Ohhh, I want him to feel PAIN! And, humiliation. And, futility. And, PAIN! Does that sound harsh? :-) Come on, Draco, save the day! Thank you and please update again REALLY soon. Thanks! HG4evaAuthor's Response: Yowza! That's intense, and I couldn't agree with you more! It DOES sound harsh, and that's how it should be, haha! That's what our hero is for, *wink, wink!*
Thank you so much, hon... I'm SO glad that you're enjoying this!! :D Report Review
Hello there. I am so very sorry for your loss. I hope you have millions of good memories to help get you through the harder days. I am sending you a cyberhug. [[Cathyyy]]
The update was lovely, as usual. I loved the insight into Narcissa, the love between Hermione and Draco, and the friendships she has with Blaise and Amber. But, I admit to being very sad that Hermione, Harry, Ginny and Ron are no longer friends. The end of friendships always saddens me. And, it was good to see George. I miss Fred, too. Sigh. Well, I hope you update again soon, because I need to read some happiness. And, Hermione kicking Pansy's butt, (figuratively and literally if you want) will be great to read! Thanks hon. Another hug to you, HG4evaAuthor's Response: Thank you *hugs back*.
I'm glad you liked the chapter and I do agree with you, it's very sad to see her lose her friends like she has, but she has made new ones - something that happens to most of us, we have strong relationships and then... we're forced to make new ones, for whatever reason, you know? I wanted to kinda show that one's life isn't over because you stop being friends with someone, you can always find new friends =)
I'll update really soon, I promise! =)
The next chapter is already in validation!
- Cathy Report Review
I like them all lovey dovey. It's cute. lol And, their restraint is admirable, even if it doesn't last too long. :-) ha ha ha I wonder where Ron is and how he's doing. hm Well, I hope you get a lot of updates in before the school year begins! Good luck in uni! HG4evaAuthor's Response: Yep, it's cute, but with their...ahem...mutual interest in each other on a certain level, it certainly won't last for long :D Ron is alright, he's just in denial. ;)
Thank you for the review and the good luck wishes! :) Report Review
Interesting and intriguing beginning. I look forward to more soon. Thanks! HG4eva Report Review
The two people I dislike most in this (Harry Potter) world, Umbridge and Skeeter!!! UGH! I know this is a Dramione story and as much as I look forward to seeing how you bring them together, I hope and pray you find a way in your story to let HM McGonagall publicly and painfully hurt them both! Heck, here's an idea (you can ignore it but I need to get it out...lol) have Draco help bring them down to show how far he's come. tee hee hee
Thanks for a really good beginning! HG4eva Report Review
Intriguing summary and a very interesting beginning! I look forward to more soon. Thank you! HG4evaAuthor's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
Hello. I like the beginning and the maturity you've written in for them. I look forward to more soon, okay? As for constructive criticism, the only thing I can say for now is watch your capitalization (crookshanks vs. Crookshanks). :-) Keep writing!! Thanks, HG4evaAuthor's Response: thanks for that I'll check over all my spelling mistakes once ive finished the story - point out anymore throughout the story it would be much appreciated.
Glad you liked it so keep reading.
xx Report Review
Wowee wow wow wow! I have never enjoyed stories where Draco was a werewolf or vampire until this one. And, I don't think I would even try another. lol That entire update was perfect! I could "see" the action as it took place and Hermione's cold calculation was palpable! Great job. Now, I can't wait to see how much pain he puts Agilolf in after Hermione is done with him! Fantastic! Thank you, Hg4evaAuthor's Response: Holy smokes! Wow! You've really never enjoyed other 'supernatural' stories like mine before? I have to admit that I haven't read any... but I always figured they must be pretty good. Wow, thank you for that!
I'm really loving writing action scenes; I've never done it before, but it's so much fun!! I'm glad they work out how I want them to...
More is on the way... thank you so much, hon!! :D Report Review
Hey there! Welcome back! I had no idea how much I had missed this story. But, even though it's been months, I was able to jumped right back in like it was yesterday. :-) As evidenced by me name, I am thrilled that Harry and Ginny are back together, even though I do feel a bit sorry for poor Dean. I did that to him in my story, too. lol Ginny and Hermione's talk was lovely and very "real." I completely understood both sides and it was great to see them do so, as well. Blaise...I'm with Draco! Ginny setting up Ron and Pansy was hysterical. Her monologue in the library cracked me up!! But, the fact that her manipulations are working is great! I know it might take you a while, but I do really look forward to more sooner than later. Thank you, hon, and welcome back! HG4eva Report Review
What I think would be hysterical is if he later used his words to her in the woods as his vows. tee hee hee Thanks! Report Review
Well, I just sat and read all five chapters and I am impressed! Your story telling and writing are very intriguing and I really do look forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4evaAuthor's Response: Aw thank you sweetums!
That means a lot :D
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I really hope to see you back for more!
-Midnight Report Review
What a perfect title! I loved the way it encompassed everything so beautifully. Good job! You had me really worried about the baby for a second there. lol But, I am glad it's all good. And, how sweet was he?! Lovely, simply lovely! I look forward to more really soon!
