{reviewid: 1643897, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
Aaah! What happened? I love your banner.
Author's Response: thanks, I like making banners for this site. Hope you read the rest ! thanks so much for the review
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{reviewid: 1643796, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
Don't know why you hate it - I thought it was beautiful. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you; I will :D
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{reviewid: 1643784, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
beautiful, lyrical writing
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
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{reviewid: 1643768, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
Excellent, the conversation seemed really natural
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{reviewid: 1643763, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
Really good emotion
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{reviewid: 1643727, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
I liked it but Sev.'s father wanting to join up with the Death Eaters seems pretty far fetched, especially considering that his father is a Muggle...
Author's Response: Thanks. It was a decision I had to make, but I might change it. Who knows?
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{reviewid: 1643712, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
25th September 2007:
Well-written, very vivid
Author's Response: I appreciate that so much!
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{reviewid: 1626520, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Very cute
Author's Response: Thank you :P
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{reviewid: 1626495, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Oooh, I love this story. Keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1626473, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Lots of fun
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{reviewid: 1626453, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Waaah, no more chapters. I want to know what happens!
Author's Response: lol, you will soon! i'm updating now...
thanks for your review,
xoxox
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{reviewid: 1626426, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Oooh, sexy
Author's Response: lol, glad you think so :)
thanks for your review,
xoxox
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{reviewid: 1626281, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Loved the part about naming the baby Trevor - I just about fell off my chair laughing.
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{reviewid: 1626257, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
You've got an inspired mix of humor, drama, and real emotion - it all comes together really well. Loved the line about Bill making a "fetching kitten".
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{reviewid: 1626247, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Excellent writing. You've really got the pacing and characters down.
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{reviewid: 1626168, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
When she saw Harry Potter next he’d wish he’d never asked her to wait because she’d definitely be waiting… waiting to KILL him!! - Fantastic line, I absolutely love it. I love swearing, angry Ginny.
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{reviewid: 1626146, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
So beautiful. I've already left a review but I just re-read it and couldn't help myself!
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{reviewid: 1626135, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Absolutely scorching.
Author's Response: That's what I was trying for. Thanks for all the reviews
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{reviewid: 1626091, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Woo-hoo, awesome kiss between Ginny & Harry!
If you get a chance would you check out my story? My first fanfic!
Author's Response: Glad you like. Yes I'll check out your fic
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{reviewid: 1625913, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
“I hope so mate” Ron replied, “Dean Thomas looked like Christmas had come early.” - excellent line. I think you've got the characters down really well.
Author's Response: I was quite fond of that line too. I'm glad you think I've got the characters right.
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{reviewid: 1625890, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Very sweet but I think you could draw it out a bit more, for example, instead of telling us that Ginny is experiencing morning sickness you could write about how she feels like vomiting every morning.
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{reviewid: 1625807, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
I think Mrs. Longbottom could have been a bit more eccentric - after all she routinely wears a hat with a stuffed vulture on it. Good chapter though
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{reviewid: 1625798, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Once again, just lovely
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{reviewid: 1624506, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
11th September 2007:
Beautiful scene between Harry and his aunt Petunia.
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{reviewid: 1624471, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
11th September 2007:
Very descriptive, the scene was well laid out
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