i think i love you
i laughed, i cried, and then i had a vision:
we should skip through a field of clover at sunset someplace picturesque, while the violins saw themselves into oblivion in the background.
or you could check out one of my stories, and tell me with your cliche-detecting skillz (yes, with a z) just how cheese-fest it actually is.
you game?Author's Response: HELL YES!!
This has to rank under the top five favorite reviews like ever, man. I'm up for both of your offers. But you gotta read MY sequal to this when it comes out (I'm about to put it through the validation shiz). PREPARE THYSELF! Report Review
i really like this idea; it reminds me of those trippy psychological-thriller tv shows from the 60's. in the best possible way. you should check out "the prisoner" if you get time; it really reminds me of your story.
check out my stories (re-memo, and regardez astor) if you have time, please? Report Review
YAY it's back! and it's brilliant as always! yay!Author's Response: I know its been forever! Next chapter ALMOST DONE! Report Review
put up some more!
it's interesting, and you write really well!
also, anyone who references R.E.M. and not Hannah Montana is a friend of mine.
Charlie xo Report Review
I LOVE THIS!Author's Response: great! Report Review
you couldn't leave us with a cliffhanger?!
the suspense is KILLING ME!
i love this story! it makes my day to get home from work and see some new chapters up.
ps-the unicorn patronus was a nice touch. :) Report Review
your dialogue is amazing, and you make all the characters so much more nuanced than jkr did in dh. (i had so many issues with that book, the least of which being that i am a draco/hermione girl. good thing your story solved all my problems!)
please write more!
ps- i love how hermione doesn't lose her wits completely, the way she does in some stories. props!Author's Response: Thank you so much! And heavens no, Hermione certainly doesn't lose her wits. I like to keep the smart ones smart! She does act extremely Gryffindor, though... Report Review
it just keeps getting better and better. i'm hooked! Report Review
please write more!
this is so much better than HPDH! Report Review
please please please write more!Author's Response: I'm working on it ;)
But while you're waiting, you should check out my new story! Should be validated in a few days. Report Review
i really like this.Author's Response: Glad you do... Report Review
PLEASE WRITE MORE
i'm addictedAuthor's Response: I just finished writing a one-shot, but now I can focus on this story. I'll write as fast as I can! Promise to submit chapter sometime this week or next. Report Review
i really like this! write more, please!
check out my story, re-memo, if you get a chance, too!
c dollmaekerAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'll do it as soon as I get the chance, right now I'm doing Bio h/w and eating a chicken salad...so my hands are a little tied....=p Report Review
her name is charlotte! me too! and it's so good!
-c.dollmaeker Report Review
whoa. that was intense, for lack of a better word. i love it. please, please, please write more!
or check out re-memo; it'd be awesome to hear what you think. (Seeing as yours is phenomenally good, maybe I could learn something) Report Review
you, your fabulously acerbic draco, and generally better-than-hpdh story are all brilliant. all of you! please write more! best one yet!
xx charlie Report Review
whoa! i like this a lot! never have draco and hermione been so.hot. write more!Author's Response: never been so hot? lol. well, thank you ^_^ i'm pleased you are enjoying it xD Report Review
so, so, so awesome! it's definitely better than the seventh book; your characters are people, not just ideals with bad dialogue. i love! Report Review
i love it! so atmospheric! so romantic! so not-cheesy (or at least, not in a bad way!) write more, please!Author's Response: Thank you! I've added your story to my to-read list, because I think you asked me awhile ago to read it. I think... I can't really remember. But it's a long list, so it'll take a bit. Report Review
oh, i like!Author's Response: Thank you =] Report Review
i owe you so much right now; without your fantastic banner, nobody would read my story. and yours is so good!Author's Response: Awwwwww(:
Well you're very welcome my darling, I don't like stories that I like never getting noticed.
I probably never would have seen yours if you hadn't asked me to read it.
Which is lame because it's good(:
Oh and thank you, it took FOREVER to make my banner (:
xx missy Report Review
i love your story so so so much. your dialogue is so spot-on; i'm totally jealous. i'm hooked!
check out re-memo, my story, if you can
charlie Report Review
intriguing. i can't wait to read more. Report Review
i don't know what you think is wrong with the chapters so far -they're really short, but that's not a problem at all. you're so good at writing this incredibly vague style, which i am so incredibly jealous of. if i could do "vague" instead of "neurotic" maybe i'd write half as well as you do.
check out my story, re-memo, when you get the chance, though. it'd be awesome to hear your say. (there are admittedly, many things wrong with it, but it might be amusing...maybe?)Author's Response: Thank you! They do get more and more detailed the deeper down the rabbit hole you go, but it's not until you've already drank the "Shrink me" potion that they really get into detail.
Thank you so much for your reviews, I'll look at your story soon! Report Review
THIS IS AMAZING!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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