There's something real sexy about sev in this story!Author's Response: Haha, I'd love to know what it is! I tried deliberately to make Severus unattractive in this story, since I tend to demonstrate the other sort of bias in most of the stuff I write about him :) Anyway, it's great that you're enjoying the story. Thanks for much for stopping to review!
-Amanda Report Review
Excellent. You're characters very real and I like that you don't make Lily a pushover. :P
She gets mad when she should be.Author's Response: Thank you! I try really hard with my character development so it's really nice to hear it's working out!
And she definitely isn't a pushover! I hate pushovers; I could never make my main character one! Haha, well, thanks for the review! Report Review
I love this story! It's the best thing I've read. Please, please update. It is so so so good. So good. Report Review
This story is amazing. You need to update, pretty, pretty please? Report Review
It's such a good story. I love it. You don't do any of the annoying things sooo many other authors do. You have update, it's too good. Report Review
OK I love it so much. And you really, really need to update before we all die. Don't hook up Lily and James too fast, the chase is the best part. :)Author's Response: This story is being rewritten to fit canon. The new story is in my profile. Same title, different banner and summary. Thanks for enjoying the original.
Oh, I love this! But I think James and Lily are moving too fast. The chase is the best part. hehAuthor's Response: Mine too, hehe! I thought that much more of it would have made it too prolonged though.Thanks for reviewing! Keep reading! Report Review
It's really good. More? :D Report Review
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