I liked it. It was a little um...adult at the end but oh well that is why they have restrictions. To sum up: Good and make it a little longer possibly.Author's Response: i hope to go back and extend the story a bit. maybe add some of the reception. thanks for the review. :) Report Review
It was good for what it was considering it is a one shot it was good. Possibly a little longer and more interaction but Good!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not to good at interaction, but im hoping to write more stories and get better. Report Review
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