HEY this story is great! Dont let any1 tell you different.
its awesome so keep riting.
luv lilypadandprongs4eva

Author's Response: Thanks! I promise that there will be more chapters out soon! In fact, I'm working on Chapter Five right now! :)

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I LOVE IT I LOVE I LOVE IT
U BETTER WRITE MORE
KEEP IT UP
LOVE IT!

Author's Response: thank you (:

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so sad
evil!!
love it!

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U EVILL
MORE I NEED
it just got EXCITING!
aww
SPOIL IT TELL MEE!
plz??
aww
well 100/10

Author's Response: to start..i really don't think that i am evil. honestly. and you KNOW i can't spoil it for you. thanks for the 100! lol and for the review, dear!

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please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please write more quicker please please please please please please I LOVE IT
thnx
10/10

Author's Response: Hehe sorry!!!
And thanks so much!

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you are evil GET ME MORE OR I WILL TRACK U DOWN AND HURT U!!!
(this is me saying 'i love the story and please continue'
10/10

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ok bad ending
but GREAT STORY
i thought petunia hated lily?
ah well i like it this way better
keep writing
love it
xxx

Author's Response: Umm thanks?
She did, when they were older. But who says she didn't love Lily when they were kids?
Thankies

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MORE!!
boo hoo
need more
and james the evil arse
grr
good story!!

Author's Response: Yes, I rather agree with you there (not on the 'good story' front, but on the 'James the evil a***' front). But Lily needed to get jealous, so I have to write terrible things. *sigh* Well, anyway, thanks 4 reviewing!!!!!!

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umm is it ava or rose
make up your mind
and love da story

Author's Response: it's ava. i originally called the character rose but i changed my mind when i started editing it. so m,ost of the chapters still have rose but it will change, its the reason why have 'revisions' in the main summary. thanks for the review

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U R EVIL
great story
sad though
keep it up xD

Author's Response: I've been told that since I was little the evil thing. I can't help that it was sad it came to my mind that way. Sequel still being worked on...

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u suck
I NEED MORE
dont stop!
the best fan fic so far
keep writing!
10/10

Author's Response: I suck? =(

And thanks! =) New chapter up...no idea when. But it'll go up sometime! =P

Thanks for the review!!

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hey
ur story is great I LOVE IT
plz write more
i hate reading half a story
still work on the spelling
it's lose not loose
anyway
i repeat great story

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u r evil. what happened 2 happy endings
jeez
anyway
love the story though
xD

Author's Response: haha...well i leave the "ending" to J.K. Rowling ;)

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HEY you are so good! work on the spelling
its mischief
and spelt
and sent
etc
but great story LOvE it
10/10

Author's Response: I'm glad yo like the story.
Sorry about the spelling, I try to post the chapters with as few mistakes as possible, but grammar has never been my strong point. However, when I notice one I try to correct them.

Hope you like the next chapter.

Paola

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hey great story LOVE IT and u need 2 rite more PLZ!

Author's Response: yay! thanks. i'm writing more don't worry!

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OMG I NEED MORE and u need to work on ur spelling xD

Author's Response: lol there will be more..yeah I know...I'm not all that great at spelling, that's why I usually have the computer catch my spelling errors

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U SUCK I NEED TO READ MORE OF IT! HURRY UP I DONT LIKE BEING IN SUSPENCE! great story start tho

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hey is the story finished? how much more chapters

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best story so far
plzplzplz write more
i need the ending
ur a talented writer dont give up
and im so reading ur other stories when i finish with this
keep it up

Author's Response: Thank you so much! and i'll look foward to you opinions on my other stories- though they are not as good as this one! I really liked this chapter but this one gave me a whole lot of bother but i loved it when ut was finally up. I will UPDATE asap- just started college so it might be slow- but just the next chapter because its giving me a little problem which i can't seem to solve!

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i luv ur story it was really good. only thing i didn't like was the way u changed point of view and didnt say whos it was cause it was a little confusing. anyway good story
:)

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good story i read the whole way through it. i liked it but sometimes the characters didnt seem that real, like they are in the books. just constructive critisim. all the ideas for the different stuff that happened were amazing...i liked merlin house :)

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yeah i really liked this story it was sooo good and i liked the idea. oh and i liked the mention of twilight cause that and harry potter are my fav books! anyway good story :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

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GET MORE CHAPTERS!!

Author's Response: I will, I will! Calm down! :] lmao. Chapter 3 is in waiting.

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NEED MORE!!

Author's Response: Haha, there will be more soon! xD Thank you!

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aww need more 2 read

Author's Response: you will have more soon!

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