I've never thought of, or read, a story about Draco, Blaise and another girl's POV. I'm excited to read this story and see what happens when Draco finds out about his two best friends getting together.

Author's Response: awe why thank you for your review! I actually got the idea by reading a story about how Sirius's daughter was his world after his wife's death, and I thought "well what if he 'hated' her?" And thus, the story was born! Yes, please keep reading and let me know what you think! I'd really appreciate it :)

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aw! yay!!! that was a fantastic ending to a really good story. i love big families so i like that you made that the theme of the epilogue. good job on the entire story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much (: x

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That was great!!! I can't believe they're going to forget all that happened. They have a crazy future ahead of them. I just wish that when the future does come, and Draco has a chance to be with Ritch, something clicks and he's back to being the Draco he was for most of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You'll get to see how most of it plays out in the next chapter so look out for it :D x

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Ah! That was an amazing one shot! You write really really well.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!

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no! I need the next chapter! this story is so good! it's getting better and better. I love draco's character development throughout the story. and i can't wait to see what happens between ron and pansy because it's obvious that he's going to have a thing for her. i like the idea of them together.

Author's Response: haha. I'm so glad you like this story. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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I really liked this chapter! I'm in love with Adrian and Hermione's blooming relationship and connection to one another. You're doing a great job in progressing their characters in regards to one another. I would like to see more Draco though. He's barely ever around! Which I guess is a part of the whole mystery behind him...haha.

Author's Response: lol yes it is :) But he will be around soon. Thank you for reviewing & stay tuned!!!

Love
Rilla :D

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yayayayay!!! they finally did it! all that sexual tension was insane for so long but I'm really glad you built it up the way you did. it made the actual moment really perfect. it was really well written too. good job!

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I am loving this story so far! Great job :)

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aww yay his proposal was so sweet and cute! great job on the story and the chapter :) update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was cute! I am writing the next chapter right now! I'm very excited about it and the chapters to follow! I will be updating soon!

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this story is AMAZING! it just keeps getting better and better and i absolutely loved this chapter. i can't wait to tell my friends about this story tonight lol.

Author's Response: Awwe, thanks heaps!! It means loads that you liked the story enough to read, review and refer!!

I'll try to update more frequently from now, i relly, really, really will!!


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love love love! great chapter, update soon! this story keeps me hooked with every chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! I just have about 1500 more words to write before it's ready to be put up! Chapter 1 is in revalidation though! it needed some love.

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oh no. oh no, oh no, oh no!! i'm starting to see the connection with hermione and draco and romeo and juliet. i'm scared to finish the story now lol.

Author's Response: trust me when i tell you it is not going to end like romeo and juliet! it is merely a interesting addtion to the story, not a connection with the plot :)

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okay. so. i had read the first half of chapter one about 4 times before i brought myself to continue the story and add it as a favorite (which i did by the end of chapter 2). i don't want to sound mean or anything but the beginning was kind of a drag for me. maybe it was the hermione and ron thing..idk lol but it definately reeled me in by the end of chapter 1.

this story has gotten SO good. wow. i can feel what hermione is feeling. her emotions are really raw and your protrayal of draco is on point with how i imagine him to be. he's shallow from afar but once hermione began to bump into him and noticed new things about him, a depth formed in his character. i'm only passed chapter three now and i'm thrilled to read the rest. i love the length of your chapters. its like a real novel :) keep it up!!

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ahh!! that was so cute! i hate ron btw. and lavender. but draco and hermione are perfect for one another and i want draco to be my boyfriend lol. great chapter! i can't wait til you update again :)

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for the comment! I think we all want a bit of Draco!! Will be updating soon, so keep a look out, and hope you like it! xx

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omg YAY!!! hahaha you scared the crap out of me with the premature THE END lol. i was like omg kill me now!!! hermione was SO annoying in the last few chapters of this story. draco was perfect. ugh i love him and want him for myself. this was a great story, you're a wonderful writer. keep up the amazing work :)

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i love the length of the chapter!! and i CANNOT wait for draco to come into the story. omgosh i'm so flipping excited!!! i can't wait til your next chapter :) merry christmas!!

Author's Response: Hi whisper in the wind! I'm glad you loved the length! And that you're so excited! Merry Christmas to you too!

