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Review #1, by siriusgirl2010The Marauder's Final Year: Arguments Arise

6th June 2008:
okay so this story is good! wut you need next is something tramatic to test their relationship!
Then i would go for "just getting to no each other" chapters
then go to graduation or easter holidays or something to end the story!
~psh

Author's Response: I don't know if I want to do that.
I'm still thinking. I mean, does James
honestly need any more drama with
Lily than he's already had. But I'm
definately going to graduation pretty
soon. I just don't know how... Grrrrr..
But I swear, the sequal is coming soon.
I don't think I can bare too many more
chapters... It's kind of sad when you get
annoyed of your own story, you know...
Thanks for the review, Paige. I always appreciate them. I will see you Sunday.
Now, go read that story.
Live, Laugh, Love--Kasey
PS: In case if anyone is wondering what story I was referring to, its Scribbles by Velvet. Read it. You will not regret it. Especially if you absolutely love the Marauders and Lily. Which I assume anyone who's reading this story is.......


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Review #2, by siriusgirl2010Her Veil Lies: She Ran

6th April 2008:
This was excellent! And so true! It sounded like it was coming from someone who had gone through this b4 great job!

Author's Response: I can assure you right here and now that I have never gone through anything like this before. I'm glad it sounded like I did, though. =]

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Review #3, by siriusgirl2010The Marauder's Final Year: A Disturbing Discovery...

21st February 2008:
omg! that is so sad! and so sweet! GO KATE AND SIRIUS! GO GO GO! i wish there was more! Great job kasey!

Author's Response: ill get to the more soon, i swear. Im glad that you enjoyed it paige. ill update soon. thanks for reviewing...

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Review #4, by siriusgirl2010'Til Death Do Us Part: The 2nd Installment: Wedding Bells

27th January 2008:
i am cracking up right now that is hilarious and so real! lol! lol! great job!

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by siriusgirl2010The Marauder's Final Year: Never Saying Goodbye...

27th January 2008:
these last chapters were really well written and i love this ending its perfect! great job! now u get to proofread my story i will send u my chapter today kk! i lurve u ~paige

Author's Response: awe thanks paige. im glad you liked it. ill be sure to check my mail later... see you later...

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Review #6, by siriusgirl2010The Marauder's Final Year: Some Unexpected Surprises... Continued...

25th January 2008:
the end almost made me cry and like u always tell me proofread a little cuz there are a few errors!

Author's Response: yeah this one is kind of sad... and ill try to redo this one at some point.... thanks paige...

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Review #7, by siriusgirl2010Vindicated: Auntie Erin

29th December 2007:
im sorry but i didnt like the ending! the rest of your story i loved but the ending was not my favorite! sorry!

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Review #8, by siriusgirl2010The Summer Before Seventh (as told by Lily Evans): Something Random, Guaranteed.

28th December 2007:
Okay I see that I need to read on before I put my two sense in! I"ll learn for next time. This was a really good chapter and I just want to say that ur an amazing author. I have a suggestion though. I think that The Potters should walk in on James and Lily as they are kissing. And as Mrs. Potter said she was going to have Lily go if she does anything with James. Then James tells his parents how he really feels about Lily and she accidently over hears and she falls in love with James and gets to keep her job cuz James saved it for her. Okay sorry I know that could be totally ridiculus and this is ur story it was just and idea!

Author's Response: That's so cliche though! Hehe.

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Review #9, by siriusgirl2010The Summer Before Seventh (as told by Lily Evans): Frolicking Around With The Half Naked

28th December 2007:
Okay so i just read the first three chapter of ur story and it is very well written. May I give some advice though? I know that Lily is susposed to get off track a lot and i like that but she sounds like she's 12 not 16. She's susposed to be smart so try to revise and make her sound smarter! i really like ur story i wont change the plot or whatever for the world! its great.

Author's Response: Thanks, even though I'm not revising this story, thanks!

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Review #10, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: And Then There Was One

3rd December 2007:
i really love this chapter i cried to on james' death and lily's i just cant even imagine! u did great and i cant wait until the next chapter! :( so sad!

Author's Response: Thank you. THat's all I can really say. I am touched that you would lose your tears to something I wrote it. I don't know if you write Fan Fiction, but that is the ultimate ego-booster for anyone.

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Review #11, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: Voldemort's Choice

16th November 2007:
great great great! cant wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #12, by siriusgirl2010Endlessly: Endless

24th October 2007:
god! just like the chapter! im crying! u r a really good author!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that! I'm so glad you liked it!

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Review #13, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: The Last

24th October 2007:
i'm crying! it was really good and i can't wait to read your one-shot!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! That means a lot.

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Review #14, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: Harry James Potter

17th October 2007:
OMG! this was amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter! how many more do you have left? i like the fact that James went straight to Sirius! it was such a Jamsie thing to do! lol! well anyway it was very good and i have about 15 or 16 chapters now on my story and if you could pleaz look at them when ever you get the chance becuz lord nos that we all have other things to do then read all day unfortunately and give me some ideas! well great story and i will definately read ur one shot and the rest of this story! ur a great author!

Author's Response: Well, as of now, I'm not quite sure how many are left. Well, actually, two, but as of htis chapter....I'm not sure.

I'll definitely TRY to get over to reading your story. It's not that I don't want to, for I love reading stuff here, its just that my time seems to be disappearing a lot lately. But I'll try. really.

Thanks so much for the compliment. It is really nice of you to do.


