Reading Reviews From Member: mrdarcy
  
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Review #1, by mrdarcyInto Temptation: A Mean Cup of Coffee

4th March 2008:
That was awesome :) Your descriptions are brilliant and I love the fact that Careen doesn't want anyone, even Hermione, to replace her mother. Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, if I had been in her position, i wouldn't either. Thanks so much for your continuous support in this story!

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Review #2, by mrdarcyInto Temptation: Patheticness and Irony

31st January 2008:
Interesting take on the story... Introducing Narcissa! The plot thickens! Bravo so far, looking forward to the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #3, by mrdarcyInto Temptation: Parent-teacher relationships

31st January 2008:
Very nice interaction between Draco and Hermione, as well as between Hermione and the Headmistress, and I loved Rosalind's description! However, I think Careen is a bit too mature for a five year old and a bit too perfect for a character... maybe that's your intent, but still!

Author's Response: I don't think she's too perfect a character. Everyone is essentially flawed, its just that you haven't really had a chance to witness Careen's. And I've noticed that when some kids are put under... non-preferable situations, they seem to have to mature a lot earlier... as in they don't really get a chance to be a kid. I mean, no mother and a father who isn't sure he wants her? Sometimes these kids have to find a way to fend for themselves and, in Careen's case, Draco. I'm sorry if you think she's too unrealistic a character, but its a usual pattern (I think) in kids with broken homes and it isn't too unrealistic (I think =P) because according to one review, there is another kid like that somewhere out there. I'll admit, its rare. Of course it is. Its the dream child. But as Careen's life gets easier.. you will witness her being much, much more of a kid. =) Anywaaaaay... thank you so much for your review! And thanks for telling me what you think!

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Review #4, by mrdarcyInto Temptation: Kensworth Preparatory School

31st January 2008:
Very interesting prospect so far!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #5, by mrdarcyInsanity: Unexpected Encounters

6th November 2007:
How on earth could my banner inspire such an awesome story? I'm really looking forward to the rest! Obviously you're not just an amazing banner-maker, but writer as well! Your A/N was so lovely, thanks so very much!Cheers and keep writing!

Author's Response: awwwwwwww, you make me blush so much >_< and that banner was so awesomly amazing it deserved a story that was like holy bejeebus good. =D and your welcome!! I'm glad you like it and I deffinitly plan on writing more :)

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