That was a really good start! I can't wait to read the rest! Author's Response: Thanks!!! There will be more soon! :] Report Review
Cool story! I had never really given much thought to how Ron and Hermione got into the Chamber. Great job! Report Review
Loved it! I think it's a great idea to have Ron write in a diary, he does need something to vent his feelings. Please update ASAP, I really want to read more! Report Review
Great story! It really reminds me of Hermione puching Draco in PoA! Keep up the good work! PLEASE hurry on the next chapter, I can't wait!Author's Response: im glad you like it! im working on it right now, im just finishing some final rewrites and editing!!! Report Review
Wow! This is a great story! I love how you summed up the Mauraders and Lily's connection to each of them with just a few paragraphs. This is a really deep story and so awesome! Report Review
I do not see Hermione reacting like this. I believe she would have finished Hogwarts and I can't imagine her being so angry with Harry. They just defeated Voldemort, I believe this would have made the golden trio's bonds even stronger (if that's even possible). I had never thought of someone trying to kill Harry for the Elder Wand, huh. I LOVED the scene with Harry and Kreacher, nice touch. I really do not like the whole situation with Hermione in this story so I'm giving it a 7/10.Author's Response: I know! But I do think she would have been bothered by what happened to Dumbledore's family and to Dumbledore himself because of his ambition. And remember, she wouldn't have followed Harry to get the Philosopher's stone had she not preferred doing what was right to finishing her education.
I agree that she always liked to study, but she knew where her duty lay. Tough as it might seem, her prime duty was now to be by her parents' side, and she had to do that even if it meant that she couldn't be with Harry and Ron anymore. And when Harry did not make it any easier for her to leave Hogwarts, I just thought it might blow her off a bit.
I know you might see things differently, and I don't deny that Hermione and Ron deserting Harry was a bit convenient for my story. All I can do is to ask you to go along with it. Report Review
Wait a minute. Why did you put Rosie in Slytherin? All Weasleys are in Gryffindor! I would think Ron and Hermione would raise their daughter to be better than a Slytherin. I'm sorry but I just don't see this happening. I suppose it's to make a Rose/Scorpius relationship but why didn't you put them in Gryffindor? It's gonna be an interesting story and I would like to see how Ron is going to react to this. Slytherin for a Weasley? No. Report Review
Haha! Cool story! I really haven't seen too many Oliver/Katie stories. Great job!Author's Response: Hee hee, thanks! There certainly aren't very many of them here on HPFF! Report Review
Wow! This story actually made me cry. I love how you didn't make the parents of the story Ron and Hermione or whatever, you just left it as a family Voldy terrorized. You did a great job! Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry you cried! But I'm glad that you understood what I did with the main character. :) Report Review
Great story! I loved Hermione's "All because of Ron Weasley" line! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) -Allison Report Review
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