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Review #15, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: The Rain Dance

6th October 2007:
NO! I dont want this story to ever end! it is my favorite on here! lol! I really did like this chapter and the scene was just about perfect! and it was so like sirius to pop the question so nonchalantly like that! you have a real gift and i cant wait to read the next chapter! hurry hurry hurry! pleaz do a sequel i will lurve you forever! lol!

Author's Response: Aw thanks! You're making me blush. =] I loved Sirius' proposal. I thought that it was the sort of thing he would do. Glad you approve.

Next chapter hopefully will be up soon.

Hmm...it's rather hard to do a sequel when the main characters have kicked the bucket...

Sorry. =[


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Review #16, by siriusgirl2010The Angels: The Angels

30th September 2007:
that is really good i like it! its a nice touch with peter and how he felt after everything was over and done with it kinda explains why he did what he did in the deathly hallows! good job i like it!

Author's Response: yeah thanks. idk what to put bc your sitting right beside me lol. ok ill talk to you later...

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Review #17, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: The Magic of the Muggle Athletic Cup

30th September 2007:
It was good it was about time that we hear about our little Harry anyway! a much need chapter! I thought the last line was the funniest of all though! so like james! lol! so how many more chapters do we have left? and how fast can you get the next chapter posted? lol! good job!

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, little Harry James Potter is about to make his appearnce at last.

There are six chapters left. And the next one will be up tomorrow. Or later tonight, depends on my mood. =]


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Review #18, by siriusgirl2010Deception: Inflitrations

23rd September 2007:
good chapter but didn't live up to the first two! it kinda felt like a fill in chapter if you no wut i mean still good just a fill in chapter but im going to keep reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: Yeah, I do get what you mean. A few of my chapters can seem like that. I'm trying to keep them all extremely eventfull, but ever so often they're...not.

Anyways, I'm super glad that you'll continue reading! :)


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Review #19, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: Three More

23rd September 2007:
Okay i like this chapter, but your right your better with the romantic and gushy chapters! dont worry i am too but i have learned to go get books where you'll find a lot of action in them and even going to HP books and reading dueling sections helps! it was good though, don't be hard on urself! i like how you included the picture in ur story, it ties in really nice! cant wait for your next chapter!

oh! and thanks for the review on my story!
~Paige~

Author's Response: Hahahahaha. I hate being cheesy, but I guess the harder I try not to be...the more it is. I've been working on my battles, yes, and I think they are improving. I wrote the third encounter with Voldemort shortly after reading DH...and surprisingly, it did not get hate-reviews. haha. Well, at least, not on the other site this is on.

You're welcome for the review. You totally deserved it.


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Review #20, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: Some Say The Number Three Is Unlucky

16th September 2007:
This is really good! It sucked though that i had to wait forever for it too be posted! and dont worry ur not the only one who as been busy with school started everything is so chaotic! Cant wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so sorry that it took me forever. I've been trying to put up a chapter a week.
School has been a killer. I've been so busy!
Thanks so much for the review!


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Review #21, by siriusgirl2010Happily Ever After???: epilogue

15th September 2007:
that was great ur going to make me cry again! i hate think about those characters even Hedwig! god im do pathetic!

Author's Response: oh i was confused when i first started to read your comment. i didnt realize it was about my other story lol. and your not pathetic. anyone who can read this and not cry is just not a true hp fan lol. well atleast not a true fan like us lol. who obsess over every little thing lol. thanks for reviewing...

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Review #22, by siriusgirl2010The Marauder's Final Year: The Hall

15th September 2007:
hey girl! that was great and for once im going to tell u that u dont need more detail that was great! and I can see that u r planning a crush soon! i keep reading and reviewing! lol! lurve u and the story! lol!

Author's Response: yes! i dont need more detail lol. and i may not be heading in the direction you think i am. crushes may appear soon, but nothing more. at least not until christmas i think. havnt really planned much out... my fingers are going numb. its freaking cold lol... thanks for reviewing...

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Review #23, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: Wedding Bells

4th September 2007:
OMG! I swear the chapters get better and better every time i read them! and ur right i need the next chapter out as soon as possible! IT is so funny cuz i have so much homework now that school's started and i MAKE time to read ur stories i think im going to cry when its all over! And i have a favor to ask! if its not to much trouble i would really like u to read and review my story and give any criticism u've got i could really use it!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. That is so nice of you to say!
I've been so swamped with homework...but I make time to write my stories.=]
Thanks for being such a great fan!

Oh, and I just reviewed your story. =]


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Review #24, by siriusgirl2010No Matter What: Bravery

3rd September 2007:
I agree with what u did to Ethan no matter how much i hated the fact that it actually happened! a good author always throws in something unexpected! if you do want to make an improvement to ur story as a whole u maybe able to add some detail in some of the bland spots! but over all it is a good story! i would not have changed this chapter at all! it was very good and unexpected! i took u as an author that wrote Happily ever after's! but i guess u proved me wrong! good for u! brava! bravo! ~Paige

Author's Response: yeah i do like writing and reading happy endings but sometimes there's no other way to end a story other than on a sad note. I didn't want to kill Ethan off cause I got to know him and Lilly as if they were real person as I was writing about them, but the whole stroy needed something unexpected to shake it up a bit and give it a point. Glad you liked this chapter :) thanks a lot!!

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Review #25, by siriusgirl2010Once Again: Emma's Tale

2nd September 2007:
omg omg omg! i really love this story and i dont want u to be done with it! i want this story to go on forever and ever! but it really cant cuz lily and james die! but still i really like and cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you're so enthusiastic!
This story has to end eventually. But I hope you like it anyways.

Thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it.


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