I really enjoyed your first chapter, I know its not your usual thing to write non-canon, but I really loved it, brillient, I can't wait for your next chapter. 10/10
Jem :)Author's Response: Thank you, Jem. The next chapter is currently in the queue. I can't wait, maybe more people will read it then. Chat soon!!!
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Im really enjoying your story, Ive never really read anything like it, but i saw your wonderful banner and summery and couldent resist a quick look, I was enjoying it so much I just had to read all 9 chapters and I cant wait to read your next.
hope you update soon.
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I absolutely loved it, thank you so much, it was beautifully written as always, my favourite part has got to be the vows they made to one another. I’m a huge fan of all your stories, you write romance so well and always manage to fill them with so much love and emotion (you know how much of a hopeless romantic I am) Thanks again
Hugs GemmaAuthor's Response: Hi Jem,
thank you for reading your dedicated story. I'm really glad you liked it. Now you know where those questions from all those months ago came from. I can't wait for the 2nd chapter of WL. I'm working on mine (it should be the next one I post) You are very welcome.
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well I finally got round to leaving you a review even though Ive read this like 3 times now :) its just so beautiful and definatly one of my favorites of your storys, I just love the ending were Harrys reunited with everyone, I hope you write more song-fics as your really good with them.
keep up the good work, hugs JemAuthor's Response: Hi Jem,
thank you for the beautiful review and banner for this story. I should have another story up once the queue re-opens. I have a couple of song-fics lined up but need to sit down and take the time to think (they aren't easy). chat soon.
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That was beautifully written and is a wonderful tribute to the Knox family, I especialy like your last paragraph where Harry finds the words to say to the Belby family. There are a few typos (sorry i feel terrible pointing that out) but i think all in all it is really, really good, and a wonderful thing to do.Author's Response: I'm really please that you enjoyed this. Now, if you remember the typos, please do let me know so that I can fix them. If not, I'll just try to re-read it and see if I can spot them myself.
Thanks so much! x Report Review
Hi That was a really lovely chapter. I love that Harry has his own card and I loved all the attention to detail you added that sometimes can be skimmed over. let me know when your next chapter is up as I cant wait
cheers Dormiens :)Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
Hi, I really liked how they met, great chapter cant wait to see what happens next :)
DormiensAuthor's Response: hey hunny! good to hear from you again! thank you very much for the review! i hope you won't be disappointed by the next! :) Report Review
Hi cant wait for your next chapter. I loved the frilly knickers part, brilliant :)
keep up the great work DormiensAuthor's Response: thanx for reviewing! xx Report Review
Hi, great chapter, I think my faverioute pair are Rosaline and Remus but then again I like Jenna andd Sirius, i cant wait to see if she gets her own back on him:) great read cant wait for your next
cheers DormiensAuthor's Response: Personally, I think she's injured him quite enough don't you? I'm so glad you like Rose and Remus! You are going to love the next couple of chapters when it comes to them. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
another wonderful story you really can write romance beautifully. I loved it even though the end was soo sad the last few lines were really well written, even though I knew it was coming I still felt really emotional
JemAuthor's Response: Hey Jem,
thanks for the review. I, myself, was actually a little emotional at the end of the story while writing it. I've worked endlessly on getting emotion into romance and tying them together (thats the hardest thing I've had to do with my Dramione fic). Thanks again. Chat soon.
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Hi, i really enjoyed your first chapter cant wait to see where your story goes, it sounds really interesting cant wait for your next chapter
Dormiens :)Author's Response: thanx for reviewing, next chapter is just waiting for validation.x Report Review
Hi, another great chapter cant wait to read more,
update soon Dormiens :)Author's Response: Thank You! I will try to update it A.S.A.P! Report Review
Hi, I really enjoyed your first chapter, I like the way its going so far.
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Hi, I really loved it, you should be proud of it, I think you have really captured Ron and Hermione's love and tenderness for each other 10/10 JemAuthor's Response: Hey Jem,
thanks for reading. I'll chat with you soon.
