GRADY!!! HA I love him. So good! I've been waiting for this chapter, holding my breath for forever to see what would happen, and it's so great!Author's Response: I'm so sorry I took so long to respond. But I'm relieved and happy that you liked how I wrote him! He wasn't much of a challenge, he really was just a dream to write, because you developed him so well. But I'm glad you liked him, I was definitely nervous :O I'll have too finish this chapter soon I think. Report Review
It was really good. Actually, it was surprisingly good. I loved the Rose and Scorpius chemistry going on, very cute. Especially the bathroom scene lol. There's nothing I can really critique on this except the exaggerated puncuation (e.x. He was like 'what??!?!?!?!?!?!?'). haha can't wait for the next chapter. And I guarantee if you get a banner more people will read this. Report Review
Hunter: Are you just here to insult my boyfriend?
Me: No! I just want to understand you-
Pete: Understand this James I-
Me: OH MY GOD! WHERE DID YOU COME FROM?
WTF that was the funniest thing ever! I'm so glad you updated this! I love it! 34293857/10. Your the funniest writer ever. Report Review
awww albus is so sweet! And the pregnancy test, that was really original! Excellent job! Ooh what troubles are in store for them? lolAuthor's Response: I have a lot of things planned for Albus and Nat...they'll never know what hit 'em! Poor kids...
Next chapter out soon! Report Review
Aww I love Jacob! So cute! He and Lily are perfect together. I could get you a banner if you wanted on my account at the dark arts. I certainly can't make them. Just tell me how you want it and I'll request it. (Like what actor or actress you would want to portray Lily and Jacob) Excellent job.Author's Response: I'll do some internet surfing when my math teacher drops off the face of the earth (or maybe this weekend) and let you know - you are my hero for the next five minutes! Report Review
lmao. That's hilarious!!! HAHAH YES! I almost died laughing. i totally wasn't expecting that. great job! Report Review
haha I like it AND it started off with action right away. I hate the ones that start off in the train station. Your characteriztion of Sirius... hit the mark and that was Lily alright. Excellent!Author's Response: Thanks so much, I was really worried about Lily... I've never written her before and I was iffy with it :P x Report Review
Cute! That is an original idea. An adopted Potter. I honestly never have time to sit back and read stories anymore so it was nice finally being able to find a good story to read. If you didn't already look at my response to your comment, it's fine with me if you used Grady. It's actually quite an honor, just credit. Thanks!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love Grady, he's awesome. You made a great character. And you like my story! I'm so glad, love getting positive feedback. So thanks for reviewing and next chapter will be up soon.
Thanks! Report Review
I won't kill you, but you're killing ME! AHHH! update soon please. Great story!! Report Review
HAHA lmao that was hilarious. Very good
"how many girlfriends have you had lately James, *gives finger* yeah thats what I thought" hahahahahahahahha my favorite I can just imagine them doing that. Report Review
ooh i never thought of bellatrix that way. She's still mean don't get me wrong but she was brought up that way, to hate others. To always be the best. Its really good! when's the next chapter?Author's Response: aw thanks Im definitely trying to give a reason for why she is the way she is, up until now schools been out of control, but hopefully i'll have some time to write this week. thanks for the review Report Review
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