I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in ages!
I've been writing essay after essay for Uni but now that they are all done (for now) I decided to read some Sneth as a celebration.
It's hard to describe my reaction to this chapter and the two previous ones that I just read. All the deaths are making the war feel very real and I'm nervous because Sev must be responsible for Marlene and her family's deaths. As always I still love your writing and the way you can make me feel what Beth and the others are going through. It's like I'm in there with them not knowing what's going to happen next. I'm going to be so upset when this whole thing ends.


x Magic.

Author's Response: No apologies are necessary, honestly -- thank you for returning in the first place! ♥ I completely understand how busy schoolwork can be, but fan fiction is, I find, a great reward for it. ;) I hope you aren't working too hard!

ITR and BE got very real war-wise, I think, and that's largely because of all the deaths that were necessary, even while being awful. And you're quite right about Severus being involved in them, too, which is something I love/hate about him from canon -- knowing how much he was responsible for before Lily died and he turned spy for Dumbledore. HE IS SUCH A COOL CHARACTER.

I'm so, so pleased that you love my writing. I really am! ♥ Emotions and realism are two major points I try to get across in everything I write (as I'm sure I've told you) and when someone mentions feeling one or the other, or both, it's the biggest compliment in the world.

Seriously -- thank you for your review! I can't wait to hear more from you, and I'm looking forward to getting back into posting after my holiday!

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Of course i would continue reading this even though the updates are a little slow... I cant really judge I haven't updated my book in months.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

:)

Love Tragic

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I am so scared!
I'm a little bit skeptical at the Marauder's attempts to find Sev's memories of Beth and give them back. I know if anyone can it will be them but I feel like Sev should explore it for himself as he has already started to.
I cannot wait to read what happens.
As always brilliant chapter and my favourite Snape/OC story by far.

Magic xx

Author's Response: I'm under the impression that the memory search won't go quite as anyone's anticipating, if past reviews are any judge, so you'll have to wait and see what goes down there! ;) If it does help, remember that they have no way to restore them -- yet... Severus will be able to do a bit more mental digging, definitely.

I'm absolutely flattered that this is your favorite Snape/OC. ♥ That truly means so much to me, and especially because not a whole lot of people write them! I never set out for popularity, but the reaction to these books has been unexpectedly amazing. I am very grateful to all of you for making Sneth what it is!

Thanks so much for reviewing -- it was lovely to see you back here again! I'm already eager to hear your further thoughts, too!

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I Miss Mary too..

I cry about it sometimes...

I love TAOB so much and when i found this, I nearly died inside.

You created a wonderful character and I was so upset that she died.

Thank you for your amazing stories I've read most of them and I will continue to read everything you write because you story telling is additive and so are your characters.

Thank you so much.

Love Tragic.

Author's Response: TRAGIC! I've missed you! I've really missed you!!! Hi :D

Thank you for being so lovely and I'm really glad you liked this too! Hopefully see you around soon :D

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This was wonderful.
I really enjoyed it, particularly the last memory.
"She sees me, too" is by the far the most perfect thing I ever read. I had to stop myself from squealing in happiness.

Well done,
Magic.

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for reading. :)

Eee, Beth certainly does see him! It took Severus /sooo/ long to see her, and by the time he opens his eyes to his perfect half hiding in plain sight, she of course knows just about everything about him. Perks of staring from afar for many many moons. They just belong together. ^ ^

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This chapter was great, I loved it.
It makes so much sense that Sev now thinks he joined the Order to protect Lily. I can't wait to see what happens next. The flash of a memory with Beth was a perfect ending to the chapter as well and also the way that Sev's mind feels now after having so much removed. I've always wondered what it would feel like and you wrote it so realistically.

Magic xx

Author's Response: It's so great to hear from you on this story! :) I'm pleased as punch that you liked the chapter, too. Writing that Severus thinks he's doing all this for Lily has taken some getting used to, but there is hope in the memory flashes, of course. Those are pretty important to the rest of the story, too -- keep a lookout for them!

Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter for me. ♥ It was fantastic to see your name in my unanswered reviews stack again! I really, really hope you enjoy the rest of Breaking Even!!

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OH MY GOD.

HE KNOWS!!! he knows. Omg he knows...

I am so scared. And... Happy.

Yay, what a great chapter, I'm so happy you have written more.

I can't wait to see what happens next, I love this book and I hope this motivates you to write more soon. ASAP.

Lots of love, Tragic.

Author's Response: I'll try and update soon :) Thank you so much for reviewing, and the encouragement!

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I hoped that Dumbledore would keep the memories!
I know he's a great supporter of love so it's hard to imagine him destroying them. The ending was a little unresolved but I actually like it. When Beth realises that Severus truely does not remember her I felt like crying but the conclusion brings back the hope that I lost, which then leads perfectly to Breaking Even. I've loved this story so much. Just when I thought I knew what was coming a new twist in the plot showed up and it really does make it an enjoyable read. Well done, I will definitely be counting the days until the final installment.

Magic xxx

Author's Response: There is hope yet! :) And your comment on his support of love is actually a very apt one, and I swear you've read my mind. You'll see why towards the end of Breaking Even!

