Reading Reviews From Member: LilyEvans613
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Review #1, by LilyEvans613First Class: First Class

6th November 2013:
Loved this story! Excellent characterization of the characters from the Marauder era - loved it :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

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Review #2, by LilyEvans61319 Years: Year 3: May 2nd, 2001

15th September 2013:
I love how you wrote this from Fred's perspective on the anniversary of his death. Once again, excellent chapter! Can't wait for the proposal ;)

Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me so happy!! I'm really glad you liked it, and I'm excited for that part as well. I hope you'll enjoy it :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #3, by LilyEvans61319 Years: Year 3: Previews

2nd September 2013:
This is an excellent story. You've really kept true to JKR's characters, while at the same time growing them up gradually just enough. Beautiful scenes with the children (you write toddlers quite well!) Keep writing. Cheers!

Author's Response: That makes me so happy, that you think so! Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're happy with the characters, that's a really big compliment to me, so thanks. And I'm also glad you liked the scene with the children (they're mostly based on toddlers I know, so I'm glad that they seem somewhat accurate!) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and your kind words!

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Review #4, by LilyEvans613Before They Fall: A Test of Wills

16th July 2013:
Please please please PLEASE publish your fanfic as G. Norman Lippert did with his James Potter II Series! I read through each and every one of your chapters yesterday and on into the early, early hours of the morning because I simply could NOT stop.

I have shipped Lily/James ever since Rowling's subtle insights into their relationship were dropped gradually throughout the HP series, and have since spent time really searching for a fanfic that does them justice (as well as the entire Marauder era). The closest I'd come (until now) was entitled 'Potter's Charm' and while I'm certain it earned several awards for its depiction of L/J, etc., I must say - it doesn't hold a candle to 'Before They Fall'.

I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for the final chapter of this book (I think I read that in another review here!), and I CAN'T WAIT for the second installment.

Excellent work, positively captivating writing - please please look into publishing so I can add this story to my HP collection!

Author's Response: Hi there! I just looked up the name -- I hadn't heard of him!

I don't even know how to begin thanking you for the amazing comments you left me. To be honest, I probably won't ever try and publish this. I'm really happy having it here on HPFF, and am working on writing an Original Fiction novel so I try and put plenty of time into that. But the fact that you think so highly of it means more to me than I can explain.

There's one more chapter posted, and then the last one will be posted this coming Saturday (I update every Saturday)! I'll start writing the second book and posting chapters probably 3 weeks after I finish this one (to give me time to finalize the outline) and that book will also be updated every Saturday :)!

I hope you know how much this review means to me, and I feel so honored that you've taken the time to leave it ♥

Thank you so much!


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