I've very recently fallen in love with the Sirius/Lily ship, and I've never read one (well, besides the one I'm writing, but that's all).
This, though, was excellent. Contrary to whomever said that they didn't like the title, I personally thought it was perfect. Simple, classic, perfect.
I love how this mainly consists of conversation. Because, truly, a couple who can't hold a decent conversation could never last.
The wording of this is very elegant, and I love the last line.
~Alison Author's Response: Thank you so much! There's something about Sirius/Lily that really tantalises, I think. It's so mundane but... forbidden... at the same time. But enough of my rambling! I'm glad you like my title choice, I did know when I chose it it was a little cliched but I was hoping it leant towards good cliche and not bad cliche. ^__^
The conversation was me trying a new writing style. I'm glad you liked it too.
Thank you so much again! -hugs- Report Review
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