Your reviews have been so appreciated, and I hope you know just how much they truly did mean to me. ♥ Seeing your name back after new updates never, ever failed to put a smile on my face.

Thank you so much -- and I'm looking forward to seeing your thoughts on Breaking Even, too!!

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I need more, I don't know if you still go on this because you haven't updated in a long time but it would be wonderful if you could continue this has to be my very favourite story on here.


Magic xxx

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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYA that was so cute.

Goodbye Theo and Hello Draco :)

that's whats going to happen.

Right?

Wonderful chapter, write again soon.

Love Tragic.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the chapter! Yes, eventually Draco will take Theo's place. :] That's been the plan all along. Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you'll read more when it's posted. :D

--Emily

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Please don't let Scorpious be dead.
I really love your interpretation of his character, it's very realistic and very well written.
Bea is awesome. I don't have to say anything more.
I like this chapter especially for Fred's involvement. It really helps the story in as a whole and shows where he fits in, if that makes sense.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Magic xx

Author's Response: Ahh thank you! :) I'm glad you like Fred's part - he finally gets a bit of time in the story -- properly! I'm hurriedly writing the next chapter now, hopefully I can post it right after the holidays!

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I really love this story so I hope you do continue to update :)
I can't wait to see what the Marauders are going to do.

xxx Magic

Author's Response: Thank you and believe me when I say I can't wait to get to that part of the story. :)

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The storyline is moving a little slow, but ultimately I can see why it's important. All in all, I really enjoyed reading everything so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. You write beautifully, especially your descriptions of dresses and so on, it really helps to visualise what's happening.

Magic xx

Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. Honestly, I'm kind of afraid people will get bored! But I know what I want to happen, and I think it'll be worth the wait. Thank you for your review :) x

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Oh my God.
I'm so excited and scared at the same time for Beth and Sev.
A brilliant chapter as always.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Magic x

Author's Response: Ahh, it's so great to see you back here again! :D Between you and me, you're quite right to be scared for them... although it might be for different reasons than you think. You know, I'm quite curious to see exactly what people think the resolution of this story's going to be, seeing as from this point where you've reviewed only five chapters are left...

Thank you so much for popping back in again, though! It really is so encouraging to see you're still reading, more than I can properly put into words. Thank you so, so much, and I'm very much looking forward to hearing how you react to what I've got in store! ;)

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This was a lovely story and Luna's name just fits so perfectly.
I loved everything about it :)
Very well done.

Magic xxx

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The end of this chapter made me really sad.
It was fantastic though, I was cheering on the inside when Sev told Beth about the prophecy, I can't wait to find out how everything goes down.
Well done.

Magic xx

Author's Response: The end of this chapter is a bit sad, isn't it? I'm afraid that tends to happen a lot, I've noticed -- I promise that I can write happy things! I think I learned a long time ago that sad stories are more cathartic, more emotional, and I've just tended towards writing those, I think. But I'm very glad that you liked it all the same!

I'm very proud of Severus, actually -- can one be proud of one's own characters? And I suppose he's not even mine. Ah, well. I'm sure you know what I mean!

It was great hearing from you again! I'm so thrilled that you're still reading and enjoying this story. That does mean a lot to me, to have steady readers like yourself. ♥ I look forward to hearing more opinions from you on future chapters, too! Thank you!!

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Loving where this is going :)
It's funny and the boys' personalities are perfect.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Magic xxx

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This is awesome.
I loved reading it, I can't wait for the next chapter.
You've written it very well, and I love the funny parts haha.

Magic xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I hope you like the rest. This story is quickly becoming something I really, really love to write. Thanks!

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I hope Deuce teaches that girl a lesson. I wonder why she made all that up? The wait for a new chapter is painful. Please update soon

Love Tragic

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HAHAHHAHA I WAS EATING JELLY AND MY MOUTH WAS FULL WHEN I READ " i think my cat has worms" There is now jelly on the computer screen HAHAHAHAHAHA omg that was so funny... breathe breathe breathe. Okay im good now.

Author's Response: Hahah, I love that it made you laugh like that! Glad that you're good now though, and thanks for yet another great review xx

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OH MY GOD.

I'm in shock. I can't believe this. Dean is either missing or dead. Draco is amazing as always and Hermiones so confused. I AM GOING TO KILL HARRY AND RON.. if i could...

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Oh yay I'm so happy right now. It has begun.
Hey it's Tragic here still loving this great crazy story. Please write again soon, it's hard waiting for the next chapter because i love the book so much. Lots of love Tragic

Author's Response: Heya! This review gave me a wide smile, thank you! I hope you like the next chapter (which is in the queue as I type) xx

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So so good.
I definitely need more.
Ron can go suck it. Hermione and Draco are meant for each other.
By the way, I may have skipped this but did Ron know that Hermione miscarried? Sorry if you have already mentioned it.

Love it.
Magic xxx

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Yay a new chapter and a bit of a Scorp and rosey sesh :) wooohooo. Im so looking forward to the next plan and i absoloutely love the last line because it reminds me of Alice in wonderland :D please write some more soon

Love Tragic

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hahahaha well done, i simply loved this chapter. Draco is an idiot for thinking the worst. Poor Hermione :( I cant wait for the next chapter

Love Tragic

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