in this chapter you kept saying how she "spoke" but she can't talk. do you mean like she wrote things out to her friends or what? and i'm also confused with how malfoy is hearing her thoughts. can he literally hear what she's thinking or does he just get her? besides these points i think it's really cute

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is this all through their second year? it was good but the fact that they were 12 disturbed me

Author's Response: no it's not through there first year. if you read carefully it does mention that they grow up through the story. (tri wizzard cup, etc)

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i'm confused about the end...
since when are her and draco friends?

Author's Response: ahh...that's the beauty about "in between the line" secrets. Thanks for reviewing:)
~hpf14

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i think things went too fast

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oh ok wow i was going to be all 'you have to make a sequel!' but youre already doing that so yay lol. i loved the story. what i would like to see in the next one is both of them staying :(

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aw. thats always (well i hope u know what i mean by always) how i picture your first time to be. just full of love. so cute

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idk...i think i kinda liked the whole longer hair thing with it over his eye...but with that hair cut he looks like he does on your banner...so ya, i guess it works...ya i like it lol

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lmao, nice

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awww omg i cried so hard the first 2 chapters. your a great writer keep it up!

Author's Response: Don't worry - I cry when I re-read it, and I cried writing it! Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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omg i have been looking for this story forever! i read it like last year and didnt finish it and when i went to look for it it wasnt there! omg i cant believe i found it and its done!!!

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im glad u dnt suport lavendar and ron. hes way too good for her. it does seem like shed be thinking that though doesn't it

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lmao. now thats my kind of a fanfic. its not technicly dirty unless you have a dirty mind. lol nice im showing my friends this one

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

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lmao. that is one of my favorite songs. i was going to do one like it but u took the idea i had. lol

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lol thats cute. i luv how u ended it. he got it that time. lmao

Author's Response: :-) Thanks!

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i dont get it

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oh that was really cute!

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oh that was really cool. i hope ur making a new one??? to finish where u left off? please???

Author's Response: Three years later... ... ... tardis has landed. I will consider it :P Thankyou for the review!

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um...wut?

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you do know that malfoy and ginny are related right? i forgot how but its something with molly and her family. look it up. not trying to be mean btw just letting u know

Author's Response: Ahh well if ya think about it everyone in the world is distantly related to one another but if it's closer then ahh well they're a good couple. ^_^ L xxx

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omg i hate u! u cant leave a story that well writen hanging like that! wright a nother! NOW. i mean...please? anyway, it was really good. the way u use words r amazing. oh since ur such a good writer and obviously a fan of d/hr then ill give u an idea about what i wanted to write but wasnt sure how. its one where ron hermione and harry go to draco's house during the summer and see how hes treated by his father, they see that hes into muggle bands and instruments, but the whole time he cant see them. and somehow tie into the story that draco likes hermione. i had an idea about him singing just so you know by jesse mccartney. i think that would be so cute. well im gona stop writing now cause this is really long. loved ur story. bye

~dragonluver

Author's Response: Hmm, that's a really good idea for a story. I'm not writing much anymore, but if I start writing back I might do something like that. (But I'll give you credit for the plot of course!!) :)

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aww...i hate h/hr. no offence. but i guess in a way ur kinda both. shippers i mean. or maybe not. but i liked it any way. keep writing

Author's Response: Haha no I hate H/HR hahah

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OMG OMG OMG finish it!! i luv this song n i think your story will make me luv it even more

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i love the story. and im thinking of some names for it. k how bout 'A Secret From the Past' or ...wait i had something and i lost it... 'Questions From A Daughter'...'Secets From a Woman's Heart' k thats all i got. its really good

Author's Response: oooh thank you so much for the ideas, i like them heaps, oh and, thanks for reviewing!!!

love lou aka xxx_firesparks_xxx

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ooo. it was good. but in future stories, try not to make them as fast. but the part of the baby was good. please write a nother

Author's Response: Thank you!

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is that it? i thought it would have been better but it disapointed me

Author's Response: Sorry about you being dissapointed, seems you were the only one feel that way, still can't win em all. thanks

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