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Review #1, by toshie sqeeeezeSHE'S NOT SOMEONES GIRL SHE'S RONS GIRL: Heatwave

19th July 2004:
I love tihs story, very.... teenager. Not some mushy censored, but something with flare. Cool.

Author's Response: thanx alot 4 reviewing. i dun like loads of that mushy crap so things are going to go pretty slow at 1st with ron and herms but thins will soon heat up.

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Review #2, by toshie sqeeeezeThe Price of Love: Chapter 10

18th July 2004:
This is my favorite story ever! I like conflinct, and not just fluff. I also like fluff though, so this story is just for me:-}

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Review #3, by toshie sqeeeezeRon loses his temper: Chapter 9 Bonus Chapter 2 part 2

13th July 2004:
This story, had the essence of a plot that could be good, but it is just not. The story needs much improvment. Maybe next time you should callaborate with someone else. Give them your plot and let them write it out.

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