Aww, I love the little James! I just want to pick him up and hug him! :)
Ahoyhoy, chums! I'm called James Sirius Potter, but all the ladies call me Jimmy. I don't much like it when they do, cos I'm so not a Jimmy. And I don't much like the ladies. Yet. I'm only ten. I've got the rest of my life to agonize over girls. Or so my Uncle Ron says.
~HanniAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Aw, I love little James too. He's quite adorable, if I may say so. Report Review
Aw, James asked Tegan out! Yay! -throws confetti- The way he asked Tegan out reminded me of how Harry asked Cho Chang out in GOF.
"So you're attracted to Tegan Llewellyn?" inquired Dobby calmly. He had just the right voice for a Psychological Healer, all calm and slow and methodical.
Yes, I am a hero of Gryffie Nation! My life's work is complete!
-starts chanting 'update'- pweas?
~HanniAuthor's Response: Yay! And I did base it upon Harry asking out Cho Chang, though James was actually successful. I've started work on the next chapter, but I have finals, so who knows when this thing'll be out. Report Review
-smacks head on desk- I think that I'll be saying "That's so Albus!" and "That's so Voldie" for the next six months now. :)
I dressed quickly and towel dried my hair (which was now sticking out in seven different directionsâ€”thanks, Dad, for the crazy hair gene!).
~HanniAuthor's Response: Yay, the "that's so Albus" fad continues to spread! I do imagine James to have Harry's crazy hair gene, and he's quite self-conscious about his looks so he wouldn't appreciate that. Report Review
Heh, now Kate and Scorpius know that James likes Tegan. :) Not that it was so hard to guess; James was so flustered.
We both stood up and headed toward the portrait hole and parted ways, to be reunited soon by the prospect of shepherd's pie.
I do love shepherd's pie. It's good. :)
~HanniAuthor's Response: We will see if Katorpius does anything with this new bit of info. They might not. I loveee pie if that isn't apparent from the story. Report Review
Funny chappie! James kind of reminds me of one of my nutty friends. I swear, she prays to the football god whenever she has a game. :)
I slammed his foot with my heel and he yelped. Forget about plagiarism, don't tell the girl I love I paraphrased from The Unabridged Book of Quotes of Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore! I told him with my eyes.
Boo boo toe! J.D. replied in expression-speak, grabbing his foot and wincing.
~HanniAuthor's Response: Thanks! The Quidditch Deity actually comes from an all-too-real personal anecdote. Except it wasn't for Quidditch, of course. I wasn't sure how "boo boo toe" was going to fly, especially coming from a 16-year-old guy, but I'm glad you found it funny! Report Review
Ouch, poor Jamsie. I would hate anybody reading my journal. But now he has to tell Tegan that he likes her. -prances around happily-
I pouted. "A deadline? I don't do well with deadlines!"
~HanniAuthor's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! Ooh, yes, the deadline shall be a significant plot point. We'll see if he meets it or not ;). Report Review
Frankly, I agree with Tegan. James is a sociopath. But I still love him. :)
But who cares about them? We're Gryffies!
~HanniAuthor's Response: Aw, but he's a nice sociopath. Not at all like Voldemort's sort. Glad you liked! Report Review
Another funny chappie. I love this story. :)
"It looks like a bunch of stick figures standing in the common room. Those two snogging are labeled 'J.D.' and 'Rose', and the one hexing them is labeled 'Commander Cool'."
~HanniAuthor's Response: Thanks! Haha, I've often concocted plans like James's. Report Review
I think that I have found my new story obsession. James is such a funny character and I love him already. :)
'I squealed. "What the frick!"
"Honestly, when you do the squealing thing, you sound just like a girl-"'
heh, well, must read on!
p.s.: you're right. frick is fun to say.Author's Response: Thank you! Ooh, I love it that my story is your new obsession =P. Heehee, that's a funny quote. Frick is awesome to say, but some people hate it! Report Review
zomg, this story is so good!! Ella is such a funny character. i love her already. -starts chanting update- please? soon? even though it's only been three days since you've updated last?