Ash Report Review
Wow!! I loved it, that was the first time ive ever read a song fic and i really enjoyed it, I hope you write more:)Author's Response: thanks!! I've had requests that i make it into a longer story. I'm thinking about it but I have a lot of stories i'm writing right now and a completely unrelated one. I do have more song fics so... i hope to put them on here tomorrow since the queue opens then. Report Review
I really enjoyed reading, it was short but i liked plot, the begining part with Harry and his friend at the park was good and i enjoyed that the most i thought the part when Harry does magic was well writen you could really imagine that happening when Harry was younger, i think you could definatly do more with this plot and your characters.
keep up the good work Dormiens :)Author's Response: thanks for reading, Jem. Yeah, i need to work on characters and plot, that's always been my weakest point. I might have a short sequel to this, during Harry and Ginny's wedding with Marshall there like Harry promised. I'm still thinking on it but there is a good chance I will. Thanks for reading!
chat soon. Report Review
I really enjoyed reading, I like the way your not rushing your fic and pushing Draco and Hermione together right away (even though i cant wait for them to meet up lol) its nice to get a bit of background info first cant wait for your next, keep up the good work
Dormiens :)Author's Response: Hey dormiens! Good to see you again!
Thank you for noticing that I'm not rushing them into bed right away. It does annoy me a bit when they're enemies and suddenly they jump on each other...makes no sense. Thanks for the review too! Aaand the banner! Tee Hee. I have another story I'm working on that I may ask you for another banner from you...cuz you rock at it! Report Review
Another Great chapter, I thought that was a lovely
romantic ending to your story and I enjoyed reading it, you write Harry and Ginny really well, only one small critasism, I would of liked it a bit longer with a few more chapters.
keep up the good work
Dormiens :)Author's Response: Thanks. I've tried really hard to capture the characters Rowling left us with. I'm working on a few songfics too. Yeah, I'm working on making my chapters longer and making more of them. Thanks again. Report Review
I really enjoyed that chappie, your right it did move a little bit fast but it was still really good, I loved the end part where they finally get back together and he proposes with the same ring she's carried around for years (so romantic). cant wait for your next
Dormiens :)Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I had Harry propose with the same ring she's been carrying around to kind of bring the whole story full circle. I'll be posting Chapter 4 today so, I'll email you when it's up. Talk to you soon.
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Hi, Im really enjoying so far and cant wait to see what happens next. please update soon
Dormiens :)Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Chapter 3 should be up soon. I'll keep you updated.
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loved this chapter, Im really glad your storys back up as its one of my faves cant wait to read what happens next,
Dormiens :)Author's Response: aw, so good to hear from you again! everyone, this is the lovely person who made my banner and my siggy on the forums! yes, incredible! haha, yeah i'll update soon! thanks! Report Review
Definatly naughty, i thought for sure Ron was gonna walk in on them at the begining but will Harry spill the beans to Ron? , and what happens when everyone finds about them? and whats gonna happen at the christening? ah so meny questions lol im loving it so far cant wait to see what happens next update soon plz
Dormiens :)Author's Response: Making it ron at the beginning would have made it to easy for them. as for all your other questions I can't tell you cause if I did then i would have to kill you and that is not fair on you so you will have to wait and see.
I really enjoyed it, I love a good H/G romance.
Dormiens :)Author's Response: Hey Jem,
Thanks again for the beautiful banner. I'm really glad you liked it. Report Review
hi there, me again, if you have problems getting me on the forums just send me a message at firstname.lastname@example.org and we can sort out the banner
dormiens :)Author's Response: I'll email you. That would be easier for me as well. Report Review
hi there, me again im a bit new to this whole thing aswell so the only way i can think of getting the banner to you is if u give me your pen name on the forums so i can contact u instead sorry im not being more helpfull but im new at the whole banner thing aswell lol, if you have an account on the forums that is, if not im not quite sure how to get the banner to u other than sending email or msn but its safer to do it through the forums as u dont have to give out details, but anyway i really liked this fic aswell i enjoy your style of writing.
dormiens :)Author's Response: ok. Chapter 4 should be up soon. Report Review
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