"But it is brillant we should lodk them in a room together and leave them in it until they admit it!" Ginny said smiling.
Well, in this sentence you spelt lock with a 'd'. I also saw a couple times you had a comma after a period marking the end of sentences, but that was all I could find. Anyway, great chapter! I had read the story before, but I forgot some of it (mainly funny little one or two liners) I can't wait for the next chapter revise!Author's Response: yeah it will be up soon and guess what? I got microsoft word now yay! it has spell check! thanks for the review! Report Review
“You named me after an escaped convict form Askaban who broke out to kill you?” “Wow…Sirius is awesome!” “Hey! It’s an older Al!” - wow, James is officialy (one of) my favorite character(s) in this story. This chapter was hilarious! I love how you dicribed Victoire when she saw Lupin. Back to James for a second, hilarious, I think I might have woke my sisters laughing so hard. Can not wait for What a Christmas it Was!Author's Response: thank you so much! Report Review
wow, this is really interesting. it's well writen, can't wait for the update!Author's Response: Really! I'm ecstatic that you liked it. I'm sorry to say an update won't be up for a while but two more stories should be up within the week thank you soooo much for reading! Report Review
ooo, it's interesting so far. I can't wait for teh update and to find out more.Author's Response: aweh, thanks :]
yeah, it's really my first true harry potter fanfiction and if i do something i do it right. lol. anyways, i really appreciate your review and i would really appreciate you telling some friends? if that's possible. thank you Report Review
This was fantastic. I always thought that that first friendly convsation would be rather akward. I am going to have to keep an eye out for the other missing moments. Great job!Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you liked it. Report Review
Ugh! I hate cliffies! post more asap please! Great chapter. Report Review
This is so good and well written. The characterazitions were perfect. It was so realistic. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
This is great. Second person (you don't see enough of those around), full of emotion, and about Ron. definately a 10/10 and going of my favorites.Author's Response: you really don't see a lot of second person, eh? I guess its because its hard to write... not sure if I'll attempt that again, though it was certainly fun trying! thank you so much for the review and support Report Review
This is so cute. It is so funny.Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Wow, I don't know what to say or think. Every chapter another twist is added. This is an awesome chapter. I feel so bad for all of them. Victor, Ron, Hermione... and poor Harry and Ginny who have to deal with them all. Again, great chapter. 10/10 update soon.Author's Response: haha. thanks!!! =] i will =] Report Review
OMG, this is so well writen. It made my laugh, cry, and smile to myself. I think this is seriously one of, if not the best R/Hr I have ever read. 10/10 and definitely going on my favorites.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
another good chapter. poor Angela and George. they must feel horrible. hurry with the update! Report Review
It's good so far. You caught how George must have felt well.Author's Response: thanks! =] im sorry it took me forever to respond, i managed to kill three computers between my last chapter post and now... and i am trying to get a few more up... so hang in there! =] Report Review
Why were cliff hangers invented? I love how Teddy keeps up the 'Why' game. I like Hermione's reaction to seeing the 'red headed realitve' Great chapter!
10/10Author's Response: haha. thanks! cliffhangers are made for the authors enjoyment! haha. jk. =] Report Review
Ooh, a cliffie, darn. might have been...what?!? I seriously have no idea of what it could be. I am wondering what the heart was for and if there are rooms behind to other tapestries (sp?). please update soon, I want to know what the room is/was. (Please)Author's Response: next chapter is coming soon! thanks for your feedback! :) Report Review
Yay, another chapter, just as good as the first. But I can't help wondering, where's Neville and Luna?Author's Response: Next chappie! *Evil glares*! Report Review
I was all depressed because I thought that you hadn't updated in forever. Then I realized that you did, I just missed it, so yeah... Great chapter! I love how irritated Ginny is at the security guard in this one. Is there really a law like that? And about the Harry Potter Imperio joke, I actually do that all the time. Anyway, good job and can't wait 'til next chapter.
Oh yeah, I'm a girl in America and I'm a girl.Author's Response: The people who reviewed from Australia said that really was arule- its weird- what's threateing about wood? (they probaly think that diseases or some bugs could be transferred trhough it or something) Thanx for reviewing- I think Ive read one of your stories before- your name sounds familiar Report Review
great chapter. I am begining to wonder what is up with this Marigold Scott. but we'll find out soon, right? can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Marigold is just a little girl, very cute, very nice. But you will find out soon how VERY important she is to the plot.
Clue: It's gonna get kinda confusing....
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OMG this is such a good story! I can't beleive I missed it. this is so going on my favorites! Report Review
great chapter. I like what Scorpius said at the end, even if it was a bit mean. But I guess she deseved it though. I feel bad for Scorpius because of how Rose is treating him. 20 eating utensils?!? that's alot. can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
lol, this is great, 10/10! I agree with crazygurl17, write more when you can.Author's Response: :) Report Review
At first I was going, "Yay! Hermione beat Lavender!" then I was depressed, "Arg!! Ron's back with Lavender, that idiot!" and I was laughing at the tips for 8 & 9. At some parts I wanted to slap Ron and at other parts I wanted to slap Hermione and the whole time I wanted to slap Lavender. So, yeah, this was a mixed emotions chapter, but great chapter though, 10/10 for sure! (sorry, I am tad bit hyper right now) And congrats on being premoted TA! Report Review
Hey, Liz, congrats! Your story got through! Only, you will probraly know that by the time you read this review... anyway, great job on your first chapter (the spacing in between the lines is great, along with the new paragrafts when new people speak, lol)! Can't wait to have to help you edit the rest of the story! LOL :-)
Oh yeah, one more thing I have to say, Creepy?Author's Response: thanks tay ur the best well ill be over to write more chapters so lol oh almost forgot creepy!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
that is just horrible what Jamie's adopted grandmother said! I wonder what the meeting Bella had with DD was about?? nice chapter. Hurry w/the update!Author's Response: thanks
i'll try to hurry;;lots of other work Report Review
"Or sooner?" very interesting! more suspense that's always good. great chapter! I love Rose's reaction to the song. Poor Scorpius. hurry with the update!Author's Response: thanks. Report Review
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