-Katie:D:D

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this is really good so far!!! i can't wait to read what happens. update soon :) you're a really great writer.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

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okay. so. i read this entire story in about 2 days and let me tell you, it is wonderful!!! wow. this story is magnificent. i love your characterizations of draco and hermione. hermione is totally the hermione from the books. you got her personality down pat. draco is so perfect and romantic and i want him to be my boyfriend please lol. i love how you incorporate every aspect of the timeline in this story like with how you start with christmas break and mention every other important time like valentines day, finals, and graduation. i felt time moving and i really like that in a story. your writing is amazing too. you are so talented. wow. good for you.

i love how you made it so that harry and draco had a rough time becoming friends and it wasn't like oh, okay we're friends now...or they never ever become friends. you made it seem real which was really good. ron's a prat. wow i hate him and i can't believe he expected to ever get back with hermione after cheating on her. btw i also like how you dragged out the sex lol. it seemed more legit in a serious relationship to wait more than two months cuz it kept the anticipation going. ginny is perfect too with her character..and i despise pansy. i'm glad she didn't win in the end. blaise is perfection just like draco. i love that you made him and draco like brothers. blaise is amazing. so yeah, this story is awesome. i hope draco and hermione overcome more obstacles together and get married :) i really hope he proposes!

so yeah...lol update soon :) i'm glad i ran across this story the other day. it's really great and i'm glad you never abandoned it cuz it's so promising! 10/10 :)

Author's Response: Goodness! I think this is the longest review I've ever received, so thank you so much for that!

Thank you so much for your comments on my characterization! I've tried to keep them true to who they are in the books aside from the changes it takes to make Draco suitable for Hermione, of course. I want him as my boyfriend too. I'm glad you like Ginny too! I don't really feel like she is portrayed correctly in the movies, so this is kind of how I see her. And OF COURSE Pansy lost! No one likes Pansy! Blaise is one of my favorite characters because of how much artistic freedom we as fanfic writers are given when it comes to him. I'm SO GLAD you felt time moving! I didn't want it to be a whirlwind or anything like that, so that comment makes me very happy. And I'm glad you think that I'm talented. Writers always love to hear that. :)

The last thing I wanted was for Draco and Harry to become easy friends. And Ron and Draco will never be friends. Count on that. I hate Ron too, if you can't tell through my writing. haha. And yeah, Hermione didn't seem to me to be the type to just jump into bed with anyone, much less Draco. She has to analyze things and he needed to earn it! I won't say anything about marriage. I suppose you'll just have to keep checking back to find out!

I'm working on Chapter 15 as I write this, and I will not abandon it! I promise!

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that was great!!! i'm so sad it's over but i guess all good stories have to come to an end lol.
but seriously, i really loved keeping up with this story. it was super interesting and i love your characters. draco was by far my favorite and i like how draco realized that although pansy was entertainment in his life, she was bad news and got rid of her :)

Author's Response: thank you! its a shame that i coudlnt keep this fic going on forever and ever and ever, but yeah, it had to end sometime lol.

so glad that you liked it and cudos to draco for FINALLY realizing that pansy was a big N-O :)

-WP

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ah! this story is amazing!!! i wish it didn't have to end :( i hope the last chapter is 294723809401247024019209247 words long lol. omg i hate pansy! i hope blaise runs and tells draco what pansy did and then draco curses her to hell and then runs and tells hermione the truth and she forgives him and they live happily ever after the end :) except it goes on longer than that. great story!! i love it!!

Author's Response: thank you!!!

oh i wish i could write this story forever but all things have to come to an end unfortunately :(

isnt pansy awful!!?!?!?! she's got to be the most cruel person in the entire world without a doubt. haha, i like your ending, and dont worry you'll soon see how things play out :)

-WP

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i absolutely love your characterizations of everyone!!
and i'm loving this story too. i'm really hooked! :) 10/10

Author's Response: thank you!! im glad that you like it and my characterizations. this chap was one of my favs! :)

-WP

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i'm so excited to read the rest of the story when you update! it's really good. you're a very talented writer. keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'll update soon!

-katiefelton:D

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that chapter was really funny! i like where the story is heading so don't apologize lol. i love draco's character! you've made him out to be absolutely perfect!!

and wow. you are so lucky your boyfriend did that for you!! lol that must have been amazing. i was jealous of hermione reading it in the story but knowing it actually happened to you makes me even more jealous! lol

great story :) update soon! i'm really loving this and i can't wait til they're official and ron finds out!

Author's Response: Thanks for another review, glad you liked it!
Hehe, I know, I'm very lucky to have my bf, and I'm quite pleased that I've made you jealous! :P hehe.
Will update soon, still working on ch.8, hope you like it! xx

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i love this story!! its really well written and i'm getting so excited reading it that i can't wait to get to the next chapter. i love draco!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for the review! Really glad you like it!! Hope you like the next chapter xx

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i'm so happy that you updated!! i love this story so much. my friends don't read fanfiction but i was telling them about your story and now they always ask if you updated it so i can tell them what happened.

i really like how you portrayed hermione and draco in this chapter because it was so obvious that they're at a new level in their relationship and that they've gotten alot more mature even though they fought. i'm really nervous for the next chapter because i don't want hermione to leave. draco loves her so much!

i love pansy in this story too!! miranda kills me though i swear. i can't wait til she's out of the picture for good. and the interview is going to give me a heartattack cuz all that hermione and draco do is mess things up for themselves!

i can't wait for an update :)

10/10

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