10/10Author's Response: hahaha oh it's been several months actually. The newest chapter is about 1/2 the way done, so expect it up in the next week or so.
~ Caroline Report Review
zomg, i love this story! you're such a great writer! i felt as if i were in the fight, feeling my anger boil over! WOW! exclamation points=love! lol. but, really, awesome story! this chappie was worth waiting for. :)
infinity out of/10
~BeautifulxTragedyAuthor's Response: awwwww, thanks soo much. Im so glad u'v liked it. ur one of the reviewers who have stuck with the story so i value ur comments. I hope to get u the next chapter soon. Thanks again! Report Review
Oo...interesting first chapter! Personally, I don't really read SS/HG but maybe now I will...^.^ 10/10
~BeautifulxTragedyAuthor's Response: Hi Beautiful Tragedy! I hope soon you will be a SS/HG fan, too. :D That was the way I became one. I'll try to persuade you with this story. :) wings Report Review
Yay! Another chapter! It would be kind of weird to see the people that you created walking and talking to you. I love it! 10/10
(Yew Nork. Ha. I started to laugh when I read that!)Author's Response: Yeah! It would be really weird to meet your characters. I don't know what I would do if I met Elliot...I'd probably be annoyed by how dramatic she is too, lol. Anyways, thanks for the review! Keep reading! Report Review
Ha! I was gaping at my computer when Piper punched Sirius, and he deserved it! 10/10
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Uh-oh...Wood found out about Ella...Arg! Can't wait until the next chapter! 10/10
P.S.: Slag=someone who likes eating pumpkin pie? where did that come from? lol. Report Review
I love this story! Why would anyone be bored out of their mind?? 10/10
~BeautifulAuthor's Response: hehe thanks alot! Report Review
lol. Believe me, your review box isn't anorexic. I love this story! Evangeline and Laura are such characters. I also liked how you showed that Evangeline wasn't just like her father, but she also is like her mother. Also, it is interesting how you ended the chapter with saying that Evangeline had Draco's eyes (the Death Eaters' eyes) So far, this is a really attention-grabbing story! Must. Read. On. 10/10
P.S.: This chapter wasn't too long! What are you talking about...heheAuthor's Response: aww lol. Yeah, THANK YOU to readers like yourself, it hopefully wont be starving anytime soon lol. Well, I'm super glad ur finding Evangeline interesting. You actually noticed something subitle...that come wont into play in this story but a sequel that i'm planning. sshhh, dont tell anyone, i havent quite broke the news lol. Thanks so much for the compliments and the review. lol, ...yeah i have to work being a little more concise lol. Report Review
Love this story!! I'll be so sad when it ends...:( ...yet so happy that I know the ending...10/10 Report Review
Ah!! It's a sequel! Astrid's as good as married too.wonder what will happen next! 10/10Author's Response: We can only wait to see! Well actually, I don't have to wait, I just have to write! Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
*gasp* A party...and Lily's finally here!! Can't wait until the next chapter.10/10 Report Review
Ahhh.don't leave me hanging!!! 10/10 (Even though you almost gave me a heart attack from that cliff hanger...hehe) Report Review
Yes! Oliver broke up with Madeline!! and she's with Roger Davis no less...I absolutely LOVE this story!!! 10.../10Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
ooo...very intense first chapter! Update soon? *puppy eyes* 10/10 Report Review
Ah!! Brent's back!! How could you leave such a nasty cliffhanger?? How could you?? 10/10 (Even though there's...*drumroll* a CLIFFHANGER!!...you know what? I might just go hang myself off a cliff now...just kidding!) Report Review
Someone's getting jealous! Well...two people are getting jealous...me of Piper and Sirius of Brent.lol. 10/10 as usual! Report Review
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