Ohhh no! I can't believe this is happening. Can Holly DIE please? I want to slap that silly bitch. And yay! James and Lily are finally together, somewhat. Please update soon! I absoloutely adore this story. :)Author's Response: haha thanks! I'll try to update soon! Report Review
I found this story FOREVERR ago, and i just reread it and now I'm in love with it all over again.
Please please please update soon because I love Lacey and Roger(:
10/10 Report Review
Yay! You've updated FINALLY!!
and NO NO NO as much as I loved Remus/Ara at first, NOOO Sirius/Ara is so much more cuter!!
update sooon!Author's Response: Lol. Yayy!! You don't hate me (bout the Sirius/Ara stuff) :P
The reviews I used to get were so pro-Ara/Remus that it really is nice to see some support for Sirius/Ara too :) Will update asap!
Thanks for the review :D Report Review
I feel in love with this story. It's just so flippin cute!! Especially this chapter, because they made up. Update soon(: Report Review
I love love love this story! I just foudn it today, and I like how you give insight to what Pan is actually thinking. I loved, how Pan stood up for herself, but it's a cliffy! Please please update soon!!!
(:Author's Response: ha ha, yes, it is a cliffy. Dang it, I really do need to post soon. Ah well, thanks!
OMG, i love this story!!! please continue. I've never really considered the whole Sirius/Lily thingy, but I really do like the ending.
Kinda sad,. 10/10
Update soon!!! Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I've NEVER ever ever ever ever EVER read a Fred/OC story before. EVER. THis is my FIRST one, and I LOVE it!!! Brilliant. 100/10
Angela :DAuthor's Response: Good golly miss Molly! Thank you so much! I, actually don't read much about the twins (partly because there isn't much out there to read!) but I just love them so much, I thought I'd give it a go. Thanks a bagillion! Report Review
OHMYGOSH. This is the only Oliver/Oc story I LOVE. Oh wow. I LOVE this, UPDATE SOON!
Angela :D Report Review
Awww...poor Remus.. )': I'm so sad. I don't know WHY I was crying, but I was...so sad. Oh, and SIRIUS!!! How COULD HE!? After all that he said about REMUS!! >:( I was so mad about that. Poor Kallista. That's such a pretty name by the way. Very good pick.
Oh, well update soon!
Angela :)Author's Response: Awww, you cried? I have to admit, when I wrote it, and I re read it, I cried. But I'm glad you did, because that means I got you to feel emotion about the story, YAY!
Thanks so much for the review, and YESS, I love the name Kallista, it's one of my favorites. (: Report Review
Awww...this sounds really cute. Is it Remus? It better be..OF COURSE ITS HIM!!! Who ese!?
Hahahahaha, good job on this chappie!!! :)
AngelaAuthor's Response: Hahaha, well yess, it is him, and I can say that since that chapter is already up. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Oooh, this story seems really good. I like it. :) Only problem that I have is that Lily's being a bitch. :) But that's ok. I love how she's so confused about it all, I'm sure I would have been too!! I love how she and Lily despise each other though. It makes me laugh.
Really good job. Update soon!!! :D
Angela :)Author's Response: Thank you! I know Lily seems a bit OOC.
~LB Report Review
HAHAHAHAHAHA. Ohmigosh, I don't know WHY I was laughing, but this story totally reminds me of how I act with my guy friends.
Hahahaha, this is a really cool story so UPDATE SOON!!!
Ps. I like ponys too!! (:Author's Response: lol, thank you, i promise i'll update as soon as possible, which means sometime this weekend. thanx for the review! :0 Report Review
Ooh, I really like this story!!! It's so different and I LOVE it!!! :D
Please update soon!!! :)
Angela Report Review
Ooh, I really like this story!!! Hmm..I think she and Sirius look good together, but Remus and her are even CUTER!! Where is REMUS!?!?!
Update soon!!! :)Author's Response: Chapter Five is in the queue and there are lots of great Remus scenes coming up!! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Awww...poor Remus. Must suck for him. :( I think this story is really cute though, because he's trying to get her attention. :)
About that whole Dumbledore thing, it was KINDA wierd, but for the most part, he is a WEIRD guy so its cool in my book.
Update soon!!! :DAuthor's Response: Ahh yess, wait until you read chapters 3 and 4, you might be saying poor Remus. haha (:
yeahhh, Dumbledore and the way he talks is always weird, and awkward to write. So I wasn't sure if I accomplished it well. (; Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Oh my gosh. I have TWO TEARS, count em, TWO TEARS right there. This story made me cry!! I feel so sad. Wonderful job. (: Report Review
Awww...I love Remus/Oc stories!! I really think this one is cute :D Update soon!!!Author's Response: awh, thank you! i find this to be my most adorable story ever, ahah and the third chapter is being validated :) Report Review
Ah!!! I love this story, update soon!!! :D Report Review
Aww...I really like this story. The whole over-protective is really cute on Remus' part :)
Great job! Update soon!!
Angela :)Author's Response: i'm glad you like it Report Review
Ah! I HATE Peter!! >:( I really do love this story. I just found it last night and I read the first one and now I'm right here.
Angela :D:D:D:DAuthor's Response: Haha, so do I...Thanks! Yay, I have a new reader! Lol...I actually think I lost a lot of my old readers since I took so long to update with this chapter...But oh well, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and the next chapter will be up soon! Report Review
Awww.Remus and Odette are cute!! I love this story! :)
Update soon!!! :DAuthor's Response: i will as soon as i can but my story is on my laptop which is currently out of battery.. tehe.. but it should be fixed soon ! thanks for your reply !! Report Review
AHHH! I want to KNOW!!! Actually, I already read the book so I DO know...but I want to hear about Jame's reaction XD
Wonderful job! Update soon!
Angela :DAuthor's Response: hehe =] the question is do you i might have made this AU you never know do you
as for James's reaction all shall be revealed in the next chapter and Teddy's going to make an appearence soon yay! Report Review
Awww.POOR LILY! James has NO IDEA how much trouble he's causing. hahahaha, i LOVE your story!! Lily's daddy is being a meanie!!! Typical. I give you a 20/10
Great job!!! Update soon!!!
Angela :DAuthor's Response: Thanks I personally think this is the worst he's been so far, and I love 20/10s. They make me smile. Thank you. I love reviews! Report Review
I finished reading the book too!!! But, I'm still here reading fanfiction!! Honestly, I can only read Marauder stories now.XP
But, I totally get where you're coming from. I think that you should still continue the story.
I remember reading this some time ago and when I saw it i totally remembered it!!! I love this story and you did a really good job. I like give you a 100/10
Angela :) Report Review
AHHH!!! Ohmigosh, I was looking at the stories and I found this one, and i fell in LOVE with it. It's so WONDERFUL!!!
James is such a git. He's just being plain AWFUL to Lily, very good.
Sirius and Tiara, they are so cute!! Sirius sounds like, the most AMAZING guy in the WORLD. ILOVEIT.:D
Great job!! I hope yout update soon!!!
Author's Response: WOW. I LOVED your review. I never thought anyone would really like it when I was writing it, But I'm so THRILLED. *jumps around screaming in delight* Yayyy! I shall update asap. Just getting over some blocks! =) Report Review
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