters. Lots of resentment and anger and love. Suffice it to say, their decisions won't always be very well thought out.
Thanks so much for your review, hon. I hope to hear from you in the future! Report Review
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