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Review #1, by Amulu_potterBlood Bound: Twelve

21st July 2015:

wonderfull story!! m glad i found it and could read the whole of it at once :)

waiting for more stories from u!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm a little bit sad that it's finished but I'm really loving the one I'm working on now. I'll start posting it soon!

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Review #2, by Amulu_potter'Till Death Do Us Part: By the Shore

21st May 2014:

interesting chapter! better than nt hving a update.. they r stubborn!!! hufff...

Cant wait for the next chap the wedding?

By far the best Draco Hermione story i hve read.

Write more!


Author's Response: I know, it was short and not much happened, but glad you still think it was interesting. Next chapter is in validation so you will have another chapter in a few days or hopefully sooner. And yes, next chapter IS the wedding =O YAY? And thanks so so much for R&R! ^__^ XOXO

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Review #3, by Amulu_potter'Till Death Do Us Part: New Year's

12th May 2014:
WOW!! your are just too gud...leaving us to keep guessing wht happens next!

Loved both The Prophecy and New Year's!

ONE NIGHT Stand! really?? why cant they just admit their feelings for each other? Both are too Stubborn

Too many misunderstanding Astoria is swt! but i think Blaise will use her for his benefit to get to Draco n Hermione?

I guessed it earlier too and i nw kind of think its true Hermione is pregnant! please say yes!!!

Write more we love reading ur plot


Author's Response: HI! Thanks so much ^__^ Both are stubborn, but also doubtful because the different social roles they have. Draco believes Hermione can't love him because he is a Death Eater and Hermione believes Draco can't love her because she is muggle-born and lacks blood purity. Aw, don't misunderstand Astoria, she isn't like Evelyn. Evelyn was a (w)itch. I like Astoria still. I can't say Hermione is pregnant, anything is a possibility! And I promise I will write MORE ! =D!

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Review #4, by Amulu_potter'Till Death Do Us Part: Happy Christmas

23rd April 2014:

Finally! Awesome Chapter!! Seriously mayb you should write a book n publish you are awesome!!

Hermione under imperious curse!! I never saw tht coming!wow cool plot! you are too brilliant :)

I am falling in Love with Draco too!!

your story has inspired me to continue my own fanfiction but time is the constrain anyway i hve writen a chapter so it shdnt be tht tough...

P.S I am guessing if you r gonna get hermione pregnant nw??(thoughts...)

Write more! love your plot!

Cant wait for the next chapter!!


Author's Response: Thanks so so much ^_^ Glad you liked it! Yes, the curse was even a surprise to me too as I was writing to it! I am glad you like Draco. He can be a jerk, but I think he is still so cute. Yes, CONTINUE WRITING! It is so much fun! And take your time. Many fan fics take YEARS to complete. I just have too much time on my hands, I guess.
I can't say anything about Hermione being pregnant BUT you'll see soon enough.

Thanks so so much for the review =D

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Review #5, by Amulu_potter'Till Death Do Us Part: Leaving You

20th April 2014:

Gr! Seriously! how could you!! i mean how could you do that to Draco Bloody Malfoy!! :( :(

thats sooo unfair!!

"Blaise stepped aside and Hermione tucked a curl behind her ear, refusing to look at Draco. “I accepted Blaise’s proposal… I’m going to leave you Draco and go with him.”

Draco’s heart shattered into a trillion pieces."

when i read that i was just blankly staring at my screen my heart shattered reading that!!

WOW but seriously you are tooo good at writing! So much that u sway our emotions! :)

I accidentally bumped into your story but couldn't stay away.. Will stay 'till the very end!

Do write more and soon!!


