Ahhh I liked this chapter alot...I think that you could of probably discribed Matt better, you know looks and stuff. well hurry up with your next chapter! your fans are wateing. Report Review
Wow the idea for this story really just pop out of your head? It's good. I really like the beginning of the plot. So far i think that u could be a little more discriptive, it will really help your writeing improve. I know you said in the AN, but i think that you should put a discripion of Hermionie.
No joke i think that your story is really good though...keep it up!!!
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Hey I really like your story. I also am starting to read Betrothed to a Malfoy, No joke this story is so diffrent than all the outher storys that i've read. I mean Blase and Hermione? wow i would have never had an idea like that...How did you come up with that idea?
So I'm starting a fic but i'm not shure if its any good. Do you have any advice or whatever?
Hey add me to your e-mail list please. email@example.com
Thanks this story kicks ... butt. Report Review
Yeah! grate first chapter! first I want to say that I loved 22Tango. It was so good. Ok I lied It was Grate! good luck on the rest of this story. Keep up the goo work.I sound like a teacher...lol
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