I was waiting forever!!
It was totally worth it.
That was really good, at the point Hermione and Draco were using little nicknames for each other was a little weird to read but.
I love the quip about singing with Hades, funny :]
update soon por favor!Author's Response: :) thanks for the review!! I'm glad you liked it Report Review
Nice ending.Author's Response: thansk Report Review
Haha, I was wondering if he was going to give her the necklace, but with the intention of buying it for her in the first place.
Okay another stupid question about the fake babies, do they look real or do they look like the babies in license to wed?Author's Response: nope, they look like actual babies, if you didn't know that they were made from a spell, you would think they were real Report Review
I really like your story because it's so different.
I don't really have anything else to say besides that though, =P
it's fantastic.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Question, I'm getting confused now, are the others babies real? Or are they dolls?Author's Response: no, there fake babies made from a spell, but act like real babies Report Review
What more can I say than that I like this chapter...like the other ones? LOL
I think my favorite part about how you write is that it's not too fast or not too slow which is fantastic.
& I forgot to mention I always wondered why the Heads always had a shared bathroom but you actually didn't do it that way in the chapter before but managed to integrate it in anyways lol.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
I LOVE the new twist.
You make such a ridiculously hard scenario work out very well.
I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: thank you so much Report Review
There was something very appealing about this chapter I can't put my finger on.
I think what I really liked is that it didn't just go into some frantic pace because you were done with the prologue and Draco came in. I like the way your developing the story.
Good job.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Okay, I understand the want of your reviewers to be brutal, but I don't really have anything brutal to say.
One this is though, that the spaces, need to get smaller, they're huge in between all the sentences.
You put very interesting changes into the story, the magic thing is very strange, and I don't know how that would become what it is ...
but the buddybuddy relationship with Lucius is even more so, I wouldn't expect for him to change even if they couldn't use magic, but I find this story interesting so I'm going to continue reading. Good job.Author's Response: thank you very much, the whole plot has a meaning thats all I'm gonna say. Also the spaces thingy was a malfunction thingy with my computer and I cant fix it. sorry
-Gabe Report Review
The rape part of the story was unexpected, but interesting I guess, since you seem to leave a lot unexplained.
Anyways, this was a good chapter, nice start.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
That was ...hm.
Not a lot happened, but I still enjoyed it.
It was a bit jarring to see Hermione and Draco kinda do a 180 when the chapter before they were at each other's throats and then they were already considering each other, but the second part seemed very natural again. Report Review
I like it.
The bickering was very realistic and I wouldn't have expected otherwise.
Good start. Report Review
I have a lot to say, since I am enamored with the pride and prejudice story.
Okay first, why is Lavender not related to Harry? Right now I don't see a reason for that, is she interested in him or something?
The way you write Ron makes him seem different, in a good way cause he usually doesn't seem that confidant, so the same person doesn't come to mind as much.
With Ginny, it's not that she's older I'm weirded out by but that she's Jane, I feel Jane has a different confidence that Ginny wouldn't have but I get it.
Hermione I think is fantastic as Elizabeth, best character mix there.
& I know Draco hasn't shown up yet, and the character mix there also makes a lot of sense, but it makes me sad cause I like Dramione fics. lol.
You have a very interesting way of writing, you seem to pull of this older story type well, but it's a little unsettling to hear about magic and all in this story :P
Btw, I gotta say I Author's Response: First of all, thank you for taking the time to review! Now on to the questions!
I decided not to make Lavender and Harry brother & sister for several reasons. The first was that I honestly just thought it would be too confusing, what with Ginny and Parvati already becoming Hermione's sisters. The second is that I, personally, have always had a little trouble believing that Charles and Caroline Bingley could have had the same parents and yet be so incredibly different, and therefore also difficulties remembering that they were brother & sister. So Lavender not becoming Harry's sister was a creative decision which I think was beneficial to the story!
Ron is definitely far from being the Ron we know, but that is, I'm afraid, necessary when trying to transform him into the dashing, but arrogant Mr Darcy. I take comfort, however, in convincing myself that Ron could have been a bit more like Mr Darcy at the same age (26 or so).
I really can't emphasize more that though Ginny has taken Jane's role, she is NOT Jane. Ginny has kept her own personnality, if not a more subdued version of it, because I really didn't want her to become the shy, modest, humble creature that is Jane Bennet, as that would make her grossly OOC. In Pride and Prejudice, Jane loses Mr Bingley because she is too shy; in this version, I have hopefully arranged things so Ginny will lose Harry because of other reasons more suitable to her own character!