Author's Response: I know T__T Sorry! No, your heart will be fix soon! Thank you! I'm okay. I think I have good ideas, but grammar just sucks. Thankfully I have a lovely person to help! Yes, I def. try to put alot of emotion into it ^__^ And I am super happy that you found this and thank you so much for reading it and reviewing =D! XOXO

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Review #6, by Amulu_potterThese Dark and Hollow Nights: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Family (PART TWO)

17th February 2014:

Wow!! your plot is just too gud!! and i luv it i just read it in one go..found it yesterday night and it kept me awake the whole time as i could not stop myself from reading! :)

your plot and the way you have scripted the characters is awesome!! cant wait to read more...

but there r a few things like hermione was not well u never said what happened to her..

Do update soon!!


Author's Response: You will find out why Hermione is ill really soon. I bet you can guess if you think about it ;) I am really glad you like it, though I feel bad for being the reason you lost sleep. I am working on the next chapter at the moment, but I'm kind of stuck, so it probably won't be up for a while. Thanks for the awesome review though! I'm glad you enjoyed! (But I recommend getting some sleep while you wait for the next chapter lol!) And while you wait, I have a few other fics up, so maybe you'd like to read those? Thanks again!

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Review #7, by Amulu_potterPlaying House with Malfoy: The Mother In-Law

12th February 2014:

Yaaay u updated!!! :) :) i kept checking for ur update everyday i mean literally! And when i had no internet connection u had updated 2 days ago :(

But now tht i hve read it its awesome! worth the wait hoping you will be updating soon and hope you hve settled in your new place

i am following this story till the very end!!



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Review #8, by Amulu_potterThe Captive's Dream: Volume I

21st October 2011:

wow! you are really brilliant

awesome plot. . .love it!

pls update soon


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Review #9, by Amulu_potterPlaying House with Malfoy: Bats or Cannons?

10th October 2011:
yaay! finally they have made it unhidden!! :)
your New plot is awesome!!! loved it looking forward to more :)
update soon


Author's Response: YaY I know finally!!! And I'm really happy you like the new plot. I was/am really afraid that everyone who has been reading my story from the very beginning won't like the new changes...of course I didn't have a choice :( but I just don't want to lose any readers and fans of my story because of the changes. So I really happy that you will still be reading it. :)

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Review #10, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 12: Life in Paint

12th September 2011:
u really r bloody brilant!! :)
i literally cried reading abt hermione's story poor girl had to go through so much :'/
that painting she has done is awesome!!!

i did love to beta ur story but i hve never been a beta before

update soon! :)


Author's Response: you are so nice to me! email me at "jareth sara fae@ yahoo .com" (no spaces) with subject line "HPFF BETA" and we'll talk. plus, i can send you photos of her room - sorta and dresses and anything else you may want to see

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Review #11, by Amulu_potterNanny Wanted!: Chapter Fifteen: There will be no sex. No sex. NO SEX!

11th September 2011:
can't wait to
awesome story

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Review #12, by Amulu_potterUnforgiven: You Break It, You Buy It

9th September 2011:

did hagrid call the DA members??
nice chapter i feel very sorry for hermione :( its not fair to her
hope to see more of draco in next chapter

Author's Response: Hello(:

It's a dinner party. but now that you mention it, several of the invites were sent to DA members.

Hermione is dealing with a lot, isn't she?

There will be more Draco for the next several chapters(;

Thanks for the review:D

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Review #13, by Amulu_potterUnforgiven: Keeping Options Open

3rd September 2011:

Awesome story! :) nice preview too now i can't wait to read the next chapter!! update soon

i think there is gonna be hell a lot of drama at hagrid's place

Poor poor Hermione getting confronted by Ginny
i just hope she doesn't get in trouble with draco


Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I'm glad you liked the preview, I can't wait for that chapter to get validated! I enjoyed writing it a lot:D 18 is already in the quere(:

There will be drama, I'll already tell you that(;

I know, it's so sad, will she tell or not?


