Great! I really love this fic! Can't wait for more.Author's Response: Thank you, ARG! I hope you continue to enjoy. :) Report Review
Alright, so I wasn't able to resist... I read the chapter and it looks so promising! Really, the biggest problem I usually find in some fics (mine included sometimes) is the lack of descriptions and insight but it was all here! The only little mistakes I managed to find out was some missing ponctuation and capitalization, which is absolutly minor.
You're headed for a great fic there, as far as I can see.
By the way, awesome banner!Author's Response: thankyou, and i'll keep your advice in mind, also if you like the artists work, her name is in the summary, you could request for her at the TDA if you want she's called Missy Padfoot i think or something. she's a staff artist so you can trust her. thankyou for reviewing, your advice is appreciated Report Review
So, just had time to check my profile and read your review. I read your fic. It is good: the grammar and the ortographics are good (which is a GREAT point in your favour) and the plot is promising, let's see where you take it. It is good, overall - don't give up on it.Author's Response: don't worry, i won't give up on it. =][= BTW, what r ortographics? i am in 7th grade, but i don't know 2 many big words. he he. =][= Report Review
I finally managed to start reading fanfiction again (and writing) and I when I checked your profile, I found this one. It seems like an interesting beginning, can't wait to see what comes next. But maybe getting a Beta wouldn't be a bad idea, just to polish it a bit. Overall, I think it is great! Report Review
Nice story. King of harsh being under you sibling's shadow. Keep updatingAuthor's Response: Yaay! Thank you! I shall update as soon as I get chapter 3 back from my beta, which should be any day now. Report Review
I absolutly loved the storyAuthor's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your reading and reviewing :) Report Review
Good chapter, sad though. Update soon.
Happy Christmas! Report Review
Harry's Dead! OMG!
I wish I could have the guts to kill the main characters in my fictions, It would make them a lot more exciting. Unfortunately I can't! I feal incredibly guilty just by thinking of it!
Great story! Keep updating! Report Review
Great chapter! I think I have a feeling about Anna's myster~y guy Report Review
How fluffy! You don't even imagine how many "aww's" i've done while I was reading.
Keep updating, you're doing a really good job! Report Review
Great, great, great chapter! Have I mentioned how great this chapter is? But seriously, I just love this fiction.
Keep updating. Report Review
Hi! I just loved the chapter! Really fluffy.
I was imagining that tha baby would be named wesley or something, but Evan is even better.
Keep writting.Author's Response: Hi there, glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and stay tuned for more. ~Jenn Report Review
Hi! I really like this story but the waiting... It's like cruciatus on me!
Please update soonAuthor's Response: So sorry for the wait - I don't mean to be so tortuous!! I hope you enjoy the newest chapter. ~Jenn Report Review
A Brilliant chapter! Please don't take to long updating cause I'm suffering here. But with all this happiness, I feel something bad comming. If that eventually happens, please don't be to mean, cause Harry and Ginny don't diserve that.
Keep writting awsome chapters like this one.Author's Response: Hey there - I do apologize for making you suffer - I am trying my best to get the chapter ready but my muses are not behaving very nicely these days! Thanks for reading and stay tuned! ~Jenn Report Review
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