And again another brilliant chapter!
I really love the way that the relationship between Lola and James develops. It's so good that they have some happy time before the drama that I'm (unwillingly and sadly) expecting starts. The two of them are just too cute! You made me giggle uncontrollably every few lines - and mind you, I don't usually giggle, at least not that madly ;)
I must honestly admit though that the Sirius-Holly scene confuses me a little. It has definitely made the chapter very interesting, but I'm not sure what to expect and it'll make the time before the next chapter so hard...
Anyway, thanks so much for this fantastic chapter and keep up the great work!
...and here I am, humming The Kinks again... ehhh...Author's Response: oh thankyou so much! ah yes, lola and james.. it is developing quite nicely, and they will have some happy time (nice phrase, btw) before the drama... its coming soon, great big rain cloud settling in. it's going to be very dramatic, as only lola could ocmmand. they are pretty cute, its fun writing them like this, not so much later on. i love lola so much, she's such a darling. alright sirius and holly probably was a little confusing. it was a last minute change of plot that i have now developed further on in the story and is going to become very important. next chapter is going to be veeeeeery interesting. thanks so much for reviewing, and oh yes, how catchy is that song, right? Report Review
I'm absolutely bewitched by your story. Actually, I'm absolutely and completely bewitched by all your stories, by this one is my definitive favourite. I simply love your narration, all this slightly ironic, witty comments are what makes this story so special and fun to read. I just hope writing this is such fun for you as reading is for me.
I can't wait to read another chapter. I keep my fingers crossed for Remus and Holly - so lovely yet so foolish. But well, we're all fools in love, aren't we?
Thank you so much for writing this story, it's really made my day :)Author's Response: *blushes*.. wow thanks so much! bewitched is a great word, and im glad you like this one, i LOVe this story, one of my favourites as well. so much fun to write! wow thanks, yeah remus and holly. we'll see. there's a great quote by the scarecrow in the book of wizard of oz (i used it in with birds in her hair) when he says 'all the same... i shall ask for a brain for a fool would not know what to do with a heart if he had one.' so true, so true. =] no thankYOU for reviewing, that made MY day. Report Review
"Where was Voldemort when you needed him?" Absolutely brilliant. As the rest of this chapter of course. I can't wait to read the rest, so I'll finish this comment here :) Great job!!!Author's Response: Well hey, sometimes Voldemort is needed in such dire situations! Report Review
miss Granger not paying attention in the classroom? thats a real (fan)FICTION :P don't know why, but I thought that were Ron's dreams whole the time. anyway your story was so funny that I simply love it!!! and the song, truly creative. no surprise Hermione fell for that, who wouldn't?! absolutely deserved 10/10 Report Review
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