Keep going! Too short for me, but thanks for the update nevertheless.
10/10, obviously.

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Great chapter! I am absolutely in love with the Harry-Malfoy alliance. Update soon?!

Oh, and my favorite new character - Briony. She's a real bitch and I love it.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it and I definitely promise to update as soon as I get the chance! Haha, and that's what I was going for with Briony, although, I'm not sure how good I am at writing evil characters...lol. Thanks bunches for reading and reviewing! :)

Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton

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Okay, so I just reviewed on chapter 9, but I didn't re-read my comment, and now I feel stupid :(
When I asked about the Edward/Cedric question Ron had, I didn't mean are you going to expand on it seriously, haha, I just meant is Ron going to be bringing it up again, haha. In the comment I left, I made it sound like I thought you were going to seriously expand on it as part of the story, haha, and that's not what I meant, and I was like, crap, I sound dumb. Sorry!

Cannot wait for more, and I promise you won't get anymore crazy reviews from me, I'll be sure to re-read them next time, haha!

Author's Response: Aw, you're fine, sweetie! I totally understood what you meant by your comment; you didn't sound dumb at all! And as I said in your other review, Ron may/probably will bring it up again. So don't worry, you didn't sound dumb at all! I knew exactly what you meant. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton

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Ahhh so good! I loved the cliffhanger. Poor Jasper, he's always the one who has to be around when there's blood spilt :( But I loved this chapter and I'm really loving all of the connections you're drawing between Edward and Harry.

One question: Are you going to expand on Ron's question about Edward and Cedric in the hotel?
10/10!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! And yeah, poor Jasper is always in the wrong place at the wrong time.

Haha, Ron may bring it up a little later on and he may just be thinking about it the next time he sees Edward. Could lead to a funny moment, yes? Cedward! :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, hun!

Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton

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Great job! I read the first six chapters yesterday, but forgot to review. Saw this one today and I was so excited. This is the first Twilight/Harry Potter fan fic I've read. Thought I wouldn't like it, but I love it. You write the characters just as J.K. and Stephenie do :) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I write like J.K. and Steph? Oh my goodness, wow, I'm totally blushing...I'm glad you like the story so far and I'll try to get the next chapter posted as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton

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Really good! Can't wait for more! 10/10

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Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one and all that emotional stuff that you mentioned about the magazine! Good luck with your exams, by the way! I know the feeling : )
10/10

Author's Response: thanks!!! haha.

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Oooo, what's gonna happen next??
I cant wait to find out! Great chapter, again!!
update soon?!

Author's Response: haha. idkkk. hah thanks!

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Okay, I just read all six chapters straight through and I am absolutely favouriting this story! It's so funny, I was practically dying laughing at one point, don't remember when! I've been looking all over this site to find a quality Next Generation story with the kids as teenagers, and I think you write this one wonderfully! Can't wait for more! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks ever so much:)
I'm glad you find it so funny, and will post more soon!

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Oh, that was so cute. And it was funny too, Ron talking to Harry's armchair and everything. Hope to read more from you soon!

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Okay, first of all, I have to say that this was better than the usual truth or dare story. You actually made a good effort to write the characters realisticly.

It was predictable, but it was cute! There were some spelling/grammar issues, and a couple awkward sentences, but overall, I thought it was a nice story. Keep trying!

Author's Response: Thanks! I did try to make the characters realistic and I'm glad it worked out. Thanks for reviewing!

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Bravo! Another great bit! I think I know where this is going, but I really can't say because Hermione (and you) always have me guessing. One chapter I think she is ready to split from Viktor, and the next I'm thinking that she is sticking with him until the end. You're good : )

Haha, my favourite line was:
"I tend to think in huge, confusing circles." Haha, it was so perfect and funny and completely appropriate for the situation Hermione's in. Brilliant. 10/10 as usual.

Author's Response: haha thanks!! i'm glad that its not predictable. those stories are always a bit boring. haha. thanks!

