Brava, it was so good! I like the story and development so far and I can't wait to read the rest! Its a very logical evolution of the books as well, which I like about it.Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you continue to enjoy it. :o) Report Review
amazing! brilliant! i loved it. 10/10 and a gold star. Report Review
Brilliant. Angsty but in a sweet sort of way, if that makes any sense.Author's Response: It makes sense to me:). Or maybe we're both nuts. :S Hehe. Thanks for the review, Ella Evans! It made me smile Report Review
good job, i like the story so far.Author's Response: Thanks a lot, big thankyou for the time you took out to read and review! -R@pier- Report Review
ahhh and of course you end it there. haha, good job, cant wait to find out what happens nextAuthor's Response: I just posted the sensored rewrite of chap 20, as soon as it's validated, please RR, thanks for the review, send more. Report Review
brilliant. short but oh so sweet.Author's Response: Thanks! (I almost forgot I had this one lol...) Report Review
dont get me wrong, i say almost only because jkr herself didn't write it. but i can so see it happening this way! loved it. ( I know I already reviewed but i had to clarify that 'almost,' lol)Author's Response: Oh no, I wasn't offended or anything! I only...umm...*sigh*ed because Jo didn't give Bella a redemption in DH (and she killed off every single one of my favourite charaters while she was at it)
Umm...thanks anyway! Report Review
Brilliant, I loved it.Author's Response: Thanks, Ella Evans.
~Megan Report Review
brilliant! i love the series! will there be a third installment maybe? please? maybe the fallout from the weasleys and such, or something like that. good job! Report Review
i love it! good evolution of the family, and almost completely believable. it is definitely a feasible senario. good job!Author's Response: Almost *sigh*
Thanks for your review! Report Review
no it wasn't because you said "he would triumph against this evil." so it made it seem like it was from harrys pov. i still had my suspicions but good job! Report Review
i love your disclaimer on this chapter, lolAuthor's Response: I try to make them funny- it gets so dull, after a while. Report Review
"blissfully unaware of the cruel vicissitudes of fate."
i love that sentence.
good story but i highly doubt, auror training or not, harry would have stayed out of the fight waiting for voldemort. but i like the ending.Author's Response: Thanks, and yeah I know, but I needed to be able to have harrys thoughts out, and that would have been slightly harder if he was killing Death eaters at the same time.
Glad you liked it though! Report Review
ooh wonderfully angsty and set up well. i feel it needs a bit more explanation in certain areas where you just gloss over but this could be intentional on your part. guess i'll have to wait and see. can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanx for your review! It was intentional on my part about it being vague. The chapter was from Harry's POV and his wasn't clear so the things that were missing will be revealed in later chapters! Report Review
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