{reviewid: 2001704, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
4th December 2008:
I can't belive this story is nearly done!! I love it! What are the names? A hint! Please!!
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{reviewid: 1999414, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
30th November 2008:
Oooh very exciting! I forgot to say last time but I think it will be a girl! Update soon!!
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{reviewid: 1992158, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
20th November 2008:
Yay! a chapter! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1988224, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
15th November 2008:
I love it please keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1984648, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
9th November 2008:
I'm the first reviewer! SO let me be the first to say, sounds good so far. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: yay! a review =] lol
im glad u like it so far, i am trying to finish the next chapter, but i dislocated my knee and i can't get around much, so my access to the computor is limited. though i am going to try and update!
thank u for the review! =D
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{reviewid: 1983601, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
8th November 2008:
Wow! That was... Wow! Amazing great. Your writing is soo good!
Author's Response: thank you so much hun
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{reviewid: 1982450, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
6th November 2008:
Yay! I am happy with any chapter! It was sad when R/S were like 'lets just be friends' :(
Update soon!
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{reviewid: 1979064, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
2nd November 2008:
Love this story Astoria seems nice...
Keep it up I love this story (did I mention that?)
Update soon!
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{reviewid: 1977151, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
30th October 2008:
OOOHHH Lala Who does Marky like? I love this story keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1975649, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
27th October 2008:
Okay Love it!!
Fave line is...
“England are out of the Five Nations Quidditch Cup, can you believe it Red?” James says to me, a large dollop of cranberry sauce hanging from the side of his mouth.
“I think I’m going to vomit,” I cry and run upstairs to the bathroom. As I go, I hear James say, “I know, it’s ridiculous!”
James is so cluless!
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{reviewid: 1975637, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
27th October 2008:
Great chapter! I laughed so much at the whole
“Yes, but after one time, it’s hard to stop,” says Dad.
I feel sick – my parents are sex addicts.
Haha! I so didnt see the whole drugs thing comming!
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{reviewid: 1975579, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
27th October 2008:
I love this story it is the BEST!
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{reviewid: 1958366, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
9th October 2008:
Nice chappie!! Who oh Who did it to S?? Keep it Up!
And well done to you and your beta!
P.S
Update soon!!
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{reviewid: 1956841, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
8th October 2008:
Oooh LALA! Okay I love Draco and all but his ancestors are an odd bunch!'
Love the story keep it up!!
Author's Response: They are a tad odd, aren't they?
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{reviewid: 1956836, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
8th October 2008:
WOW! That was a shock!! I thought she would be pregnant but this is way better!
Author's Response: Glad to know you like it!
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{reviewid: 1956830, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
8th October 2008:
I liked it this is my first D/H but I liked it!
Author's Response: Well, this is my first time writing a DH so we're both newbie at this!
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{reviewid: 1955922, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
7th October 2008:
YAY! I loved it! I just like finished My M and now I am here!! YAY!! Kay well keep it up!!
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{reviewid: 1955916, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
7th October 2008:
Ah I cannot belive that was the end I love this story I read it in like one day! On to the sequal!
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{reviewid: 1955895, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
7th October 2008:
lol! the peer pressure thing was so funny cause I go away to this little town in the summer holidays and this other family comes too and they have a son bout my age and last time we were obsessed with peer pressure and we kep saying JUST SAY NO!! lol not that funny but I am laughing so... okay well yeah,
bye!!
p.s
Have some Jelo with pudding!
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{reviewid: 1955870, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
7th October 2008:
Loved the P&P referance! YAY! They got together this is my fave chappie!
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{reviewid: 1954997, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
6th October 2008:
okay short but good! Archie is a jerk I didn't say that before did I?? Oh well, he is a big pervy wanker!! Love the story and keep it up!
Author's Response: I know, and I wanted him to be. You can't have a perfect universe where there are no pervy wankers, so I added him for romantic interest and a nice catalyst for the suspicions about a Remus/Jen thing... you know, just because she hasn't mentioned it... (no, I shouldn't burst your Sirius/Jen bubble. I was just joking... or was I? ;))
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{reviewid: 1954995, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
6th October 2008:
I liked it I so thought that Sirius would come to her but no Remus was cool too! Does remus like her? Anyways keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah, I was expecting that, too, but I tend to surprise myself often. Hehe. It's not always a good thing.
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{reviewid: 1954985, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
6th October 2008:
Okay I have no complaints so keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing yet again!
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{reviewid: 1954982, reviewer: 'stormy%20eyes'}
6th October 2008:
I liked the whole thing! A james thing would have been a bit much at the moment but later it could work!
Author's Response: Yeah, it would have been. I really want to incorperate him properly soon, though.
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6th October 2008:
I like peter he turned out bad but he wass a maruder!
I think that your OC does work with Sirius!!
yours Codfish
Author's Response: I know! That is one of my biggest Marauder-era pet peeves: Peter being a nasty little rat. Its unrealistic enough with him being so... unattractive initially compared to these three boys... *dreamy sigh*
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