Reading Reviews From Member: DUMBELDAVE
  
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Review #1, by DUMBELDAVEHarry Potter and The Inevitable: Chapter Four: The Prophesy

24th November 2014:
This was longer but several spelling issues ,

Author's Response: I've been going through the chapters looking for spelling errors, if you could give me some examples I can go back and fix them.

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Review #2, by DUMBELDAVEHarry Potter and The Inevitable: Chapter Three: Sealed Lips

24th November 2014:
To short Please a bit longer ok

Author's Response: I know some of the chapter are short, but that's how I write my stories.

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Review #3, by DUMBELDAVEHarry Potter and The Inevitable: Chapter Two: Unwelcome Guest

23rd November 2014:
Interesting chapter , a bit short but off to read more

Author's Response: Some of the beginning chapters are short, I'm sorry!

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Review #4, by DUMBELDAVEHarry Potter and The Inevitable: Chapter One: His Bloody Scar

23rd November 2014:
Aaaack Voldy decides to show in the first chapter ??!!!???
Interesting beginning !!

Author's Response: I'm glad you started reading the story!

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Review #5, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: In the Name of Survival

21st November 2014:
Wow Ended better than expexted but wow !

Author's Response: Quite a lot happened... and about to happen. New chapter is up on the site!

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Review #6, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Reunions

21st November 2014:
Ah this isn't going well !!!

Author's Response: Ah, but for who? :)

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Review #7, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Messages From the Mysterious "They"

21st November 2014:
This so not going to end well for miles

Author's Response: He's getting himself in deeper, isn't he... ;)

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Review #8, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Betrayal

20th November 2014:
Miles your a dead man walking

Author's Response: He's certainly made himself a pretty big target...

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Review #9, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Choices

20th November 2014:
Omg omg omg omg omg
Omg omg omg

Author's Response: I take it you liked the chapter then? :)

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Review #10, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Into the City of Angels

20th November 2014:
Ah miles come on do the right thing

Author's Response: Miles is a bit mixed up... he's not quite sure what the right thing is or even how to judge such a concept... we shall see where his journey leads ;)

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Review #11, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Deep Sea Drama

19th November 2014:
Damn Parvati and voldy lol Good chapter though !!

Author's Response: The chapter did promise drama... :)

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Review #12, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: The Echo

18th November 2014:
Parvati is no more Jus t evil person now Ugh

Author's Response: Hmm... time will tell I suppose ;)

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Review #13, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: The Monster of Hidden Falls

18th November 2014:
Wow once again a brilliant chapter ! Off to read more

Author's Response: Thank you, happy reading!

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Review #14, by DUMBELDAVE#3 Harry Potter and the Marqueesian Scrolls: Journey to Jennitha August

17th November 2014:
Aye carumba what is that ? ?

Author's Response: The Monster of Hidden Falls :)

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Review #15, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: The Cost Of Freedom

16th November 2014:
Wow sorry to see it end but happy that it will continue
I will be definetly looking for the next story
Thank you for taking the time to write it for all of us

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Review #16, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: The Patients

16th November 2014:
Again one awesome chapter after another LOVE IT

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Review #17, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: The Boy With Two Names

16th November 2014:
So SO FRICKIN awesome !

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Review #18, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: Passing Through

16th November 2014:
Wow wow wow wow what at an awesome chapter love this storyline

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Review #19, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: News In The Night

16th November 2014:
Good choice Draco Good choice

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Review #20, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: Aches And Pains

16th November 2014:
Bloody hell that was and is awesome

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Review #21, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: King And Croaker

16th November 2014:
Ah man not the veil ! ! ! ! !

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Review #22, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: A Memorable Morning

16th November 2014:
Wow Awesome chapter ! ! ! ! !

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Review #23, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: A Night Gone Wrong

15th November 2014:
Oh crap it wasn't really snape was it

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Review #24, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: The Best Laid Plans

15th November 2014:
wow really to mcgonnagAl ! ! ! ! !

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Review #25, by DUMBELDAVEInitiate: A Letter To Charlie

15th November 2014:
well was t that interesting !

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