Nope, I don't like Marilyn and Perry. :) And yes, I like Al and Ranny. And I sure am excited for the next few chapters. :o Only a few more left! And I can't wait for your next idea for a story. :) Because I just love your stories.
happy daze.Author's Response: Hiya! Thank you for the review! :)
I didn't think that you would like them together, but you'll have to wait and see on that one.
I hope that you like the rest, you're very sweet!
It's just finding the time to write them, but I will make time! :)
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Aw, I so wanted to read what they got up to at the island, but it's fine just the same :) This was a nice filler chapter. Can't wait until the next chapterrr.
happy daze.Author's Response: i couldnt really think of anything that would go on at the island between them except newlywed bedthings, and were not allowed to write about those. lol. so thats why i didnt include it. :P Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I know where you got the honeymoon destination from.;)
What a beautiful chapter. I remember reading when they first met at that dance in Mother, May I? I'm talking as if the story is ending...but it isn't :) I can't wait to read what they get up to in Alixzandria's Island. I love Spencer and his speech at the wedding.
happy daze.Author's Response: Thanks! :) I didnt really get the island idea from anything though really. I just couldnt think of any gift he could get her, and so i made it an island! lol. Report Review
Alix still has those cravingsss :) They must be enjoying all of those presents! I can't wait until the wedding...it should be a few more chapters away!
happy daze.Author's Response: :) glad u liked it! Report Review
I think I'm going back to reading now. Whenever I take a break all of my favorite stories update and I don't know. :) Gotta stop being lazy now.
Yes, I loved Scorpius in this chapter and the exchange with Marilyn was pretty interesting. Perry's a nice guy and I like him. Maybe Ran should give him a chance?
And yay a new character!
ROBIN.Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I wish it was just that easy. I bet that it's good right, though? You go away, and then come back and you have lots of lovely stories to read! :)
Thank you again; I hope that you like the next chapter, and the new character! Report Review
Oh, huh, where's the song lyric??
hehe I felt special because I knew what gender the babies were going to be. :) But I don't know the names! :o Curiousity killed the catt...
Poor Alix and her mood swingsAuthor's Response: Lol. I know, Im doing horribly on lyrics! xP and im glad you felt special! :) Youll know a name soon. Maybe :P Report Review
Oh gosh, so much pressure. On the shopping and the planning and the honeymoon and the gifts. But when it's all over, some of that pressure will be lifted off their shoulders. :)
Waiting for the wedding
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Aw, they're getting married. :)
I'm glad that they came back and everyone's happy. It's all good. And that's good. :) I can't wait until the wedding; it'll be pretty amazingly magical-y. :D
Green and Silver love
happy daze.Author's Response: :) Oh so glad you love it!
Green and silver is definately the way to go!
Oh, I bet Perry likes Ran. :)
I thought they were going to a couple after that kiss (I'm a Ran and Al shipper by the way, no matter how much bad stuff I say about Al ;)). I guess it would be awkward.
I can't wait until the next chapter. :)
happy daze.Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
You'll have to wait and see ;)
I'm glad that you're still enjoying this. I'm glad that you still ship Ranny and Al; they're fun to write.
I hope that you like the rest! Report Review
Oh by the way, ROBIN. :)
Gah, this chapter lightened my mood from the last chapter. I feel much better that they stopped all the things from being burned to nothingness. :)
And when they started doing all the ole stuff they used to do, Ranny was so happy. And that's a god thing.
happy daze.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're still enjoyed this!
I thought that it was about time that the mood got lightened! I couldn't burn the book, not ever! :O :D
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This is what HAPPENS when I leave HPFF...even for a short time.
At first, I was all 'oh yay! Albus is realizing how much of a jerk he is and going to apologize'. And now I dislike him even more. He should know BETTER than to say that to Ranny. That those aren't real. I want to slap him now. Not cool man.
At least this is the last chapter he upsets Ranny. It better be at least.
I refuse to believe that Ranny burned the book. But it's there. I read it. Holy mother.
happy daze. ;)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've missed your lovely comments! ;)
Bless him, Albus is a nice boy deep down, he's just very blunt as a person. He'll come around. Not cool man :P Haha, that made me laugh. :)
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Ah I love that song. :)
And I changed the banner for you at TDA. ;)
I think the most dramatic line of this chapter (my favorite) is when Hermione says "I'll be out of your life again!" And I remember all the drama that Hermione and Snape had in the beginning of Daddy Dearest. That's intense.
And when Tyler got drunk, I remember when he and Alix broke up and he started to drink all the time. They're all in distress, poor people.
I'm glad that the two of them are coming home. :D
happy daze.Author's Response: I know, I just saw it again, it looks amazing. :) This is the first time Ive been able to get on since the TDA staff holiday was over and they were letting people submit. Im so glad you like this story. There are many who dont. :( Thanks for brightening my day!! Report Review
Oh dear those Slytherins. Tsk tsk. Mama Steph. is very disappointed in you!
Achilles is awesome and needs to get himself together. It's like Rose is his Achilles' Heel. He's going to die in a pit of loneliness if Fruity and Al don't help!
Let's hope James doesn't kill them. ;)
happy daze.Author's Response: In the words of Edna Mode (from the Incredibles), Achilles needs to "pull himself together!" Report Review
I'm kidding it's one big fat ROBIN. I would never think this story to be awful.
Albus was JUST about to talk to Ranny until Scorpius showed up! It was leading up to something important and then it was like...NOoooOOO.
Perry James. Awesome name. Awesome character.
