Argh! I love it! But...it's the last chapter for now...argh! Oh no...you must write more. Yes you MUST! See. I'm being demanding again! Argh.argh argh argh argh argh! Brillant writing again. Write some more and i'll leave you more freaky reviews. Sounds like a plan? I need to get off this high RIGHT NOW! Argh argh argh argh!
And omg. She's sinking again. Poor girl...oh no. I've made myself feel sad again...dammit

Author's Response: ???

lmao okay. its a deal.

um... sorry about the girl??

oh wait are u talking about... oh! yeah its sad :[

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I'm glad the girl has a plan. yay! Yay for yay for yay for yay for yay!
Happy chapter! Happy reviewer! Probably freaked out author...oh well, does it look like i care? I think probably not! And who am i too judge?...i'll run away now don't worry!

Author's Response: lol its okay, i love u freaky reviewers...

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So what?! The cuteness factor is back! I'm sorry...i love everything about this story, i just get depressed about things way to easily...cuteness! Chocolate! All other manner of things that i can get a sugar high off!

Author's Response: lol same!

i write a lot of either really happy or really random stories... chocolates great

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oh...no i feel really slack for being excited about this. I mean, i could totally see where it was going...and this was really well done. *sob* now i'm upset. Oh dear...

Author's Response: aw, dont cry. sorry for making u upset but thank u so much anyway!

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omg! The cuteness factor! Oh christ, sweetness -i think i'm gonna hype up just from reading this! Yay for concert! Ooo...what happens? Should i do the smart thing and go to the next chapter...hmm...?

Author's Response: lol, yes u should! and leave many more reviews!!!

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Awww! Cuteness! Not at your sunburn...that wouldn't be nice...but at the story. Completely loving it!

Author's Response: aw thank u so much!!!!

the sunburns all peeled off :]

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Whaddya mean she shoudln't be with Remus? Oh no! This is cute! Continue! Please with the continuing! Oh well...the worlds gonna fall over anyway...ok. That was weird. Forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: lol ur so random, i love it.

okay well thank u!

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and i was all like, and he was all like, so she was all like, and then i was all like, but he was all like, cause they were all like, so i was all like...this sounds way to much like me and my friends! I didn't realise normal people actually talked like this...wow, i should probably leave my dorm some time

Author's Response: lol i know NObody can tell wat me and my friends are talking about its crazy!

dont leave ur dorm if it means ur away from ur computer!

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Ok...i know that there are more chapters for em to read but i have to review now. This is wonderful! Great plot line, and really wodnerful descriptions -you can paint a picture without over doing it. Bravo!

Author's Response: aw thank u so much!!!

theres nothing wrong w/ reviewing early!!!

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ok...this is fairly awesome! Usually -like always- i am completely hesitant about reading stories that talk about other fictional characters but i just had a feeling about this one. And i just have one thing to say to you...I DEMAND another chapter. Yeh you heard me! I'm DEMANDING another chapter from a complete stranger. See, i love good fanfiction -feed my habit! Please! See...i said please? Ok, i'm gonna go eat some chocolate...farewell!
bibi!

Author's Response: lol thanks!...the other chapter I have almost done being typed on more setence or so to go! and the third one is in the writing process. ^_^ thanks for the review :D

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Yes i do but more to the point i love this story. Perhaps you don' realise quite how much weirdos like me rely on good stories. Well, we rely on them alot! Please feed my habit! Write more! See, that was a demand! I'm demanding more! Huh, betcha didn't see that one coming! I want more! Please? ...not so good at this demanding thing am i? But can you see my point? If i'm going to embarass myself by posting a stranger a rather remarkably pathetic review than surely you can write another chapter? Please? Take pity on the weirdo...

Author's Response: oh, did you think this was it? it's SO not! I have at least three - maybe four or five - more chapters planned! and I'm working on chapter seven right now! it's over halfway done! just hold on, weirdo! (don't worry, I'm a weirdo too!) thanks for the review, it makes me smiiile! : D

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oh the cuteness! Argh, so pretty. So pretty!