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Great chapter! I loved it. Your writing it so good, I love the way you're able to write how Ron and Hermione are both feeling without dragging on about it or being unrealistic. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

10/10

Author's Response: I am pleased to know that you are enjoying the story. You say such nice things, but I try SO hard to make my chapters what they are. Have you ever wondered why it takes me so long to update? Haha. Well, thanks for reviewing!
~Alex

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Good job, I liked that chapter. I am so addicted to the lying and scheming Hermione is doing right now, it's so Hermione, yet so not Hermione, you know? Like she's acting impulsively and doing what she really wants (well almost...), but at the same time, she hates what she is doing.. I don't know, I'm rambling, but I mean to say is that you write her very realistically! Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks! hahaa. i know what you mean. haha. thanks so much!! thats a big compliment for me.! =]

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That was really good! Even as a linking chapter, I thought it was funny. And the Neville and Luna stuff was a nice addition to the mix. Update soon, please! I can't wait to see what the boys will do to Hermione. : )

Author's Response: Thankyou! (hates linking chapters, but is glad you like it!)

LuNeville! yaya!

Updating when I have time to write and edit and post and wait for the queue!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Lv Wizardora


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Oh, so good! It was completely hysterical. Can't wait for more.
10/10.

Author's Response: Thankyou I'm glad you liked it and found it amusing! Update soon as chapter 4 is in the queue!

Thanks for reading, reviewing and giving such a high rating! ^_^

Lv Wizardora

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That was bril! I still thought is was really funny. And yay! Ginny is in it a lot this chapter, she is my favourite character!! Okay, so I was like dying laughing reading the first chapter and then this one. I'm on to read chapter 3!

Author's Response: Haha! I can't say I'm a Ginny fan, but seeing as this is a story about sex... Ginny's gotta fit into it somewhere. OW! That was my friend mentally hitting me for saying such things about Ginny. Slaaaaaaaaaaag.

Go on! Read on! Please!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^_^

Lv Wizardora

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Brilliant! Thanks for the update! I can't wait to read more, hopefully soon?

This chapter was a bit less uneventful then I would have liked, but something crazy can't happen in every chapter. But it was a good intro into all the wedding stuff, and to see how Ron was feeling and Hermione with Viktor. Anyways, I'm rambling. I really enjoyed this. Literally, I gasped with joy when I saw that you added another chapter! I'm reeaallly looking forward to another interaction between Ron and Hermione! Keep up the good work!
9/10

Author's Response: Yes, hopefully soon you will see more. As long as life stays out of the way and my brain stays together. :P

Yes, this chapter wasn't all that eventful. But it will pick up next chapter. I'll tell you this, we will see Ron and Hermione together again. At least, in the same room ;)

I'm glad that I could make you so happy with this story. I like to think my readers get some kind of enjoyment from my stories. Thanks for a great review!
~Alex

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Great chapter again. It was a bit boring at the beginning but I understand that was because you had to get Hermione back into her routine and set up the whole lunch thing. Too short, mostly because I LOVE long chapters, but I know you'll have a long one next time. It was awesome for the update!!!

9/10. !

Author's Response: haha, yeah. sorry. thanks so much!! =]

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That was good! Short, but good. Please update soon!

Author's Response: thanks :)

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Ooh, wicked good! Thanks for updating, I've been waiting. It was really nice to see more of Bliss's life! Yay! Okay, well 9/10. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm sorry it took so long to update...its been quite a bit hectic lately. I'm just not what I used to be lol. I'm glad you liked it though!

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Ahaha, that was awesome. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happenens next, of course!!

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Oooh, very good! I can't wait for more!
9/10. : )

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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Woo! I love it still! Absolutely brilliant and you updated so quickly! Yay! More, more, more please!!

10/10

Author's Response: woo! thanks!! =] i will, i will.
=D

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Ahh, oh my God! Great job! I actually and literally laughed out loud at the beginning when everyone was yelling about Lydia and such, and you should be proud because it is very hard to make me laugh when I'm reading something. And Ginny was in this chapter a lot, so that made me happy. I was just asking where she went before because

1.) The whole Harry thing, but you answered that : )
and 2.) Because she is my second favourite character and I was hoping she would be in it. Thanks!

I only wish it had been a bit longer, but that's alright since you updated so quickly! Nice job. And I have to be honest and say that you have me fooled. I think I have an idea of what is going to happen as the story continues, but I can't be sure and I really want to know!

Brilliant, again. 10/10. More!!

Author's Response: Yeah, my chapters are usually a bit short... hehe. And I'm glad you enjoyed the return of Ginny!

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