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Review #1, by dgirl555Good Conversation and a Cup of Joe: Good Conversation and a Cup of Joe

23rd October 2007:
This, unlike most Dramione fluff, actually sounds realistic. It's hard to find them these days. -insert random babbling here-
~Daniele~

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Review #2, by dgirl555Revenge: A Plan for Revenge

30th September 2007:
I think it needs a sequel. Leaves WAY too many questions.

Author's Response: Might I ask, what particular questions did you have? I mean that in a very curios way; as a writer it will help to know what I can work on!
Thanks for the review!


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Review #3, by dgirl555:

2nd September 2007:
It was a little too sugar-coated for me, and it didn't really fit the song all the way through.
-Daniele-

Author's Response: I tried to keep it true, but it didn't really work out the way i planned

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Review #4, by dgirl555A Toaster Story: A Toaster Story

24th August 2007:
That was- too funny for words. Everyone around me is giving me weird looks because of this uncontroable laughter now. Toasters are a highly 'advanced' muggle object...
~Daniele~

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Review #5, by dgirl555Dusty Dungeons: Dusty Dungeons

24th August 2007:
I say a triology is in order here, and I'm sure others would agree.

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Review #6, by dgirl555Makes me Wonder: Makes me Wonder

1st August 2007:
I don't really see how the song goes with the story. It is almost as if the song is telling the exact opposite of the story.
~Daniele~

Author's Response: i didnt write it to be that way...but i guess the end wasnt exactly with the song...whatever...

piper


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Review #7, by dgirl555So She Dances: Fools Rush In

26th July 2007:
Ooh. end our pain from the cliffhanger! It is worse than the Cruciatus Curse! (Wow, I spelled it right the first time.) A sequel is in order here...
~Daniele~

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Review #8, by dgirl555Dracos Theme Song: Dracos Theme song

10th July 2007:
I'm going to stop myself before I say something that will embarrass anyone...

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Review #9, by dgirl555Remembrance: Slurring and Secrets

10th July 2007:
*stabs cliffy* Again!?

*Daniele*

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Review #10, by dgirl555A Wife and a Burial Site: A Wife and a Burial Site

8th July 2007:
The ending was a tad sappy, but otherwise good!

~Daniele~

Author's Response: Aw, that's sweet of you... Haha, I am the queen of sap, so forgive the sapiness... Thank you for the review! :)

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Review #11, by dgirl555Breaking the habit: My December

8th July 2007:
That whole story went from scary to sappy like that (insert finger snapping here).
Good song choices though. I LOVE Breaking the Habit and Numb. They were on the radio SO much before. Where'd they go?

~Daniele~

Author's Response: Yeah...I suppose it did...oh well, glad you liked the songs, I'm a hge an too: )

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Review #12, by dgirl555Death at Sea: Death at Sea?

8th July 2007:
The begining sounds so... titanicy.

Is that even a word?

~Daniele~

Author's Response: dunno maybe

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Review #13, by dgirl555Until I Get Over You: Until I Get Over You

8th July 2007:
SAD!

~Daniele~

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Review #14, by dgirl555Sorrowful Regret: Bitterly Painful

7th July 2007:
Sad... :(

~Daniele~

Author's Response: thnx for the comment! XD

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Review #15, by dgirl555Pretty Girl: Pretty Girl

7th July 2007:
-Draco was COMPLETELY in character there: complete daddy's puppet prat!
-Hermione was in/out of character: she ALWAYS has to prove a point, but she fell for Draco, something she wouldn't normally do...

~Daniele~

Author's Response: Too true, but if she didn't, there wouldn't be a story =] Also, Hermione seems very forgiving character so I'd suspect if Draco chose to join the right side... I don't know. She'd be more accepting than other charaters...
Anyway, thanks for the review, you got me thinking =]


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Review #16, by dgirl555The Right Kind of Wrong: The Right Kind of Wrong

7th July 2007:
-Song fitted story
-Draco and Hermione seemed out of character

*Daniele*

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Review #17, by dgirl555Revenge has never been so sweet: Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

3rd July 2007:
It says the story is finished. Is there a sequel?

*Daniele*

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Review #18, by dgirl555Revenge has never been so sweet: reason

3rd July 2007:
OK... first of all, WHAT'S WITH ALL THE LINKS!?

Second of all, the characters are VERY out of character. Well, except Ron.

*Daniele*

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Review #19, by dgirl555intoxicating scent: Stupid effin promise

3rd July 2007:
They both seem a *cough* little *cough* out of character, but otherwise good. I don't think Ginny really would have kept the secret, but ran off and told the whole train, but that's my opnion.
*Daniele*

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Review #20, by dgirl555I never told you what I do for a living: I never told you what I do for a living

3rd July 2007:
Now I want to hear that song. This is what songfics do to me. So why do I read them? I don't know.

It was good, yet disturbing.

Nice details.

Good grammar. (Boy, that's hard to find these days...)

Holds onto interest and doesn't let go.

Shows the actual characters as pictured in the books, not twisted personalities that are oh-so different from J. K. Rowlings fabulous creations.

Oh wow do i sound like a suck-up.

*Daniele*

Author's Response: Oh do!! This song is amazing. My Chemical Romance rules!! I really would recommend a listen, and also, not to sound like a commercial, but their album is a must buy.

Thanks!! Yeah, sorry about that but it was intentional and the story wouldn't have worked otherwise. It needed that element of surprise.

Thanks so much!! :)

Oh really? Thanks again. I try so hard to make grammar right.

Cool as . . . .

Do you think so? That's cool. I thought that because it was a Dramione it would be considered really out of canon, so thanks once more.

Lol!!!

Don't worry. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Rachel

x :)



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Review #21, by dgirl555Busted: Cause you busted

3rd July 2007:
WHAT was that? I rate -10/10. Yes, a negative.

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Review #22, by dgirl555The Evening.: The Evening.

18th June 2007:
???
That was... Odd. WAY too quick. 1/10.

Author's Response: Oh well, you'll live. If you aint gonna say anything nice, dont say anything at all :)

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Review #23, by dgirl555The Triumphant Return of Harry Potter: Back again...

1st June 2007:
Good! Please write the next chapter!

Author's Response: IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT, CHAPTER 2 POSTED TODAY.

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Review #24, by dgirl555In the Rain: In the Rain

1st June 2007:
Please write a sequel! The suspence is killing me!

Author's Response: I didn't really plan a sequel. I still might, since ppl are requesting it. But I don't really think it's gonna happen. Srry bout that. But thanks for the review!


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