You have to continue this. Seriously. Please? :PAuthor's Response: I will, don't worry. It's just taking longer for me to edit the first chapter and get the second one started. Once I get over that, it'll all run smoothly. I'm working on it, I promise. Thank you so very much for the review, and I'm sorry it's taking so long.
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This story is beautiful. I find it sort of confusing with the memories, but the rest of it is great!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing ^^
I'm very glad to hear you found the story beautiful; I tried to write a story where tragedy becomes bittersweet :)
I'm sorry to hear that the memories were confusing. Because they are somewhat essential to the story--giving some background to the events taking place, in a way pulling the past and the present together--they had to be there, and I really tried to mark them clearly. Thanks for your feedback though, I'll go over the story and see if I can clarify it any way I can think of ^^
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This is a really good story. It'll be really fun to see all the Weasley's and their reactions to Scorpius :)Author's Response: Yeah, it's extremely fun to write! Thank you for the charming review :) X Report Review
Wow, this is actually really good for someone who doesn't like Draco/Hermione! I liked the story - you really have a way with words! :) (P.S. I don't like Dramione that much either, but I liked your summary so I just had to read it anyways ;P)Author's Response: Thank you!! :D I'm thrilled that you liked it.. And I'm even more thrilled that you liked it even though you're not a dramione fan.. :P *high fives* And you liked the summary? That's great, since I hate writing summaries.. :P Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing! :D Report Review
This is wonderful. I love this idea!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
I like this. I really like this. Please continue. :)Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I'm glad to hear that you like it, and I should be updating relatively soon. Report Review
Interesting. I wonder what could have happened for her to have those thoughts, and who it was Teddy moved on to. Keep the good work up! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far! The next chapter will reveal a lot more, I promise you... I just had to add a bit of mystery at the beginning. ^_^ Report Review
This is a really good story. Liked it a lot :) Very sad, though.Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it even if it was sad. : ( Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
Very interesting. I'd like to see how this'll continue :) A couple of misspellings here and there, but nothing major :)Author's Response: Thank you!
Thanks for the heads up. I'll carefully go over it again. Report Review
This is a wonderfully thought up story, very intriguing and interesting since you've managed to keep Hermione's characteristics and still play around 'girly' things. I'll definitely keep reading!Author's Response: hehe I wasn't trying to keep Hermione totally...Hermione xD but I am glad that it turned out that way :) glad you like it enough to keep reading! Report Review
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
You asked me to drop by and leave a review, so here I am! ;P I like the character, and also that she's already in love with Sirius and not hates him, like almost every other OC in Sirius/OC-stories does. I think it's interesting that she's in Slytherin and still likes him - be careful, though, and make sure you show some of her Slytherin sides. Otherwise it's just like a Gryffindor character put into Slytherin for the sake of the plot.
Good luck, and do update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Glad you like Jess, she's based on one off my friends! I know what you mean about the Gryffindor-in-Slytherin thing, so I'll try and make Jess a little more evil/powerhungry.
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This is interesting. I really want to see how this mess turns out ^^ Report Review
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