I like this story. (:
Unlike many others, I think it's the only one without a gorgeous character or an "ugly" (plain) character that gets a complete makeover. And this person doesn't even have Sirius actually pining over her (at least from the start). He's only doing it, really, for himself. It's a nice break from all of the overdone plots and cliches.
Well, I really like your stories, even if I've just started reading today. They're really original, independent from everyone else.
Annie.Author's Response: It's fun to go against convention, especially in fanfiction. =D I kept seeing the same old Sirius/OC over and over again, and thought it'd be fun to write something different, then out came this story. Thank you very much for reviewing. It's wonderful that you like how the story has begun. ^_^ Report Review
I love it. Very cute and funny and imaginative. (:
The only thing I feel like complaining about is the spacing.
The huge gaps between the paragraphs is irritating.
Otherwise, please update! :D
annie.Author's Response: i tried to fix that but it wouldn't let me. the next chapter has less gaps :) && thank you. Report Review
I liked it. It was very cute and sweet. ^.^
annie.Author's Response: Oo yay thanks soo much!
-Alex- Report Review
I loved it.
It was original, it was beautifully woven, and it was a piece of artwork like no other.
And I like how you ended it with telling Harry he was home, and the feelings it aroused in him. It is nice knowing you're someplace safe, isn't it?
annie.Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Report Review
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