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Review #1, by hakuraWhere Loyalties Lie: Wow

11th November 2008:
This is actually very good... a bit hastey... but all around, a great idea, and a great bit of writing... 8/10! Keep writing, you're very good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. You're right, it's a bit hastey at the moment, there's a reason for that tho. All works into the final plan lol. Glad you like it.

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