lol I had a blast reading these past two chapters. I definitly would have made it far more graphic I think...a shame for the HPFF restrictions.

You have made an awsome charicter...I cant wait to see how he turns out.

10/10 Keep it up

Author's Response: Great! I can't wait to show how he turns out. I've got a few ideas I'm toying with for the next couple chapters.

Thanks for the review!

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ok never mind scratch my last review lol
8/10

Author's Response: of course.

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Ok...so far so good...I just have one minor issue...


WHY IS A SLYTHERIN IN THE GRIFFINDOR DORMITORY?

did you mean for that to happen?

7/10

Author's Response: hahahahahahahhahahhahahahahahahahah no i did not. but i just looked at the review above and lol'd.

sorry it was a major brain fart on my account

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You write so well i dont even mind the wait. In fact it is almost like waiting for the next harry potter book to come out!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and are still with me. I really, really appreciate it! *Eli*

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poor bobbie. I must say that you portrayed the torture scene very well though. 10/10

Author's Response: well yes it came from the heart, see i have highly attractive french men torturing me all of the time. hehehe. lol.

thanks i'm glad you like it.

i think that bobbie will come to like valentin next chapter though. she understands that he was protecting the hundreds of people he was saving from deatheaters and would have done exactly the same.

thanks for the review.

you need to update SOON.

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WOW, I loved Faith, and i love Bobbie too! You have a great way with charicters. Sorry i havent posted in over 3 months but now that school started and basketball season theres not much time.

Author's Response: ooh. your a basketballer. cool.

don't play basketball myself, i lack certain characteristic that are necessary for a sport like that. such as co-ordination or the ability to walk across a completely flat surface and not find something to trip on.

it's ok that you haven't posted. i'm afraid i wont have heaps of time soon either, i got my first job interview at 4 tomorrow, and i'm totally excited.

but luckily i've had an idea for the next chaoter that is hopefully good. i just have to articulate it.

it doesn't help that we just loaded photoshop onto our computer and i keep finding banners to make and stuff. i have no self control.

lol.

well thanks for the review, i'm glad you like bobbie. i rather like her too.

laters.

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YAY! Lol i love fred and george!! they were helarious. Damn i really cant wait for the next chapter! So now are you gonna do harrys search for the horcruxes only add bobby? sorry bowt the wait for my next chappi...havent even started it yet...been buisy.

Author's Response: i love them also. and i am going to do the same sort of thing with the horcruxes + bobbie but i'm not going to put them in the same places and do some different things like that.

don't worry about the chappie, i'm told i have patience issues.

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gotcha! so its pronounced like the german W rather then the english one

Author's Response: Hrm, I suppose it is (Not German so I wouldn't know) but yeah same stuff.

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I liked this chapter. it was a bit short but i really like the character Bane.

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well it was good untill the end...then it kind of just stopped (i know an ending is supposed to stop but that was just too abrupt for me) still props i give you a 8!

Author's Response: Hehe thankies, and I'm not sure if you mean just the chapter or if you mean the story in general but thanks anyways.

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what? I'm ot really sure what happened with harry and Voldemort? cause Voldemort didnt finish the curse so what happened? interesting way to mix an oc into that scene...im just going to guess that you wrote this before the 7th book. Read my story "Only God Will Judge Me" if you have the time.

thx-

--Kadoda

Author's Response: I deffinetly did write it before book 7 lol, most of my stuff stops at about book 3 to be honest and that's just so that I have more free space to write whatever I want. Basically what happened to Voldemort was that he was stopped in mid curse (hence why Harry only got a scar and didn't die) I'll check your story out when I have time.

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well that was definitly interesting...i have always been a big fan of fantasy fiction. Do you speak latin (know since its a dead language) if not...what site do you use for latin-english translation?

Author's Response: I don't remember the name of the site sadly. I wrote this a while ago, but I wish I could speak latin, then I could make everyone look at me in awe as I wowed them lol.

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damn you werent kidding when it said that you mixed Lotr with hp...it will be interesting to see where this goes. how long have you been writing again?

Author's Response: I think a bit over two years going on three.

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that was pretty good...diagon ally was a bit short tho...terribly sorrry its taking me so long to get the next chap up...as my friend always says about his home work..."soon...soon"

Author's Response: hehehe. totally understandable. i believe that is very similar to what i say. hehe.

well hopefully the next chapter of Forgotten wil be up some time today and then i can submit the next chapter of this.

thanks for the review.

freddy


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well i dont mean to dissapoint you or any thing...but...I kind of liked the other chapters better. Your beginning and end were good but your middle was a bit too fast and chaotic. please read my fan fic and comment...chapter two will be up as soon as i find time to finish it

Author's Response: ya...it will get better. i wanted the action to be in the middle so that the climax of the story was evident.

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this was very good...i really enjoyed reading it...so i think that im supposed to assume that this is one year after harry graduated hogwarts. right? is voldemort dead? or not? serious appearently got out of the archway so hes back.cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: ok so harry finished school a year ago, ginny only just finished school (it is in the summer hols period) and voldy has not kicked the bucket. got it? i really think i should mention that in the next chapter's A/N. thanks for the review and please update your story ASAP.

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Alright...lets start up the reviews.
1) I've been reading all night and am quite intrieged by your story so far.
2) This chapter put an entirely new spin on every thing...unless harry is going psycho and just not realising it...ill find out tomoro when i read the rest
3) How the hell did you come up with this...its brilliant!
4) Is serious real?
5) please R&R my story "Only God Will Judge Me" by Kadoda
thanks --kadoda

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ahhh! Faith dead?!?! Oh dear. ah well im excited to see how this turns out. before you wrote this i was expecting something more along the lines of Faith setting out to catch serious once he escaped from azkaban! read my brand new story "Only God Will Judge Me" and tell me what you think! -Kadoda

Author's Response: hmmm... i didn't think of that. maybe i'll do a one shot or somoething.

i'll have to finish responding ot these reviews then i'll go chech your story out!

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wow just a little overreaction lol

Author's Response: just a wee little one

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I liked this one the most...comment my story once the first chapter gets published. somehow my last story got deleated while i was out of town so i have a new one up...first chapter sould be out monday the 13th

Author's Response: thankyou! i might take a look at you're story!

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eh...kind of unlikely that he could already change a boulder yellow but props for trying

Author's Response: *shrugs*

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hahahahah how do you know about vegimite? i hate that stuff!

Author's Response: *cough* i'm aussie! And it's yum! especially on toast...

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good ending...is chapter one of the sequel up yet?

Author's Response: not yet, should take about a week coz the queue at the moment is about 7 days, but it might get bigger or smaller so i can't be certain. thanks for reading! :o)

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i really enjoy your writing...it is well thought through and well revised. Although it was a pretty long wait i think you did a good job justifying yourself. oh and H&Hr all the way

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this chapter was much shorter then your previous chapters and a lot less action packed. however there are always a few wrapup chapters at the end of each book so i dont blame you in the least bit. just a question but will the sequel be about faith also? (duh of course its a sequel) cant wait for it. hit me back with a review or two.---kadoda

Author's Response: well without giving too much away it is about faith but that doesn't mean that faith is the main character though she is in it in a sense and there is a definite faith-ish-ness about the whole thing so... yeah. i guess that didn't make a whole lot of sense but whilst you try desipher it i'll just go... *sneaks away avoiding question* :o)

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