Wow this seams like v for vendetta type thing, ha or at least thats what it reminds me of so far. Love the movie btw. Sorry, quickly putting in a review, and then moveing on to the next chapter to see what happens next. Veryy good so farAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you like it, as I'm a bit unsure about this story at the moment. So it's good to have some positive reviews :)
I like how you explianed the relationship between Sirius and the Potters, and then how Liz felt with them
Im courious in to what Dumbldores place is in this situationAuthor's Response: Well... Dumbledore isn't too important until later. Keep reading and I'm glad you've gotten so far. Thank you for your review!!! Report Review
I want to see what else is going to happen
i really like this begining to the story, it works
simple, yet cuteAuthor's Response: thanks! Personally, I had always thought my beginning was a bit boring, but it's nice to see you disagree. Thank you for reviewing!!! Report Review
Ok very interseting, i love it, plz continueAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it. :) Next chap is up in validation. Report Review
Ok that was really sweet and soo cute. I dont think I can say anything else about it.
I do hope that you can fix ur computer up, 1 because I know how iratating that can be, and 2 because I want the next chapter up LOLAuthor's Response: I think my computer may be okay ::goes and knocks on wood:: but I can't make any guaruntees. I will try and get the next chapter out soon Report Review
Yay! Woot they finally got togeather, and everything is out there. Im happy that this happend, and Iam wait to see what else you have in store for this storyAuthor's Response: Glad I still have your attention, I was afraid I'd loose readers after this chapter. Thanks for the review!
~Fire Report Review
Aw so cute I love it! I have loved the whole story, and this was a good way to end it. It seams like this could have been just an other chapter, but it is the end. So sad but I have enjoyed the story so much. Keep writing, give us other great stories that we cant wait for the next chapter to come up.Author's Response: hehe thank you i loved writing the whole story myself i just thought this chapter could show the family in its entirety and the close bond between them don't worry im gonna keep writing =] Report Review
Ok you just can not end it there. Every one who has read the HP books has wonder and wanted to know what happened in thoes 19 years. Then you came along gave us a story to read, your version of some what of what happen in thoes years we missed. This story is brilliant, adorible, and it is so true to the books we have loved and still do. I love your story. I cant wait for the epilogue and I think we all want one.Author's Response: dont worry i wont end it there i am planning a sequel =] im glad you think that about it though all the response ive had for this story has been magnificient and i have to say thank you to everybody whose reviewed it and dont worry the epilogues taking a bit longer than i expected cause i want it to be perfect Report Review
Ok I do love your story but I hate how she is with Davies, sorry but I really do. I dont see why she just didnt tell Oliver, I mean she did want to a few chapters back, I remember that at the ball. She had an opening why didnt she take it? I want to see where you are going to lead us now in the story that they are broken up.Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And its cool, I completely understand. After creating such a golden couple of Fallon and Oliver I expected some opposition. Its nice to know people like my story enough to take an opposition. =D.
To answer your question, its because she had to work up an unreal amount of courage, only to be interrupted by George, therefore her nerves were completely shot. Thanks for the review! =D
Cayla~Fire Report Review
Ohhh interesting whats going to happen next?? Keep on ading stories I want to see how this is going to end up!Author's Response: Thanks hun! Will update soon! Report Review
Ok Im in love with the story! Please add more chapters, you are keeping so much from us. I cant wait to find out whats going on and whats going to happen next. Report Review
I really do like this story, it just has something to it which I love. Im waiting for the next chapter, so hurry up and post it fast. Report Review
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