I absolutely adore everything about this story. Seriously, I get embarrassingly excited whenever I see you've updated haha. It's wonderfully written and Edie is beyond relatable and basically it's just all-around fantastic. Sorry, I'll stop dorking out now. Long story short: you're an amazing writer, your story's brilliant, and I hope you update again soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you!! Seriously, I just, I just love getting reviews. Writing is the only thing I feel confident about sometimes, but it's still scary to put yourself out there with the potential of receiving bad reviews. (Most people could brush them off, I'm sure, but it's really important to me.) So seeing things like this just really makes my day, to say the very least. Thank you so much! ♥ Report Review
I really, truly love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'll try to get the next update soon but my computer is at the doctor :( Report Review
I've been reading this story since 2008 I believe and I still love it haha. Thank you for not abandoning it! It really is a wonderful story, keep it up! :) Report Review
This story was absolutely fantastic! I hope you write something like it again in the future. You write humor wonderfully. :)Author's Response: Oh, wow -- thank you so much for such an unexpectedly lovely review! :) It really did make my day to click onto my page and see this.
I actually do miss writing these character quite a bit, and am not opposed to writing a sequel about them. Vague bits of it are swirling around my head, so it may not be too long before I set them to paper! I'm beyond pleased to see you enjoyed the humor; sometimes I feel like my humor writing is hit or miss, and you really have boosted my confidence there.
I can't tell you how much I appreciate your taking the time to leave me your opinion on this story! Thank you!! ♥ Report Review
I'm absolutely in love with this story. It's so relatable and well-written. Please keep going, it's great! 10/10, and I hope you update again very soon! :)Author's Response: hi there! thanks so much for reading and reviewing! it means loads to us. we're so glad that you're enjoying it so far! thanks again, and we hope to see you at the next one!
~ Danica and Molly Report Review
I'm a massive fan of Oliver stories, and this has to be one of my new favorites. I really related to your main character (Pervy should definitely be my middle name, and the fact that I also enjoy animals and do a fair bit of cross-stitching in my free time) and I think the story is fabulous so far. To say the least, it's been 'favorited.' :) Hope you update again soon!Author's Response: Thank you very much!! :D I have to admit a bit of the perviness and the crochet details come from personal experience (I also cross-stitch a bit :D). Glad you're enjoying it, I'm hoping to get chapter 5 finished soon :) Report Review
I really really like this story. You're doing a fantastic job. The plot is really interesting, and it sounds like a good read. Only thing is there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. You might wanna look into getting a beta. Otherwise, this is fabulous. I hope you keep writing it, I've favorited it. :)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I know this chpater is a bit rough, I wrote it really quick 'cus I wanted to get it in the one-hour queue a few days ago. I'm gonna go back and clean it up soon. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Your story is really good, but the only problem is that you have your third chapter and your second chapter switched. :)Author's Response: thank you (: and oh your right! I wonder how I did that, hahaa :) I'll fix it now. Report Review
This is really cool. Hope you update soon. =)Author's Response: I might get out a chapter before the queue closes, may not. I hope so.
Thanks for reviewing, Hugs
;) Report Review
Lmao. Awesome. Loved the ending.Author's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
Aww the ending of this was super cute. I love it. =]Author's Response: Tehe, why thank you!
I'm happy that you liked it so much :D Report Review
Hahahahaha, that was freaking amazing! Great job! Report Review
I'm think goo. Purple goo. And ham.
Yes. GROM consists of something involving sticky purple goo and lots of roasts ham. Report Review
Well, when you're offering off THE Remus Lupin, who can help but make a guess?
Just guesses. I was sure. =]
Great job. Keep up the fantastic work.Author's Response: SoooOooo close! It was really:
Bobby = Wildcat
Stephanie = Pheasant
Alexis = Ermine
Callie = wren
Hell, you can have Remus Lupin anyway! But i want him back!
Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hmm. I'm thinking that whatever Oliver does to Flint will somehow involve a balloon, a popsicle, and a plastic spoon.
My own personal accusation, of course.
Amazing job. I love this story. =] Report Review
'Twas fantastic! Keep up with awesome work! I'll be not-so-patiently waiting the next one. =D Great job!Author's Response: Why, thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and the next chapter will be u as soon as it's finished! Thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
Awesome job! Ahhh! So close! I can't wait to see what you are coming out with next!Author's Response: Dear SweetAndSilent21,
Thanks so much!
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom Report Review
I have to say when I first read the title I was very upset. I am a redhead and frankly we do not think all that highly of ourselves. However, after reading the story I must say that I enjoyed it and everyone loves a happy ending! Good writing... for the non-bashing redhead parts :]Author's Response: Sorry. I personally love redheads. I think they're beautiful. And I just couldn't help writing the story. It was really fun. Thank you so much for leaving me a review. Report Review
I found your story very interesting and enticing. Keep up the good work and write more! :]Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
I love your story. It's vair, vair amusant. xD
Keep up the great work, and i hope to see the next chapter soon!Author's Response: Thank you for some many compliments!
Ch 11 has just been submitted, but its not one of the better chapters and I really hate it quite a lot so I apologise in advance.
Thanks for a lovely review! Report Review
This is one of my favorite of your stories. Please get the next one out as soon as you can!Author's Response: Dear SweetAndSilent21,
Thank you so much! The next update will come WAY sooner than this one came (thank God!)
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom Report Review
LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next one. We going to see some Remus action soon? Hope so. I love me some Remus Lupin. *snicker snicker*
10/10 of course!Author's Response: you are talking to a girl with the same mindset : ) Report Review
Love your story. It's really cool, and really well written. Keep up the amazing work!Author's Response: Yay!! ^_^ I'm really glad that you love it and that you think so :D Thanks so much for reviewing, I'll check out your stories :] Report Review
I really like this story. Please continue it!Author's Response: Thanks so much, I will x Report Review
Oh my. That was just absolutely amazing! I love Remus, and this story and the other one you are working on are amazing. Great story, just dandy really. xDAuthor's Response: Thanks all around! Report Review
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