Wow. I didn't see that coming. That was an awsome twist! :o) 10

Author's Response: Thanks very much!
And for reviewing!!!

~Lyndzei

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That was funny. :o)

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I liked the story, the new characters, and the length of the chapter but I think the story moved to fast in some places. I also believe that the characters need a little bit more 'development' like the way they talk or their personality. (Just a few ideas.) :o)

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That was interesting. I've read a lot of fan fics with parenting classes but this one seems different then them, in a good way. I like the part when the baby flipped off the class! Cool story so far. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like it so far!

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It's a good start but I think it was a little bit rushed and u could add a few details in a couple places but other than that it was great. I'll probably keep reading.

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Sweetness. That's an awsome start. Can't wait to read on. :o)

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I love this story! and I love how blaise is described. He sounds ao cute. :o)

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Don't rewrite it, I love it! It's so cute and so is Blaise! :o)

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Hey what's up, I'm supposed to be doing my religion journals for tomorrow but i figured I do this instead. I read this chapter like a month ago but I never got around to reviewing it, sorry, but now I will review. I liked this chapter a lot because it showed us a little bit more of how the chracters react to each other and because it uses a lot of details. Can't wait to read the next chapter and I'll try and e-mail u tonight but my mom keeps checking in on me like every 5 minutes! (I'll also try to work on Blisary but don't hope for much. I stuck because of the stupid ages! Uhhh!) And before I get sidetracked again I just want to say good chapter! :o)

Author's Response: thax c! i think ill have a new chapter up before the break. im almost finished with the next 1. srry its taken so long.
luv ya

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That was so cute, I loved it! Great chapter. :o) Cool clock.

Author's Response: Thanks!!

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Well normally I don't like cherries or whipped cream but I'll make an exception and review, which is what I'm doing now. I liked this one a lot and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon! Please please please please please. With a giant cookie on top! :o)

Author's Response: ahaha. cookie :D...yeah..im working on the next chapter now

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That was cool :o)

Author's Response: thanks

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I think it moved along too fast :o)

Author's Response: Sorry guys its my first fan fic and im not so good r/r luv ya

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Hey it's C again. I just now got a chance to read the second chapter of your fanfic (after doing my big 50) and I think it was really good. I think you should add a few more comas in a few places but other than that I really liked it. Oh, and the whole Lyra spying thing looks like something Kasey would do. Anyways, I think it was really good. :o)

Author's Response: omg! i had kasey in mind when i was writing it. jeeves (goodin) says hi. she thought you were the other cb and was freaking out. u know who i mean right?

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I liked that a lot. :o)

Author's Response: ^_^ YEY!

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That was great begining and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon! 10/10 :o)

Author's Response: I'm trying to make time to write, but I've been really busy. I will write soon. Thanks for reviewing!

~Logan

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That was interesting and so like sirius to do that. It was very well written. 10/10 :o)

Author's Response: thank you!

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Okay. That was random but funny. :o)

Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much!!
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That was cool and different than anything I've ever read. :o)

Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much!!
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I loved it! That was totally Luna and she's my favorite character. I loved the story, great job. 10/10 :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Luna is awesome, isn't she?

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Hey it's CB. I really like the story and it's really good. I like the characters a lot and can't wait to read on! (See ya tomorrow.) 10/10 :o) -BBTH

Author's Response: thx for reviewing. im glad u like it. is there anything you would like me to add or change? im always open for advice. thx. hows blisary goin? i have a few ideas.

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I liked it a lot and I think it's really good. It has a lot of descreption and details as to what the two are thinking about and their surroundings. Great job! 10/10 :o)

Author's Response: Thanks. That's one part of my writing I'm working on and I glad I at least got by.

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That was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one. :o)

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That was a good chapter and it was very descriptive about the details. Good chapter. :o) 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much! (and for reviewing!)

~Lindsey

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Cool chapter. :o) 10/10


Author's Response: well thank you

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