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Review #1, by truesablePotter and Prejudice: Pressure and Protocol

14th August 2007:
I just read through this story in the space of a few hours; I hope you don't mind that I didn't leave a review on each chapter, but honestly, they would have deteriorated into insipidity, so I decided to roll my comments all into one.

I don't quite remember where I saw this story recommended -- I think it was in someone's favorites as I was browsing the archive. Or maybe it was your signature on the forums. Anyway, I don't generally read Lily/James because they're all pretty predictable, but Pride and Prejudice happens to be one of my favorite books, so once I saw the title I couldn't resist! And I wasn't disappointed!

There's several things I love about this fic, and I'm sure I'll forget some, but I'll do my best. First of all, I love your narrative voice. It's just such a pleasure to read, and the wit you insert here and there is just fabulous. I can't remember the exact quote, but in an earlier chapter, there was a bit about a refilling plate of mashed potatoes...it was just so out of the blue, it cracked me up!

I also loved your Sirius. You made him seem very real: true to canon but not disgustingly cliche. His impulsiveness and boisterousness are annoying in a really endearing way; and yet there are some things he really cares about, and his enthusiasm about them is sweet. Thanks for writing him so well!

As for predictability, the main reason I don't much care for L/J fiction, it didn't much matter here. If you'll allow me to draw a comparison to Pride and Prejudice (bit trite of me, I know; I just hope you really did model your title after it, because if not, I'll end up sounding like a twit, won't I?), it's predictable, too - we all know they'll end up together (spoiler? haha), but we're still rooting for them the whole time. In the same way, Potter and Prejudice is so well-written that knowing James and Lily end up together doesn't make me rejoice any less when they kiss, or feel any less suspense and pain when you end a chapter like this!

I really do ramble without purpose, don't I? And it's the middle of the night, so if none of that makes sense (I'll look at it in the morning and realize I was completely incoherent...), I'll put it simply: I love it!

Can't wait for your next update!
~ts.

Author's Response: Oh. my. god. wow. I'm in shock! This is the longest review I've ever received! Thank you :) Don't worry, this definitely more than makes up for not reviewing every single chapter!

Thanks for the comment about my narrative voice--I think I sound more like myself when I'm writing than when I'm speaking, personally. And I'm glad you liked the line about James' wildest dreams (one being the never-ending plate of mashed potatoes, of course!)

I'm so flattered about your opinion of my Sirius! I think he's a pretty difficult character to write, and I always second-guess my portrayal of him, so I'm glad you liked it!

Wow--your last point seriously is putting me on the verge of tears. You're so sweet! And yes, a bit of this story is modeled after Pride and Prejudice, just in the way that Lily is soo convinced she won't like James, but they're both a bit foolish...and then they finally fall in love after proving themselves worthy of the other. As for predictability, I'm so glad you brought it up. It is, of course, a predictable ship...and easy one to write but a hard one to write well. It makes me so happy that despite knowing exactly how the story ends, you still find yourself caught up in it. That's how I feel with really good movies, so I'm thrilled you said it!

This most certainly was not a ramble in any way...it was the most lovely and amazing review I have ever, ever received, and I can't thank you enough for it. I hope to get the next chapter out sooner rather than later, and this review just gave me so much motivation to do so!


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Review #2, by truesableAlice: Alice

11th August 2007:
Fantastic.

The fragmentation, the weaving repetition of the various refrains...wonderfully done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #3, by truesableAfterglow: Afterglow

11th August 2007:
Absolutely brilliant! Although, admittedly, I have a soft spot for HG/SS pairings, all too often they depict Snapes and Hermiones that are disturbingly out of character. This piece is remarkably in-character, remarkably poignant, remarkably crafted - just remarkable! I intended to sit down and read one story for a few minutes, and now look what you've made me do - I have to go read the sequel!

Author's Response: Wow! It's amazing to hear (actually read) you say so - it's incredibly difficult to keep them in character at the same time as trying to pair them together, so I'm pleased that you thought it worked out. ^_^ Thank you very much!

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Review #4, by truesableNow Comes the Night: The Night Always Starts at Dusk

6th August 2007:
I just read Complicated Hexigon and Remembrance in one evening, and I must say, both were simply fantastic (although I have to admit, I still don't understand everything). I'm so glad you're adding to the trilogy -- I can't wait to see what you have in store!

Author's Response: Thank you SO much for the review. A lot of things in the story are hard to understand and I'm really hoping with this third part, things become clearer in a nonconfused way. LOL. If that helps! *hugs* Thank you so much for the review and I hope you enjoy what's to come!

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