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Review #1, by darsyniaBlack Goodbye: Black Goodbye

2nd June 2007:
I really liked this--you didn't leave anything out for Sirius--his brother, his father, his mother (of course... and the 'lump' description was perfect), and even his disgust at the house!

What I particularly liked was the way Sirius's behavior, tone, and language changed when he showed up at the Potters. He becomes more insolent (but in a relaxed, adorable way), more loose, more sarcastic--more Sirius.

Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I really appreciate you reading this as it isn't one of my favorites and I always hated my marauder fanfics, but your kind words make me think twice! thank you!

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Review #2, by darsyniaProfanity Tutorial: Mature: Mature Profanity Tutorial

29th May 2007:
I really appreciate the addition of what is generally never allowed here--it's incredibly helpful to know!

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Review #3, by darsyniaProfanity Tutorial: 12+: 12+ Profanity Tutorial

29th May 2007:
Thank you for this, it's very helpful!

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