Thanks, HG4evaAuthor's Response: Phew, glad you liked the title - it took me a while. Yeah that little moment of worry will be explained later... oooh intrigue. Everything did work out though! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
I have absolutely no idea how I have missed the last three chapters of this story?! But, as bummed as I was to know I missed them, I was ecstatic to realize I would get to read them all at the same time. I feel so badly for Careen, as I am sure she's so very confused. She likes Hermione, but misses her mother, but wants her father happy...poor child. And, I really do enjoy your Draco and his growth from the spoiled, rich jerk he was to the man he's become. Hermione's pain and internal anger make me wonder if she will deal with it. And, part of me thinks she and Narcissa need one another more than they each realize. lol I am really glad I found this story again and I look forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4evaAuthor's Response: I love that feeling :P Honestly, I wish my Draco were real. I'd take care of him and Careen in a heartbeat ^^ And you're right about Careen. Poor kid. Thanks so much for your review. Report Review
I will definitely be here when you get back. :-) I really enjoy this story and their slow growth toward one another. That chapter had a little of every emotion possible and I am very impressed. I look forward to your return! Thanks, HG4evaAuthor's Response: Aw- thank you! *jumps up and down* That means a lot to me that you will still want to read after the brief hiatus =D. I am so glad you liked the chapter, and your encouragement means the world to me. ;-) x Report Review
I am so happy to see an update from you! That was fantastic from start to finish. I think the part that sticks out most to me though (even though Matthew's arrest, the memories, and Narcissa's anger were all great) was Lucius' apology. I loved that he made it because he promised Naricissa he would, but that he actually meant it anyway. Simply lovely. Thank you, HG4evaAuthor's Response: Thanks, hun!
I\\\'m really glad you liked that and that it stood out for you, all together, this chapter was fun to write, but Lucius\\\' apology was on of the most fun things to write, so I\\\'m glad you liked that.
-Cathy Report Review
That was fun, funny, and cute. Thank you for sharing and for giving me a few giggles! HG4evaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
Ouch and OUCH! I feel so badly for them. I completely understand Hermione's reaction, and I wish Draco had found a way to fight harder for her. But, I am still hoping you have something brilliant up your sleeve for him to do that will make it all right. ;-) Thanks again! HG4evaAuthor's Response: I have changed the ending about 3 times already! fingers crossed to get it right! Report Review
I am happy for you that your summer vacation is here, and equally happy that you are writing this story again. Thanks! HG4evaAuthor's Response: Yay summer! Lol. Thanks for the sweet review :) Report Review
This is really cute! I am enjoying it a lot. I hope you update soon. Thank you! HG4eva Report Review
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I like the complexity of it and the fact that you are building their friendship before their relationship. I loved this chapter because of all the highs and lows. Thank you. HG4evaAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and the Draco/Hermione dynamic =) Thank you for such a lovely review! Report Review
I somehow missed the last update so I got to read two. Yeah!! lol I honestly have little to say other than I really hope he can find a way out of this. This story just makes me...sigh, you know? That's a really good thing, by the way. :-) Oh, and I still think Astoria has evil tendencies, even if she isn't the murderous jerk Lucius is. ;-)
HG4evaAuthor's Response: Astoria? As in Alissa, you mean? Maybe they could be twins :-)
I could probably try a one shot with really evil twin sisters, this sounds like an interesting idea to me... We'll see! I'm almost through with this one!
tks for reviewing! Report Review
Merlin's Muddy Mucklucks that was perfect! The hope and depth in her vows, the love and devotion of his...simply lovely! Thank you. HG4evaAuthor's Response: Aw, girl! My grin is so big right now! Mucklucks... HAHAHA!! I'm so happy that you liked it! And, that you've completely understood the meanings behind their words (I'd expect nothing less from a such a fellow hopeless romantic). Thank you! :D Report Review
This story is utterly fascinating! I really do look forward to more soon. I can't wait for her reaction to all of this. Thank you! HG4evaAuthor's Response: aww, thanks! The next chapter should be up in about a week or so. You're very welcome and thank YOU for leaving a review! ^_^ Report Review
All I have to say is...YEAH!! You wrote the angst and worry perfectly. And, the confession and first kiss...superb. Thank you! Hg4evaAuthor's Response: Thanks! :) Wow, I didn't even realise I was writing angst... I wonder if I should add that to the 'Genres' list x)
I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for reviewing! :) Report Review
I absolutely adored that chapter. Everything from their friendly teasing, to his banter with Blaise, and his nervousness at meeting her parents, was done really well! I hope her parents don't freak out too much when they learn the truth. And, I still can't stand that manipulative beeyotch that is Pansy! I hope she's embarrassed so badly at New Year's that she won't ever show her face again! I look forward to more of their visit with her parents soon. Thank you for the update and please do so again soon, okay? HG4evaAuthor's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked it!
Yeah, I think that the whole 'telling Hermione's parents' is going to be a bit emotional, or at least I hope that it will come off that way; it should if I have done it right.
And Pansy... I am dreading the chapter where I have to, finally, let her make an appearance. I know I will dislike her, haha.
The next chapter is in validation, so it should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
- C Report Review
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