{reviewid: 1951301, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
13th June 2008:
aha.. so these bruises come from him.. evil... will you make a picture of christine. and why dosn't she tell anyone.. but hey this is a pretty good story
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13th June 2008:
i would punch him too.. haha seems like a good story
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{reviewid: 1951219, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
13th June 2008:
that was really cute
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Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1950952, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
13th June 2008:
oh gosh.. this wil be funny.. explain the prank please
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{reviewid: 1950928, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
13th June 2008:
go james... this story is extremely amusing
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{reviewid: 1950922, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
13th June 2008:
that would be soo awkward... hilarious
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{reviewid: 1950483, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
now that was a good chapter.. i really like this story... but that was sad that sev didn't do anything.. i hope none of her friends die
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Author's Response: Thanks ..
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{reviewid: 1950471, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
wow.. thats intense.. getting good though..
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{reviewid: 1950465, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
aw.. that is really sad.. i like that chap.. good advice
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{reviewid: 1950460, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
oh.. this will be goddd.
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{reviewid: 1950456, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
you keep spelling slytheryn wrong... yes revenge! i cant wait to see what they do!!! i would so destroy those slythys... awesome story, and she does have a dramatic life
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{reviewid: 1950434, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
her friends rock.. on with the revenge.. i liked this story so far.. but you need to describe more what she looks like
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Author's Response: I will work on that!
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{reviewid: 1950380, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
12th June 2008:
wow.. 3 months.. oh yea that is an swesome grudge
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Author's Response: man, i wish i could hold a grudge for that long. i've got issues holding grudges for three minutes.
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{reviewid: 1949491, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
11th June 2008:
its ok.. but she needs to stop dissin anastasia, she rocks!! .. i guess its ok that she is gettin over her eatin disorder
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PS - thanks for the reviews.. im actually in the process of re writing my story.. ill inform you when i repost the new chaps.. and maybe you could tell me if they are any better?
Author's Response: yeah - you'll see lily steadily increase in her not-so-badness over time. she gets better, promise.
and no problem about the reviews - really enjoyed reading your story. and i'd be happy to re-read it once you're all done editing. just let me know when! :D
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{reviewid: 1949481, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
11th June 2008:
aw.. i thought it was pretty cool
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Author's Response: thanks! glad you are enjoying the story.
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{reviewid: 1949465, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
11th June 2008:
wow she is odd.. but in a good way
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Author's Response: indeed! thanks for reviewing, im glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 1949452, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
11th June 2008:
they are sdo mean to her sheesh
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Author's Response: i know, but dont worry, it gets better! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1948862, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
11th June 2008:
aw remus is so cute... hah.. i think she should have hexed them
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Author's Response: ah, she was extremely close to doing so. ;)
Thx so much!
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{reviewid: 1948848, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
11th June 2008:
ugh i do not like evens.. dang but that was cool with the rings
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Author's Response: yeah, evans isn't the chillest person around.
i'm glad you liked the part about the rings. thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1948459, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
10th June 2008:
wow. maybe they shouldn't drink.
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Author's Response: yep. that would probably be the overall moral of the chapter. haha
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{reviewid: 1948455, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
10th June 2008:
aww that was a really good chap.. i like how they are such close friends... down with evens!!!
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Author's Response: thanks so much!
yeah, i defintely want to be at hogwarts with friends like that. it would be pretty incredible. yep, unfortunetely, as you'll see, Evans doesn't seem to want to go down. :(
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{reviewid: 1944204, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
6th June 2008:
i like your new summary.. go james! wow, sirius has one unhealthy obbsession
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Author's Response: thanks, you know i figured i'd change my summary from time to time, keep things fresh.
unhealthy? haha maybe just a little.
thanks for another review!
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{reviewid: 1944191, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
6th June 2008:
that would suck
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{reviewid: 1944182, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
6th June 2008:
she should tell him her theory about him flirting with dudes.. that was interesting
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{reviewid: 1943208, reviewer: 'lollipop_marauderette'}
5th June 2008:
that was really really sad..
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Author's Response: I don't know if that was a good comment or a bad one, but thanks for reading nonetheless.
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