And everyone loves Ranny! :D
dear god, Rose is in the next chapter!?Author's Response: Damn you :P KIDDING! I'm glad that you enjoyed this. You never know, there might be a few chapters where you feel the need to give it a 'hook' - god that sounds like a terrible pun doesn't it, one that doesn't even make sense? :/
Thank you for the lovely review! I will update soon, and I hope that you like it!
Yes, the next chapter features a lot of Rose! Report Review
I'm going to the premiere :D
It's definitely Ranny's character to feel guilty about saying that to Al. I can't wait to read what he is thinking...or doing. I've been gone the whole week so I've missed two chapters! What is this treachery!
And I still love Tom. ftw
happy daze.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying this! Sorry about the lack of reply; I've been a very busy, busy bee!
You're so lucky! I am mega jealous. How was it? Was it everything that you had hoped for? Did you meet any of them?!! :D
I'm busting with questions!
Ranny is the type of person to feel guilty about everything, even if it wasn't her fault; she doesn't really understand a situation if she can't fix it, and she's still unsure how to fix the problems that she's experiencing.
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This kids, is why you don't drink during a party. Because then you forget everything (THATS IMPORTANT) and then when the time comes when you talk about it (THE VERY IMPORTANT IT), you have nothing to say. Screw you, James.
I think he got his fair share of hurt when Vic was dancing with all those blokes. So ha. That's what you get, sir.
(I'm really interested in reading shoelaces)
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Yay, some Victoire and Teddy! :D I love Teddy especially his first line in this chapter. I wont quote it, since I'm sure you don't want this review to poof away. :)
I love Louis; he made me laugh out loud this chapter. You're an amazing writer Saval! I can't wait until the next chapter.
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Dessie is one luckyy girl. She got out of one sticky situation. But eventually, she (Heidi, Sydney, and Roxy too) will have to tell Tosh (and the other guys) about Heidi's pregnancy. Fred and james already know its about Heidi.well, this is fun. :)
(I love James and Freddie)Author's Response: i'm excited for everyone's reactions (: especially tosh's! Report Review
YAY! Another chapter! Victorious!
So far, I'm both a Lemon/Louis and Lemon/James shipper. (I'm kidding I like James a little bit better ;)) I think it's because I haven't seen more of Louis than I have of James. But I can't wait to see more of him.
Can't wait until the next chapter. :)
happy daze.Author's Response: oh you'll be seeing a lot of louis ;) and a little more of james ;)
but i think i might be giving away too much. oops.
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Yay some Oliver and Keegan moments!!! Loved this chapter and ohmygod the ending :D Kind of worth the wait right? Yes, Oliver Wood, what have you done... ;)
happydaze.Author's Response: I know, right?? And so glad you think it was worth the wait. I do need to edit this chapter out and smooth out some flaws, but generally, I'm quite pleased with it so I'm glad to know my readers think so too! Oliver is a confused little boy, hehe ;) Thank you so much for reviewing! xxx Report Review
I'm having some mixed feelings on Al. On one hand, he's one awesome person that I love and I feel sorry for and on the other hand, this is what I think: IN YOUR FACE AL. YOU LOST HER YOU JERK.
It's like feeling sorry for James in Wolfsbane and at the same time, being mad at him for being so blind.
This was probably my newest favorite chapter. Ranny is standing up for herself. YOU GET YOUR HAT BACK GIRL.
happy daze.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I always say it, but again, thank you! ;)
Albus will hopefully redeem himself soon, he's being an idiot - I admit - but he'll make it up to everyone. Those really are mixed feelings you're going through, though :D
I'm glad that you feel sorry for him; most have just skipped straight to the downright hating :P
Ah, you've noticed the James similarity I was hoping that no one would get that.
I guess in a way when I got really in to this story, I began to notice the naive similarities between Ranny and Charisma, except if possible, Ranny is even more so. I guess that Al just fell in to the part of James' little brother, following in his footsteps, in a way.
Haha, thank you very much, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
GO RANNY GO! :P
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Teddy is really off his game today isn't he? I loved Victoire and Teddy's moments and sparks. Can't wait to read more of their relationship. (I still have to catch up on My Sister's Fiance)
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After I read this chapter, my sister and I played I've Never. :)
Oh, so much tension in this chapter, I can't stand it. When they played the game it was like...oh jeez. What are they going to get into now? James is mad. Lily's probably mad. It is one mad hatter world.
Loved the bits with Adara and Sirius and Remus. :)))
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Yes, a new chapter! And this review is the first one for this chapter.
Oh, you left us with such a cliffhanger! I can't wait until the next chapter (You know after Hopeless, which I'm also dying to read more)
I loved this chapter. Not only were there funny remarks and good scenes, there were three POVs. THREE. AND NATTY WAS THE FIRST ONE. And you know, I love him!
I can't wait to read the next chapter of this (and Hopeless too)
happy daze.Author's Response: Ahahahaha, I do enjoy cliffhangers :)
I do enjoy Natty. I'm glad you like him too! Hopefully, I get Hopeless out before the queue closes. :D Report Review
Oh, poor Jake! Andy is definitely the bad cop, but he should've been less...fierce to Jake. Yes, he is dating Lily. :) James really should not judge, but that's his flaw I guess. I'm glad that they acted somewhat civil to eachother and they learned more about eachother. That's a good sign, right?
happy daze.Author's Response: Oh our James has a lot of flaws. Just like Debbie. Being civil is always a good sign...Or maybe not :D
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