hey, so i really like the idea for this story. the nineteen years between the end of the war and the epilogue are always my favorite stories to read. my only constructive criticism is the lack of editing in relation to punctuation, spelling, and incorrect word usage in general. you should consider having someone read over it before submitting chapters because this story has a lot of potential!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying as hard as I can but I'm not that good of a speller.

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Love this! And I love that Christmas song lol

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If they've already kissed that intensely twice, I dunno why James is being so stupid lol, update soon!

Author's Response: because he's... james :)
i will! thank you!

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Millas a tad crazy, methinks

Author's Response: aren't we all? haha
thanks!

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I think shes being a little unfair to him, but then again best friends aren't *that* touchy feely, sleeping together and whatnot... Esp if one has a gf.. No no no lol. Good chapter

Author's Response: thanks! i'll update soon!

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gahhh i dont like this girl. i hope you give milla some action soon lol

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ew i dont like her already. nice chapter!

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i bet that frown is cuz he secretely loves her, right? right? lol

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what didnt she want him to tell her friends? did i miss that or is sposed to be a secret. nice chapter anyway, really enjoyed it :-)

Author's Response: it was supposed to be a secret!

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interesting!! draco sounds so evil! lol

it makes me wonder how you're gonna follow up with this. like.. did james and dumbledore really try to do her in? i find that hard to believe, but who knows? hopefully she retains her sense of dignity and just fakes being evil or something. ahhh update soon :-)

Author's Response: thankyou i am so glad you're reviewing! XD yes i like him evil :D and you'll just have to find out!
i have a lot of chapters on the way and you'll find her doing more evil doings ... :D
thanks again!

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Heyyy so I'm completely addicted to this story, just like I was with delicate. Update soon! :-)

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i liked this chapter. you're such a skilled writer, i honestly and truly believe you should do this for a living with your own characters, because you certainly have the talent to be successful.

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lol its 4:50am, i need to go to bed, but i cant stop reading.

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interesting story, i'm excited to read more, but i think the quality would improve a lot if you read over it for grammar and just wrong word placement in general.

but i can tell youre a great writer, and i'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: arr thankyou so much! yes i posted it and then i was like ... i'll wait till it validates and then i'll go back over it :D arr and thankyou so much i'm glad you like it i am hoping to get a banner soon to spice it up :D
thanks again you're awesome

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i really liked the quidditch match, haha, it was well written and entertaining. i'm not familiar enough with the next-gen names though, so i was a bit confused, but i think i caught on. great job, honestly. superb! update soon please!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! And I know how you feel. It took me SO long to figure out who everyone was, but I got there eventually! If you are interested, there's a pedigree chart online somewhere. You can Google it and find it. That's how I finally got it all figured out. Thanks again!

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yay i love this story. it's great to find a story thats got a great plot, but also someone who knows how to spell, use grammar correctly, etc. next chapter.

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This is great! I really really enjoyed this. *favorited*

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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hello! firstly, i think the idea for your story is great. a series of one shots during the nineteen years is a cool idea. i do agree with the other reviewers, however, that say that you need to fix your grammar and spelling a bit before this story could reach its potential success. you should definitely look into getting a beta reader (someone to check over and correct your grammar, etc), as that would improve the quality of your story significantly.

keep updating, though!

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update soon! it was so good and i can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks, am updating right now...finally.

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hey! i love your story and i've read it before, and i'm catching up with your updates now!! it's really emotional and great, but i think it'd be so much more moving if it were edited, like for grammar and just typing errors in general. i'd be more than happy to edit it for you, that way you can edit each chapter (it updates faster than adding one and doesn't take away reviews, etc)... so send me a message on here if you'd like that. if not, keep up the great storytelling!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, if you want to that would be great, my eyes and my grammer/spell check only catches so much :)

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thats not good (the news, not the story, the story is good) lol

Author's Response: no it's not haha thanks

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aw, cuteness. yayy

Author's Response: lol

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oh goodness, this is so intense (and creative).. on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks

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oh this one was my favorite so far!!! very interesting. although i am most def not a luna harry shipper, you make it believable and even pleasant!!! (which is saying something with me).. EXCELLENT job! i love love love looovvvee it, update soon

Author's Response: This was my fav chapter so far but I mush prefer chapter 6 which will be coming soon.

Do you not like Luna/Harry? I think they're sweet! But I'm glad you decided to stick with the story even though you don't particularly like the pairing.

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. I'm thrilled you like it!

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lol nice. sinfully delicious story, i must say. bravo, haha

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :-D

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