This, unlike most Dramione fluff, actually sounds realistic. It's hard to find them these days. -insert random babbling here-
~Daniele~

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I think it needs a sequel. Leaves WAY too many questions.

Author's Response: Might I ask, what particular questions did you have? I mean that in a very curios way; as a writer it will help to know what I can work on!
Thanks for the review!

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It was a little too sugar-coated for me, and it didn't really fit the song all the way through.
-Daniele-

Author's Response: I tried to keep it true, but it didn't really work out the way i planned

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That was- too funny for words. Everyone around me is giving me weird looks because of this uncontroable laughter now. Toasters are a highly 'advanced' muggle object...
~Daniele~

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I say a triology is in order here, and I'm sure others would agree.

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I don't really see how the song goes with the story. It is almost as if the song is telling the exact opposite of the story.
~Daniele~

Author's Response: i didnt write it to be that way...but i guess the end wasnt exactly with the song...whatever...

piper

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Ooh. end our pain from the cliffhanger! It is worse than the Cruciatus Curse! (Wow, I spelled it right the first time.) A sequel is in order here...
~Daniele~

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I'm going to stop myself before I say something that will embarrass anyone...

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*stabs cliffy* Again!?

*Daniele*

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The ending was a tad sappy, but otherwise good!

~Daniele~

Author's Response: Aw, that's sweet of you... Haha, I am the queen of sap, so forgive the sapiness... Thank you for the review! :)

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That whole story went from scary to sappy like that (insert finger snapping here).
Good song choices though. I LOVE Breaking the Habit and Numb. They were on the radio SO much before. Where'd they go?

~Daniele~

Author's Response: Yeah...I suppose it did...oh well, glad you liked the songs, I'm a hge an too: )

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The begining sounds so... titanicy.

Is that even a word?

~Daniele~

Author's Response: dunno maybe

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SAD!

~Daniele~

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Sad... :(

~Daniele~

Author's Response: thnx for the comment! XD

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-Draco was COMPLETELY in character there: complete daddy's puppet prat!
-Hermione was in/out of character: she ALWAYS has to prove a point, but she fell for Draco, something she wouldn't normally do...

~Daniele~

Author's Response: Too true, but if she didn't, there wouldn't be a story =] Also, Hermione seems very forgiving character so I'd suspect if Draco chose to join the right side... I don't know. She'd be more accepting than other charaters...
Anyway, thanks for the review, you got me thinking =]

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-Song fitted story
-Draco and Hermione seemed out of character

*Daniele*

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It says the story is finished. Is there a sequel?

*Daniele*

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OK... first of all, WHAT'S WITH ALL THE LINKS!?

Second of all, the characters are VERY out of character. Well, except Ron.

*Daniele*

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They both seem a *cough* little *cough* out of character, but otherwise good. I don't think Ginny really would have kept the secret, but ran off and told the whole train, but that's my opnion.
*Daniele*

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Now I want to hear that song. This is what songfics do to me. So why do I read them? I don't know.

It was good, yet disturbing.

Nice details.

Good grammar. (Boy, that's hard to find these days...)

Holds onto interest and doesn't let go.

Shows the actual characters as pictured in the books, not twisted personalities that are oh-so different from J. K. Rowlings fabulous creations.

Oh wow do i sound like a suck-up.

*Daniele*

Author's Response: Oh do!! This song is amazing. My Chemical Romance rules!! I really would recommend a listen, and also, not to sound like a commercial, but their album is a must buy.

Thanks!! Yeah, sorry about that but it was intentional and the story wouldn't have worked otherwise. It needed that element of surprise.

Thanks so much!! :)

Oh really? Thanks again. I try so hard to make grammar right.

Cool as . . . .

Do you think so? That's cool. I thought that because it was a Dramione it would be considered really out of canon, so thanks once more.

Lol!!!

Don't worry. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Rachel

x :)



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WHAT was that? I rate -10/10. Yes, a negative.

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???
That was... Odd. WAY too quick. 1/10.

Author's Response: Oh well, you'll live. If you aint gonna say anything nice, dont say anything at all :)

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Good! Please write the next chapter!

Author's Response: IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT, CHAPTER 2 POSTED TODAY.

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Please write a sequel! The suspence is killing me!

Author's Response: I didn't really plan a sequel. I still might, since ppl are requesting it. But I don't really think it's gonna happen. Srry bout that. But thanks for the review!


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