Oh, that was so great! I loved the part with McLaggen and everything, it was so funny, and the whole Death Eater thing made it really interesting. Update soon, please! By the way, I favourited your story a while ago, I forgot to mention it in one of my other reviews.
Can't wait for more!! 10/10 Report Review
Haha, I really like this story, it's so funny! I really like the way you write Dee, and my favorite parts out of the whole story so far are the parts when Oliver Wood asks her to the ball and when Hermione is sending notes in that insane writing, ahah. That bothers me so much with people write like that and I was laughing so hard during the whole thing! Good job, can't wait for more!
P.S. I have one question though. What happened to Ginny?
10/10Author's Response: What happened to Ginny... like in reference to how Harry was all gaga about her? Or why is she around sometimes and not other times? If the first, it's a fanfic... so Ginny is always a nonissue in those. If the latter, well, she'll be coming and going for a while, along with the other characters.
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Wow, that was so great! I love Hermione, she is so funny, she thinks the exact, kinda sarcastic things that I've always thought she would. That's how I would write her too!
Anyways, update soon! I love it! 10/10 as always!Author's Response: aww thanks!!! i'm glad you like my hermione, well not mine, but my way of characterizing her. haha. thanks!!! =] Report Review
Okay. Well, I have a lot to say about this; some stuff I liked and some stuff that I didn't, but I know you can make better!
Ginny- I thought she was written pretty well. In the books, she IS supportive and nice and a really good friend. She seemed a bit too girly, but I get that you had to have someone who would act as the one to show Hermione the ropes.
Hermione- Out of charcter, but funny. She seemed a bit like an air-head, and she is supposed to be down-to-earth and not into all of that stuff, she wants Ron to like her for her. But obviously she had to apply to the story, and in that case you wrote her well.
The only thing I hope is that you don't make her "hot and beautiful" by dressing her like girls who refuse to wear anything but Hollister and A&F, and straighten their hair every single day, not saying that it's bad because I like that stuff sometimes too, but that would be too out of charactor for me. But that's just me. : )
Otherwise, I thought it was a fun, light read and a cute story. Go Ron/Hermione !!!Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed critique! I know that Ginny is slightly too girly, but I did have to have someone to show Hermione the ropes that Hermione would trust. I'm currently editing my story, and I did change Hermione a little because after I went back and read my story recently, I did also realize that she seemed air-headish, so I changed it. When I post the changes, she will be still slightly air-headish, it just kicks in at a later time. I don't plan on making her one of the girls that only wear Hollister and A&F and nothing else because personally those girls drive me crazy. Thanks for giving me your opinion. Report Review
That was good! I loved the part about the grape flavored medicine, it was really funny. I really like Lily's character too, I've reviewed before and I know I've said this, but she's just so funny and realistic, its awesome! Great job!Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, based off a real life experience, let me tell you that. Gaahhhh... Report Review
aww that was so cute! I loved it! You should do a sequel or something. Nice job writing it as well.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I truly appreciate it! I may come up with a sequel at some point, but I'm pretty swamped with work and kids and Christmas at the moment, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it though! :o) Report Review
Oh my God, that was soo good! Keep writing! That was one of the most entertaining things that I have read on this website! 10/10!Author's Response: Aw! Thankyou so much! *blushes* That means alot!
Thankyou for reviewing!
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Update quickly, please! It was really good! I can't wait to see what will happen next! 9/10Author's Response: Sorry hun, but I doubt my updates will be quick. English is driving me mad at school, and I have quite a few other stories on this site I write, so it will take a while. But I will try - lord knows it. Thanks for reviewing - I'm glad your excited to find out what's next! >.<
~Alex Report Review
ok. good writing.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
That was really good! You should try to find a banner for this story, because I know that people are more likely to read stories with banners, and I think people should read this one! Excellent job! 9/10Author's Response: Yeah, I've always wanted banners for my stories, but don't know how to get them, lol.
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That was so good! I want more. And I think you did a great job portraying how Ginny and Harry would act in that situation and just around each other in general, as a married couple. It fits them perfectly!
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Oh, that was so great! It was very, very sweet, I loved it. Keep writing; I'll keep reading!
10/10Author's Response: Good I'm happy you liked reading it because I loved writing it =) Report Review
Wow, that was fun ! I love reads like this, they're so fun to read and you're a pretty good writer as well ! I loved the part about the third year girl liking Ron, I thought it was so great. This is such an original story!
Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you sooooooooooooo much!! ^_^ Report Review
Haha, that was SO good! I never would of thought to write anything like that! I was laughing the whole entire time! Execellent job, keep writing!
10/10Author's Response: thankkkkkkk youuuuu! Report Review
Haha, ohh that was cute! Nicely done!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
Really good! I love that song Famous Last Words too, so double for you! Again, nice job. Author's Response: thanks!!!!!! :) Report Review
Great job! I want more!Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter should be up soon. =D Report Review
nice job, again! the story is so fun and cute! you're doing really well. one thing though: instead of saying vacation all the time, you might wanna say holiday because thats what they say in england. vacation is extremely american! well, at least thats what my british friends say. but anyways, keep up the excellent work!Author's Response: oh gosh- forgot all about that vaction- holiday, thing...im going to start saying holdiay- thanx for reminding me! Report Review
Aww, that was so cute! You've done a brilliant job writing the first chapter! It was so short though, I wish you had kept going! Good luck!Author's Response: Thanx so much for reading- and i promise it will get longer
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