Hope you continue to enjoy it, thanks for the review:D

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Review #14, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 10, Nightmares Revisited

29th August 2011:
Nightmare Revisited! god i think i m still in tht nightmare.

i really hope this dream doesnt come true both her brothers are soo sweet n protective


Author's Response: message me on aim if you have it. esaperanafae
i need you as a beta

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Review #15, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 9, Masquerade

29th August 2011:

well first off u are a AWESOME writer!! really! i just love ur work
WOW Masquerade ball didnt disappoint me at all it was bloody awesome loved every bit of it

to forget a ball which was to happen tomo well its hermione! she forgets everything wen she is into a book

Tht journal entry was nice!! of course i saw the hint u hve been droping it everynow and then but i liked the way u played it to confuse us yes ur editor is right u r cruel but i know hu she means!!! YAY!! :)

The dance was brillant and the idea to disguise was cool and the use of middle names so noone will recoganise them was superb!!

I think after Hermione turned a Zabini she and drama go hand in hand lol :)

i think her nightmare will return but her knight in shining armour will save her!!

Brandon and Blaise are talking abt what i hve been guessing from the beginning!
I really hope tht the golden trio reunite will they??

i was thinking that u forgot about the Parkinson twins but no! u just had to bing them in full on like tht. they deserved wht they got i hoped they will be expeled :(

Hermione is gonna marry Draco :):)

am i right???


Author's Response: you are so far ahead of everyone my friend! let me know if you want to be a beta, im looking for one

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Review #16, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 8: To Fly and To Dream

29th August 2011:
To fly. well the way u described hermiones feeling and thoughts i felt as if i was the one who was flying n not her it felt soo real!

tht dream was awefull poor girl!

draco is sweet and awesome as ever. can wait to read abt the ball!!

Author's Response: i love writing deeper feelings, i think it helps draw readers in, so to hear you say its working makes me feel awesome!

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Review #17, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 7: A Day Of Girly Pursuits

29th August 2011:

Nice chap!! :) and u did justice to the girls as well as the chapter title :)

I loved the way draco asked hermione out!!! she doubts whether or not having strong emotions for draco!!! ohhh pls tht girl is head over heeel for him i just think she is hving a hard time just excepting it yet
ginny's dialogue was awesome everyone but u two knew

i loved everyones dress

as for the relationship between the lioness and the dragon its going to turn pretty well!! with the prophecy saying it and all ;)


Author's Response: i love how you dissect my chapters, it really helps and makes me feel awesome.

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Review #18, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 6, Remembering:

25th August 2011:

Its been really a long time i read ur story m sry for that... i promise to read all the chapters and also review them..

U r just brilliant.. just love ur work!!

i like the way u played hermione's reaction on hearing the lose of her foster parents or rather her mom

Tht song was really nice

i love the young Drakey!!! :) he is soo sweet and the portrial of the whole memory was nicely done

i luv how draco comforts hermione and how they display their emotions preety cool

Ginny and Blaise! really?! i like tht pair:)

ha ha book on how to interpret girls ha ha really??

u know it true tht u can say wen someone has a crush on someone else but wen it comes to urself its..well u cant say if the one u like likes u..

Awww it was sweet of draco to say such things to hermione at the last part

looking fwd for more


P.S lovely pics cya in the next chap ;)

Author's Response: you are amazing! so dedicated and nice! thanks so much for being a constant name on my review pages

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Review #19, by Amulu_potterHow it all started: Chapter one

4th August 2011:
Nice story i liked it pls update soon

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Review #20, by Amulu_potterThe Problem With This: The Beggining Of A New Adventure

30th July 2011:

Ahhh..this is one of my favourite plot hermione not being a Granger but a Zabini :)

Though a short chapter it was to the point a very nicely written!!

i hope u intend to continue the story and get loadds of super cool ideas...:)

i cant wait to read more

pls update soon!!:)


Author's Response: Hi.
I dont think i will be updating soon, as i dont have internet right now.
Ive got three chapters ready, so that might be a good enough reason for the people to kill me.
thanks for the review.

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Review #21, by Amulu_potterCarpe Diem : Chapter 1

15th July 2011:

Nice chapter!! i like it... and i liked ur brief abt the story
but i think i will hve to wait to see how u unfold it

nice going! :)

update soon!!


