A nice, long chapter! Yippee! And Poor Violet... Anyway, as to the issue of the ending, I would really LOVE to see a happy ending where the main characters can FORGET about being nice people until after the deed is done, because it would be really unusual and refreshing for a story like this. However, it does seem unlikely that they could go that far without second-guessing themselves and their plan a bit. Happy writing!Author's Response: Yeah, I did NOT think that this chapter would be that long. It was crazy when I looked at the word count at the end.
Okay, you like happy too? 8-1.
You are VERY right when it comes to them second-guessing themselves. They will probably start to have doubts...ESPECIALLY when Lily starts going out with James...which probably won't be for a while...I dunno.
Hope you continue reading!! Report Review
Wow, it was really great. And usually I don't like reading H/Hr fics. Good job!Author's Response: YES!!! i changed someone's opinion!!! i feel so proud, *tear*. Report Review
I sometimes forget that fanfiction can touch you like your story did. Thank you for writing it.Author's Response: And thank you very much for reviewing. Report Review
That was one of the funniest things I've read in a while, whether it was meant to be humorous or not. (I have a rather odd sense of humor). Lily is a very believable teenager; "a bit" sarcastic and dramatic. I can't imagine being to ecstatic myself, in her situation. It kind of made sense to me that no one freaked out, because everyone wanted to believe that Harry was back so badly that they were willing to forget about being reasonable in the process. Everyone except for Lily, that is. Anyway, it was very good. I'll make sure to check for updates. :)Author's Response: It was supposed to be funny. XD In a sarcastic, teenager way. Yeah, I tried to put the teenage personality into her. Just to make her believable. I know! I would be like "... Get out. Now." I never really imagined anyone really freaking out. Thanks, I'm thinking about writing another one. It was so much fun to write! Report Review
Aww, that was cute. Seriously, it was really fun. My hat's off to you on that, definitely worth reading! Fun, but so sweet. It was perfect.Author's Response: Thank you! It wasn't meant to be anything serious. Just a light little read :) Report Review
I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how this one plays out; you should continue it, for sure! Have fun writing it, and we'll all be sure to enjoy it immensely, too. So I'll be back. But just a note, the huge spaces between the lines get kind of annoying after a bit.Author's Response: I didn't mean for those spaces to show up. I put the spaces in while it was still in Word...so for some reason when I copied and pasted it into the box the spaces got bigger. *makes mental note to not do that anymore...*
I'm really glad that you'll be back. I'm going to try my hardest on this story. Report Review
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