Wow, I love this story. It's very original and I like your portrayal of Sirius. You mentioned he might be out of character but to me he seems very in character. Personally, I don't think Sirius was the extreme playboy everyone always makes him out to be. But that's just me :) update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Yeah, I definitely don't think Sirius is a playboy in the Harry Potter novels, but I do think he was much friendlier than he is portrayed in this story. I think he had loads more enthusiasm and downright happiness. =]

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I love you story :) Your writing is extremely good. Ahh, but why is Sirius being such a jerk to her? Is he jealous or just mad that she didn't listen to his warning about Regulus?

I can't wait for the next chapter! I love Sirius and Neely together and can't wait to find out what happened between them.

Author's Response: Sirius is being a jerk for a variety of reasons. He's clearly aggravated that Neely refuses to listen to him, like you pointed out, and jealousy is certainly a factor :) Couple that with the fact that Sirius isn't an overall bubbly and friendly character and you end up with the Sirius you saw in this chapter. Thanks for reviewing, and yes, Sirius and Neely's relationship will definitely be covered soon.

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I just wanted to let you know that I think this story is amazing. You have thought of a really good idea and it's well written too. I'm surprised it hasn't gotten alot of attention yet. It will though :) keep writing!! I love all the letters, brilliant.

Author's Response: Awww thanks for such a sweet review!Keeping me positive about it haha :) I hope it does get a bit more attention - that would be nice :)
I liked writing the letters as well :)
Glad you liked it and keep reading! x

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