Oh my God, this story was amazing! I like one-shots to have a lot of insight in to the character(s) mind(s), and you definitely did that! I thought you portrayed each sister very well, and I really like that it was set on each of their wedding days. I especially liked Andromeda and Bellatrix. Narcissa was just so, mindless as you put it. I've always liked to think that Narcissa had more of a personality, but to tell you the truth, you probably got it right.
All in all, it was a beautiful one-shot. Good job!Author's Response: Wow...thank you! This is definitely something that was different from what I usually write, so I'm kinda proud of it. I actually don't think of the three sisters in this way after reading Deathly Hallows...but I kept them this way in order to have them fit the challenge this fic was written for.
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Wow. This is definitely the best Snape/Lily story I've read. It was so powerful; tears were welling up in my eyes. I've always loved Snape, and I always wondered if maybe they were involved...so I loved the seventh book!
Snape's and Lily's characters were very believable, and your story was very well-written. Good work!Author's Response: Aw thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed it; that's what I like to hear! =] Report Review
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