Author's Response: oh, thank you!!!

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lol so completely gorgeous! My friend's pregnant -it's an absolute nightmare for her...she can't hold anything down, the baby keeps spinning and she looks like she's gonna burst any day (she's only 6 months in)...god i love her though. This is making me laugh so much, quite a few of my friends have been pregnant and had babies and this is really well done. You should be proud! Are you proud? lol. Sorry for scaring you
bibi

Author's Response: lol, I love babies and pregnancy. this story helped me to see what I wanted to do when I got to college and med school... I'm going to be an OB :) I'm not one for pride, but thanks for the advice. I'm very proud! : )

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wow. You only write one shots? Jesus christ! Stop that right now! This is a brilliant introduction, very well put out. The only thing i could find was you put the question mark before the s in Mungo?s. But apart from that (cause it's not important) phenomenal...i think i spelt that wrong. lol

Author's Response: well I DID only write one shots. Until this little plot bunny came along. And then I thought of "finding daddy" and now I write all things. thanks!!

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oh dear...someones not happy! Certainly i'm not talking about myself -great writing!

Author's Response: Danke, Gracias, Gratias, Thanks, what ever floats your boat! (basically thanks for reviewing! Very much appreciated, please ignore my horrid spelling, spell check is the greatest tool known to human, yet doesnt work in non-English spellings and when it doesnt like me to use it)
-ALy :-)


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Ok, first off. Completely loving where this is heading. Second. Lee isn't in any way related to Lee Jordan is he? Ok. Gonna see you in the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing! Secondly, nope, Lee and Lee Jordan are two different people... wow... I didnt think about that... ah well, Lee becomes Steven 'cause my friend decided that he didnt like it... his name is Lee and I borrowed his name for no particular reason. Well, enough diluted ramblings on my part.
Hope you like whats coming up soon!
-ALy


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oh god for the cuteness! Lovely, truly lovely story. Quite a nice plot line -i really like the way you've developed the characters, quite original. Bravo *applauds*

Author's Response: aw thankyou so so much! xD

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omg. That was so sweet. That was really very beautiful. Very beautiful bravo. Very sweet...i need to think of more words but i think you get what i'm trying to say. Right?

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aww...write more! I'm sorry for the demand but i'm trying to make a point here. More please? see i added please! Please more story?!!!

Author's Response: i see you're please and raise you thanks :D the next chapter is in validation

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Oh cuteness! Wow, very pretty! Now i'm going to do the smart thing and read the next chapter! Cause i'm smart like that...

Author's Response: thanks, will update soon

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Oh cuteness! Argh! Bravo to talented person!!! Very, very well done

Author's Response: i could say the same thing about you and your awesome nickname (i have a little bit of a... well some would call it an "obsession" with people's nicknames. i think they're awesome)

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LOL!!! Gorgemonous! Completely pretty and lovely...and it have to type quietly so my room mate doesn't wake up and kill me but i wanted to tell you that this is SO cute! Lol, first good -next generation- i've read in ages! Good show!

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks. Glad you liked it!!

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No don't leave! Stay and write more pretty stories.more pretty stories! More pretty stories! I could start a chant! More Pretty Stories More Pretty Stories.

Author's Response: Haha, glad you liked it :)

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ARGH! Please to be writing more!! Please, Please! Even if you ignore the current saddness of Fred...please! Give me hope for the future! Gorgeous story
*wves good bye*
good bye!

Author's Response: We are ignoring the sadness!!!!! Fred Forever!!! -Melanie

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omg. Ok. I have decided to DEMAND another chapter. Yeh ya heard me! I DEMAND another hilarious chapter! Onward to other brilliant stories! Remember my nice request...mwahahaha i'm weird like this...please ignore...but not my DEMAND that would just be rude!

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