As I wrote to another reviewer, I did think about making this Dramione for a short while, but then decided against it, finding it too complicated to make Harry his friend and so on. What's more, I was already writing a Dramione fic (first chapter now posted, if ever you're interested!) and wanted to try something canon :)
As for the magic in this story being unsettling... unfortunately I'm afraid that's what one gets when you cross Rowling with Austen (or at least tries to!) :)
Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm glad you thought the story interesting, even if there may be a few glitches you disliked! Report Review
Interesting turn of events.
I kinda like that Blaise isn't 100% evil unlike in all other stories usually.
Good job. Report Review
Really good, I liked it a lot.
There were a few things that were grammatically wrong, like his & her's and tenses, but overall.
The way you write is very appealing to a reader like myself. good job :D Report Review
Really nicely written.
Question, who's narrating..you? Report Review
NO WAY! Did you really dedicate this chapter to me?!?! [well I hope so, cause I couldn't be really sure, cause it was wh0a instead of w0ah...but noone else has a name similar to mine do they?]
Anways, I'm going to go on like you did dedicate to me, and if you didnt..hehe ^^
Well I'm glad I get to comment first! :D
LOVE that Oliver Wood is back, I simply loved him in the movies, very clever.
I really liked this chapter too, I like how you don't have Draco's mysterious enamoring of Hermione like so many, including myself =P, have done.
Fantastic chappie..and thanks so much!!! [ I hope, =P]Author's Response: -facepalm- Ahh! I'm sorry hun! I'll recorrect the spelling immediately. But of course I dedicated, hehe. I really couldn't decide if I wanted Oliver as the groom, but decided he would be least expected between him and Viktor. I'm glad you enjoy my Draco and Hermione, and thank you for reviewing again. =) Report Review
Really good chapter,
I thought the beginning was amazing. :)Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it Report Review
This has been edited for the content?
Wow, you successfully still got the point across very well. =P
I love Michael Buble so good choice.
Love it as usual, update soon!Author's Response: lol yeah very edited...about four times before it got validated :) hahaha...oh well :D thanks for the review hun!! glad you liked it!! and glad to find another lover of Michael Buble!! he's the best! Report Review
I would go as far as to say, I love you, in a totally rash way. :D
Sorry, I'm temporarily crazy, and I have problems, but this story just keeps getting better. Holy Crap.Author's Response: aww thanks!! *blush* I'm so glad you like it so much!! and darlin' i love ya too!! Report Review
I really liked it.
It's was wound up very nicely.
Good job.Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
VERY interesting plot.
It's also very interesting that you put it into a 1st person perspective, because the stories are usually 3rd person.
I was a little confused about the job part, was there a time lapse from when she was there last?
It was well written, except I think there were some spelling errors like 'strait' but besides that...
It's very entertaining, putting it in my faves. :]
[Is this your first review for this story? Then yay, if someone beat me, oh well =P] Report Review
I just wanted to say when I first saw what you had written, I just said "Oh my gosh" out loud. You write sooo much for each chapter, kudos. I could never do that...I don't do that lol.
I found it very interesting you didn't do what most people do in Dramione fics, they have Draco turn to the good side by joining the Order of the Phoenix, so that was interesting.
There were some spelling errors, like plain/veins/and grown, but I don't know if it's pointless telling you this since you're already on like chapter 10.
Good job. Report Review
I was shocked and delighted to see what you did with this chapter.
As amazing as this story is, I kind of expected it to go as other stories do, but you added a depth to it, I didn't expect.
It just makes the story more intriguing & developed.
Great job, update soon!Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad that it was unexpected, because predictable stories are fun sometimes, but then the unpredictable ones are much more exciting :) thank you for the kind words and the sweet review!! Report Review
Wait what? hahaha.
Isn't her cousin a muggle?
Anyways, this was really cute, I liked it.
There were some spelling and grammar errors, like stewardess and one sentence just stopped midway, and it was funny how bratty Malfoy can be sometimes. Good job, update soon!Author's Response: Hahah, yes her cousin is a muggle. I thought it would be good to actually be able to write one of those relationships where a muggle marries a witch/wizard. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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