Another great job. This is quickly becoming a favorite story for me. Please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to update as soon as I can!
I appreciate you for being my only reviewer!
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I don't know why there are no reviews, but I think this is great. But I think (at least it looks like this to me) that there are actually two sets of the chapter. Right after it seems to end, its starts over again. But that might just be my computer.
Anyway, I think it's great. Well written, stays true to character. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you for reviewing! You're right it does seem to start over again, I have no idea what happenned there! (Kind of embarrassing my first fanfic and something goes wrong!)
I'm trying to stick to the characters true personality and not make Draco too nice or Hermione too much of a 'bad girl'. Again thanks for the review!!!
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Aww! I can't believe there are no reviews for this yet. So here goes. I love seeing a soft, sensitive side to Draco. People can say what they want, but there is canon evidence that he does have this side, it was just never actually written down (so us fanfic writers get to do that part ;) )
Again, this is great. And I love a happy ending.
Many kudos to you!Author's Response: Thank you :)! Report Review
This is so good... I love it! I'm a huge what-if'er. In real life as well as in books/movies whatnot.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This made me sad, but not in a bad way. I always wondered the same thing. But then, if they hadn't died, none of the stories would have happened. But at the same time, it doesn't make me any less wanting to give Harry a big hug and telling him that things are going to get better.
Great job!Author's Response: I know! I just want to take little Harry and spoil his whole life for him by telling him all the wonderful things he will do. Except... that might not work... but thanks! Report Review
This is good. My main thought? It would be great if you made it longer, so that it wasn't just everything happening right after the other. Because, if there were more chapters, the part where Draco and Hermione find out they used to be friends could be drawn out, and then maybe add in something where Lucius did some kind of magic to make them temporarily forget about the other or something and now, after all this time, it's starting to wear off? Like I said, this is really good, but I think it could be even better if it were longer and each part more expanded. It just seemed a bit rushed, which is really the only complaint that I have about it. And like I said, now that you have the whole story written out, and could go back and just add in places. Again, I'm just trying to give suggestions as to what I do when writing and try to make longer stories.
Hope this helped!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the constructive criticism. A lot of people won't do that. I'll definitely give it some thought. Now that I back on it, it does seem pretty rushed. So I think it's a pretty good idea to go back and add things. Thanks for reviewing again! It really helps A LOT!!
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Wow, ok, I can truly say I didn't see that one coming, I mean, in a way it makes sense, but wow.Author's Response: oh yeah.. haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
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My favorite part, I think was about Crabbe going back to devouring his cupcake. So perfect of his character! Oh, and I really liked the rest as well :)Author's Response: oh haha...I love Crabbe and Goyle even if they are kind of the bad guys. haha. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!!
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I loved this! I am a huge Dramione fan and try to read all I can find. This was very well done, and by the time I was finished, I didn't even realize it was a one-shot, as it seemed to be so much longer.
Wonderful job!Author's Response: Thank you :). I wrote that a long time ago, back oh gosh...back in 06 or something but took it down for whatever reason and then posted it back up after I realized that it was a one-shot lol.
Anyway thank you potterprincess07 for reading and reviewing (Check out my other stories though I am not good with my grammer and such > Report Review
These are really good. I sat down and read all the chapters that you have to this point in one sitting. I'm hooked. I can't wait until you update. I have an idea about the next heir, but I don't want to say anything just yet, in case I'm wrong. Report Review
Wow. I am so intrigued with this. I love love LOVE it. Report Review
I love the cliffhanger! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Report Review
Great job! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Report Review
This was cute. I've been hearing this song on the radio for the last month, at least. I could really see the characters. You have a very vivid way of writing.
Keep up the great work!Author's Response: Thank You so much for the kind words! :) You are really kind.
Yeah, it is a popular Xmas song and it has lots of versions. My story is based on the music video of the one by Wham.
Merry Christmas! :)
Hugs xxx Report Review
This is great. I love this song. I've been hoping to find a story based on it. You did a great job. Report Review
I just found this story. I love it already. I love Dramione, and I love when they are bit out of character, because after all, its why we write fanfiction, right? Because we want characters to do something that didn't happen in canon? Great job!Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for this encouraging review. It feels so long ago I looked at this chapter .. I hope you continue reading, and you grow to like it further. (: thank you again,
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Awww! I love it. I can so see Dumbledore doing something like that! Great job! Report Review
Update soon please! This is really good. I can't wait to find out what happens! Report Review
This is great. I love the part about "Call me Albus". Reminds me of some teachers that I once had who are like that now. Feels weird, I have to admit, I know, that was off topic, but couldn't help it. Report Review
It's good. I promise not to throw books at you :) After all, that was something that was highly speculated would happen, so I'm interested in finding out where this goes. Report Review
It's cute. That's the first thought that came to mind. I like it. It's simple, it's basic, and it's fun. Great job.Author's Response: thank you! i really felt like writing a pretty simple one so here it goes :) im glad that you liked it!
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I really like the wording of th letter. Sounds very canon. Um, I'm not good at reviews for first chapters, lol, but this is really good :)Author's Response: Thanks heaps :) Its a short chapter so its hard to review but thanks for taking the time and effort and I hope you like the rest of the story and what is left to come Report Review
It's a good beginning. It's hard to really say much else, as the story is just getting started, but I think it's off to a good start.Author's Response: very true as beginnings can be quite tricky sometimes...thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Loved it. Seriously, this is funny. Sarcastically funny, which is even better.
Great job!Author's Response: thank you so very much!! Report Review
I thought this was really good. My first thought was that it kind of reminds me of the movie Sweet November. Especially in the way that she left.
Great story!Author's Response: I've never seen that movie before, or heard of it.
I might just have to check it out. (:
And thank you! xx. Report Review
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