I really liked this story.
You should continue.
I almost cried when there wasn't any more.

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your chapters are too short!
please continue

Author's Response: I know =( but the next one is a lot longer...Trust me!!! Thanks for the review

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im esited!
i forgot that i had this story...or liked it
thank you for updating

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good story, but the chapters are really short.
please continue

Author's Response: I know and I am so sorry for that. I dont know why they are so short but I will make them longer for now on. Thanks for the review

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what the hell.
thats all i have to say...
lol
to short
please continue

Author's Response: Is that 'what the hell' a good thing or bad?? LOL!! I know it was really short, sorry. Thanks for the review

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so she really is psychic than?
i was a little confused by that one.

Author's Response: Kind of, but I dont know. She gets that power, but soon it sort of goes away. I know that sounds weird and I am a little confused trying to make you not confused. LOL!!

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hm...have you read twilight?
the chapter was slightly bella/edward

Author's Response: No I have not. I am homeschooled and we havent been to the library in a long time, but when I get a chance I will. Thanks for the review

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good story, im still a little confused about it though.

Author's Response: Sorry bout that....I will try to make it less confussing

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so...im confused about the abby situation.
ishse hermione's sister or isnt she?
and does she not want to do what she's been told to do...whatever that is, or is she just playing with hermione?
like the story though
vamps are hott!
best of wishes
dawn

Author's Response: Ok, Abby is NOT Hermione's sister. She is working for the Dark Lord, but she is one of the good guys because she does NOT want to do what she was told to do. Basically she is playing with Hermione's head because she doesnt want anyone to mess up the job that she is suppost to do. I hope that clears some stuff up for you. I am very sorry that you got confused. I am glad that you liked my story though. LOL!! In later chapters I will try to make it a little clearer.

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awe, that was a really cute chapter, but are they going out or arent they?

best wishes
Dawn Elizabeth

Author's Response: It depends on the way you look at it. But you have to wait for later chapters to see. Thanks for reviewing

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interesting twist
please continue writing, i cant wait!
best wishes
Dawn Elizabeth

Author's Response: I will continue writing, I am so glad you like it!!!

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so.this is really interesting
keep writing. please

Author's Response: I will keep writing the story! I am glad you think it is 'interesting'

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i love this story
i might have typed you this beforem,i dont remember
but yeah, please continue

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this is a vey good story, but isnt rafael working for voldemort?

Author's Response: Yeah, Rafael is working for Voldemort. Thanks for reviewing

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like the story
some gramar errors, but over all, its very good
please continue!

Author's Response: thankyhu.

Nd thankyhu for pointin that out, might re-read it, really checking for grammer and that.

Will continue thanks again xx

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good begining, please continue

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wow, really enjoy this story.
loves

Author's Response: thank you...

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.wow.yeah, thats it, lol

Author's Response: haha

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i like your story, but poor draco.

Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for reviewing

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oooh.
i like this
please continue

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!!

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good story
great story line
please update soon!

Author's Response: Hmm...I think I just might start writing the next one...its just that this one was such a long one (4,747 words) that it really wore me out. Also since i am a college student, i have a really big essay due tomorrow so i should start writing that too. Thanks for a great review though!

~bimah

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wow
i like this.but what about harry?


Author's Response: Hermione didnt want to risk her friendship with Ginny over a guy, thanks for reviewing!!!!

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omg
i cant belive this!
\so good
love love love

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks, hopefully you'll love the next one just as much *winks* Thanks for a great review!
~bimah

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omg.
this is so amazing, im so excited!
love this story!

Author's Response: thanks

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i really enjoy htis story.one question though.when is hermione going to find out abput hte dark mark?

Author's Response: just wait and see, love...

~Linnéa

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