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Review #22, by Amulu_potterWhat Lies Within: Catching The Rabbit

27th June 2011:
I just Got one word WOW!

ur work is awesome...i love the plot and the way u hve explained...but one thing is bothering me draco says after biting hermione tht the rest of the steps she will hve to do willingly but draco has a control over her so can't he just make her do wht he wants her to do???

won't hermione ever hve her own will? n just be controlled by him??

i just cant wait to read more!!! :)

pls update soon


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Review #23, by Amulu_potterPlaying House with Malfoy: The Parenting Project

12th June 2011:
ur other story hermione and the beast was awesome!

this story is super cool so far

the suprise is Hermione is Pregnant again rite?!

can wait for the next chap
update soon!!


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Review #24, by Amulu_potterHeir Brained: YOU DID WHAT?

26th August 2010:

ha ha ha ha i dont seem to stop laughing after reading the last few lines! :):)

A CONTRACEPTIVE CHARMS? gods it was so cruel of u to let the situation hang there n end the chapter! :(
why the hell did he do this dindn't he want a heir. OMG!! now he willl hve to endure the wrath of HERMIONE GRANGER!!
poor guy i dont think he saw this coming his way huh?

now i CAN'T wait to read the next chapter hope its up soon!

u r a brilliant writer n ur plot is bloody awesome!


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Review #25, by Amulu_potterWhat is Truth?: Chapter 5, Confrontations

4th October 2009:

sry was not in town so couldn't review it soon!!:( well i don't hve to comment about your way of writing u r so so awesome i hve no words to describe Confrontation?? nice chapter name!

AGAIN! When did he become Draco?!--i like the way u emote Hermione's emotions

"His curious glance turned…hurt, then angry, then a smirk replaced everything. He sauntered over and whispered in my ear.'I know your secret…Hermione.'Then he walked out the door and into the rest of the castle."-- wow nice flow of emotion n expression loved it:) i knew her secret too:) lol.

“Hermione Granger has a crush!” Ginny meant it as a whisper, but it came out a little loud.-- this was the BEST ha ha ha

U know i really thought Ron n Harry will come around n understand hermione but no after all she went through all the suffering and all Ron had to treat her that way she really i mean REALLY didn't deserve the slap guys r so Dum!! poor girl cried so much!!

Draco is so so swt!!! Minerva and Albus!! well Thats nice... i really never thought of them together but its nice:)

I TOLD U I GUESSED FRM THE BEGINNING *grins* that Draco and Hermione are engaged! :)yaayy!!!

The old flashback was also very nice!! I never expected her to curse Harry or Ron But I like it!!well it was Way too Slytherin of her but that cool!!

Well as for Sparkling between The Ferret and the Gryffindor princess Definitely!!!

Parkinson Twins hummm Well its gonna be a hell of a drama rite?

LUV ur WORK!! and ur pics were awesome too:)


Author's Response: Lol, i thought i'd be a good name, since more than once is there the outbreak of a possible fight.

Thanks, I just think "what would i do in that situation if i was Hermione?" and that's what comes out, lol.

I thought that it'd be a good idea to have him show a moment of vulnerablilty, just ot show he is changed.

Lol, thanks, my friends have done it to me before, lol. Seeing as i have a friend EXACTLY liek Ginny, i thought it'd be funny to put in.

Oh i know, but the story isn't over yet.

I love the new Draco

Oh, i have always pictured Minny and Al togetehr, they are just hte perfect pair really.

It doesn't say that in the chapter!! dont get ahead of me! lol, its not fair to everyone else.

I'm glad you liek the flashbacks, i am havign so much fun writing them!

Yea, i kinda thought i went a bit off with that, but it was good to see how real anger can be when she lets herself loose for a second. She is very good at controling her emotions, but i figured by now htestress build up would get to her a bit.

Lol, totally!

Drama is Pansy's thing, duh! LOL! I cant wait to write those parts!

Thanks, glad you liekd them.


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